Little Mousie wrote:
me too plz

OK Mousie I checked your port.
Your beauty is a jaw dropper.
Love your generous curves, and you are hot
especially on this one
This  one is my fav listed
You may use perhaps more looks in your port as some of the photos are  redundant.
You would do great as lifestyle pinup and lingerie model.

SKE Photography wrote:
I would like to know your thoughts.

You say in your port you do photography as a hobby and I must say you do it well.
Many gorgeous outdoor pics
It is time for you to get some soft boxes and try some indoor boudoirs
artistic portraits.
I love this one a lotlisted

varton wrote:

OK Mousie I checked your port.
Your beauty is a jaw dropper.
Love your generous curves, and you are hot
especially on this one
This  one is my fav listed
You may use perhaps more looks in your port as some of the photos are  redundant.
You would do great as lifestyle pinup and lingerie model.

thank u !!! yes im working on adding new looks .. muahz!! ty ur the best!

winking_wonder wrote:
And from mine?

Hi,
I find your look cute in some photos and hot in some others depending on how much you are revealing. You have to pay attention to your angles like you did in this one.

This is the best photo I like so far even if I find your smile overly complacent. Keep things simple. You need to cherry pick photographers that know what they are doing. Do not put any unedited ( a la naturale ) photos on your port. Wear padded bra when you photograph to enhance your figure to compensate for your thick waist, which is very obvious in some photos. Now pantyhosed beauty boudoir style is very sexy just the way you posed (I am being biased here I know )but a lot of things are missing here. You need a light scheme to create a mood. You have to control your face expression to make sure you mean "business" and you have to pick contrasting lingerie or clothing items to paint an attractive scene.

I am unable to list any photos at this time but, I know you can do better.
You should add corseted diva style looks to really show how you can be transformed from girl next door to a stunning hosed and heeled babe.
Keep it up. All my best.

FotoMark wrote:
I'm interested.

You are a good thog with sense of humor

I listed this one already, love the vintage vibe.
THis one is my favorite.
Great job. You are flexible and know what you are doing

varton wrote:

Hi,
I find your look cute in some photos and hot in some others depending on how much you are revealing. You have to pay attention to your angles like you did in this one.

This is the best photo I like so far even if I find your smile overly complacent. Keep things simple. You need to cherry pick photographers that know what they are doing. Do not put any unedited ( a la naturale ) photos on your port. Wear padded bra when you photograph to enhance your figure to compensate for your thick waist, which is very obvious in some photos. Now pantyhosed beauty boudoir style is very sexy just the way you posed (I am being biased here I know )but a lot of things are missing here. You need a light scheme to create a mood. You have to control your face expression to make sure you mean "business" and you have to pick contrasting lingerie or clothing items to paint an attractive scene.

I am unable to list any photos at this time but, I know you can do better.
You should add corseted diva style looks to really show how you can be transformed from girl next door to a stunning hosed and heeled babe.
Keep it up. All my best.

Thank you so much for all your comments and advice!

h-e-a-t-h-e-r wrote:
thought i responded to this but can't find it so...i'd love to know

no I don't think I saw your reply to topic before
so let me get it out of the way now
You have a gorgeous look
My favorite picture is this listed.
Great style and eye contact.
Beautiful port. I would suggest that you add lingerie swimsuit and glamor shots to your port
L@@ks so far great!

Nicholas DeLisi wrote:
My port is young yet, but I'd live to know.

This one was an eye catcher, quality shot with great contrast that shows well your muscles and beautiful 6 pack.

listed

Rebecca Elizabeth Gomez wrote:
Hey!

What about me?

Thanks!

I replied few pages ago
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15240448

Marlinde wrote:
I'll play!

Marlinde, you are beautiful but you appear very pale in photos.
I would add some more looks especially colorful fashion, urban and lifestyle shots
that would look great with your blonde hair and gorgeous figure. All your poses are done with white outfits except 1 and that's listed.
love your hair and posture here
Keep it up you are stunning

Rachel Louise Jones wrote:
Yes please

Rachel
your port is exactly what I like to see, colors style and attitude!
WOW
great job
I listed the one below, my fav.
that's what happens when you work with pros
drop dead gorgeous!
In this one I am not so much crazy about the pose but the outfit and make up is very original and appealing.

Maximilian Studios wrote:
I'm down!!

Max, I love your outdoor, on location shoots.
I would add some studio shots for completness
My congrats for this onelisted, I loved it!
This one is a masterpiece, in light and pose, listed.
and this is so good and fun
Keep clicking, terrific job.

Tandy Lindsay wrote:
Would love to have your input! Thank you very much

Tandy you need to find a good photographer like yesterday!
get rid of  everything else except those here below
My Fav listed great nice colors

You are beautiful but the port really need a fresh coat of paint and more.
keep it up.

Russ Turner Photography wrote:
Please! (and thank you.)

Russ you are excellent, I am happy you shot some real nylons here,
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22417618
but I really dislike the nipple covers, I don't care how cute they are they mess up  the photo and your message. I rather have you see shot her with a blouse on.
Anyway I know I am very sensitive to those things and maybe I shouldn't be
Let's go on.
this makes me wow
I always loved steampunk and bizarre shots but never did it because I have no market for it. Love it it was a crime to cut off at the thighs - listed
This is your best and I mean it, and listed.
You have few photos that really you don't need in your port as do not add much. Your work speaks for itself
Keep clicking, fantastic job man.

Lenore Nevermore wrote:
Me please?

Oh Lenore Lenore
I am speechless
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22705692 listed +18
great oh la la pose love it but I would rather see you skip the fishnets in this one unless you want to reflect the folies bergere show girl look
In this one below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22705837 +18

your pose in conjunction with lighting gives great mood but makes you look pear shape
in this one I don't like your eye contact photography is supposed to be fun and the way you hold the camera suggest you weren't coached well for this pose
Some other bw photos you have got are a bit too light for my taste.
You may do some spring cleanup and add more looks to your port.
All my best to you.

Bob Roth wrote:
Too interesting a subject not to find out your opinion.

This one strikes me as your best it is picturesque and almost like an oil painting.
I like this model a lot I will give out cookies as a prize if anyone can tell me why
I love your sun sets https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22106767 +18 listed
Love this listed. It is a nice pinup,
it complies with the golden rule my mentor thought me 30 years ago:
"If it can give a smile and a hard on at the same time, you did it son