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Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

I'll take a look at your port and give you my 2¢ :-)

Apr 01 08 04:14 pm Link

Model

Alex Davenport

Posts: 10215

Spokane, Missouri, US

I like opinions.

Apr 01 08 04:14 pm Link

Model

Krystal in California

Posts: 108

Napa, California, US

Me please

Apr 01 08 04:15 pm Link

Model

still i rise89

Posts: 297

London, England, United Kingdom

do i have potentaul for catwalk modelling

Apr 01 08 04:15 pm Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

I would like to hear what you think.

Thank you.

Apr 01 08 04:16 pm Link

Model

Emilia T

Posts: 91

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

sure smile

Apr 01 08 04:19 pm Link

Model

ErikaMODELSands

Posts: 242

Commack, New York, US

me plz!

Apr 01 08 04:19 pm Link

Photographer

FischerFineArt

Posts: 26

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Sure thing

Apr 01 08 04:19 pm Link

Photographer

Eros Artist Photography

Posts: 1562

Solomons, Maryland, US

Go for it...

Apr 01 08 04:20 pm Link

Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

Alex Davenport wrote:
I like opinions.

I really like your port, there aren't any truly real weak images in my opinion except the skateboard one...doesn't really do much for me. But here's the thing, you've got an outstanding body and you show that well BUT you've also got very pretty brown eyes, I see that the most on your About Me pic where you're flexing your muscles...try and get a really good tight headshot to showcase your gorrrrrrgeous eyes :-)

Apr 01 08 04:27 pm Link

Photographer

Erick Anthony Photo

Posts: 918

Murrieta, California, US

would love to know. smile

Apr 01 08 04:28 pm Link

Model

Alex Davenport

Posts: 10215

Spokane, Missouri, US

Porter Photography wrote:

I really like your port, there aren't any truly real weak images in my opinion except the skateboard one...doesn't really do much for me. But here's the thing, you've got an outstanding body and you show that well BUT you've also got very pretty brown eyes, I see that the most on your About Me pic where you're flexing your muscles...try and get a really good tight headshot to showcase your gorrrrrrgeous eyes :-)

Thanks. I actually just spoke with a photographer today that I am going to shoot some beauty shots/ headshots with.

smile

Apr 01 08 04:28 pm Link

Photographer

YoungPhoto

Posts: 77

Rayne, Louisiana, US

sure

Apr 01 08 04:30 pm Link

Photographer

PENTOGRAPHY

Posts: 671

Jersey City, New Jersey, US

over there .. umm here

Apr 01 08 04:36 pm Link

Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

Keeva wrote:
Me please

Hi Keeva, there are only 2 images that really grab me and the rest I won't remember after I close your port. My first pic would be the one where it looks like you're sitting on the floor by a bed with the whte shirt. I like that because it's natural and shows me what you really look like. The other is the one where your thumbs are in your bikini bottoms, that's a little edgy and I like that your hair isn't all picture perfect. Keep working with different photographers though...so far Joon is the only one of your photographers that I'd shoot with again.

Apr 01 08 04:41 pm Link

Model

Sha-Kee-Lah

Posts: 231

Brandon, Florida, US

yep..in smile

Apr 01 08 04:41 pm Link

Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

priscilla18 wrote:
do i have potentaul for catwalk modelling

I haven't got a clue if you have potential for catwalk modelling, I'd actually have to see you walk. The first 4 shots in your port I'd yank as quickly as possible though, especially the first 3. If you want to catwalk model then get dressed up and have a photographer shoot you while walking, just like you're on a runway, that way you'll have images that portray where you want to be.

Apr 01 08 04:45 pm Link

Model

Brittany Lynn Modeling

Posts: 155

Birmingham, Alabama, US

take a look at my port.

Apr 01 08 04:49 pm Link

Model

EmilyC

Posts: 248

Sure!

Apr 01 08 04:50 pm Link

Photographer

Laura Ann Photography

Posts: 17921

Peoria, Arizona, US

Yes please

Apr 01 08 04:50 pm Link

Model

Jay Stone

Posts: 223

why not!

Apr 01 08 04:51 pm Link

Model

ModelMayhem29

Posts: 2603

New York, New York, US

ok

Apr 01 08 04:51 pm Link

Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
I would like to hear what you think.

Thank you.

Well, my first impression is that your models are too 'posed' looking, like the first 10 shots, I do like the girl in the white shorts with the long socks though. Even though you include alot of the background it's not cluttered or distracting, which is a good thing. The other thing I'd mention is that I don't know what the models look like, it seems like more of a fashion shoot to showcase clothes rather than the models features, etc. so be careful if this is for their portfolio, you want to make sure and capture the beauty and emotion of the models so that the images are memorable.

Apr 01 08 04:52 pm Link

Model

Angela Makeever

Posts: 134

Columbus, Georgia, US

yes please, and thank you.  smile

Apr 01 08 04:52 pm Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

Porter Photography wrote:

Well, my first impression is that your models are too 'posed' looking, like the first 10 shots, I do like the girl in the white shorts with the long socks though. Even though you include alot of the background it's not cluttered or distracting, which is a good thing. The other thing I'd mention is that I don't know what the models look like, it seems like more of a fashion shoot to showcase clothes rather than the models features, etc. so be careful if this is for their portfolio, you want to make sure and capture the beauty and emotion of the models so that the images are memorable.

Your right, most of the shots in my portfolio were for a fashion designer not modelling portfolios.
Thank you for your input.

Apr 01 08 04:54 pm Link

Model

Krystal in California

Posts: 108

Napa, California, US

Thank you smile

Apr 01 08 04:56 pm Link

Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

Emilia T wrote:
sure smile

Hi Emelia...well, let's just say I really like your port because:
1. I can actually see what you look like
2. You have a good mix of studio and location shoots
3. You're not posing yourself to death
4. The variety of pics that you have allows me to envision shooting you in almost any environment and makes me feel comfortable that I can get the shot.

So....at 16...you're quite elegant and well on your way :-)

Apr 01 08 05:04 pm Link

Model

Angela Lauren

Posts: 539

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

yes please smile

Apr 01 08 05:06 pm Link

Photographer

NCISTUDIOS

Posts: 1165

Ripon, California, US

Porter Photography wrote:
I'll take a look at your port and give you my 2¢ :-)

do mine!

Apr 01 08 05:07 pm Link

Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

Erika Sands wrote:
me plz!

Hi Erika...hmmmm....the last pic is the best by faaaaar because your hair looks great and your eyes look very pretty. The first two I'd yank in a second because they look like computer generated composites rather than a photo. I think that, especially since you're now Ms NY Tourism...you should hurry back the the photographer who took that last pic (Alexandre Saveliev), get a budget from NY Tourism and have him redo your port. The rest of the images you should replace as quickly as possible because they aren't up to your potential.

Apr 01 08 05:11 pm Link

Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

FischerFineArt wrote:
Sure thing

Well the first thing I noticed is that in 75% of your pics the models aren't looking into the camera, not sure why that hit me but I like to look into the eyes to connect. I think you need to work your angles and control your depth of field more and engage the models. My eyes don't really stick on any of the pics, they just bounce around from one to the other so I guess I'd say that everything has to be tighter, even most of the model's wardrobes are bland....hmmmm...

Apr 01 08 05:20 pm Link

Photographer

The Big ShotPhotography

Posts: 387

New London, Connecticut, US

Porter Photography wrote:
I'll take a look at your port and give you my 2¢ :-)

Im game, lets hear what ya think.
Ron.

Apr 01 08 05:21 pm Link

Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

B Ballard Photography wrote:
Go for it...

You've got 2 poses in your port that made me stop and look but the rest I skimmed over. My opinion on nudes is that strictly a studio look is unappealing. I prefer nudes that are warm, in a natural environment and sensual but I appreciate your study in light and form.

Apr 01 08 05:24 pm Link

Model

livethedream

Posts: 25

Binghamton, New York, US

Me please!!!! I'd really like to know what you think!!!


Thank you!!! smile

Apr 01 08 05:26 pm Link

Photographer

A-M-P

Posts: 18465

Orlando, Florida, US

Ok go ahead

Apr 01 08 05:26 pm Link

Photographer

GPhotography

Posts: 133

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada

Erick Kush Photography wrote:
would love to know. smile

Nice models...nothing trashy...excellent variety...crisp images...good colours...uncluttered compositons...nothing to complain about...keep doing your thing!

Apr 01 08 05:27 pm Link

Model

MsKate

Posts: 358

Hamilton, Ontario, Canada

i'm in!

Apr 01 08 05:27 pm Link

Photographer

jdyez

Posts: 48

Arlington, Virginia, US

OK, take a gander and give a reaction.

Apr 01 08 05:30 pm Link

Model

Shabay

Posts: 1139

West Hollywood, California, US

sounds good!

Apr 01 08 05:31 pm Link

Photographer

Chanel Rene

Posts: 6780

Huntington Beach, California, US

I'm game!

Apr 01 08 05:31 pm Link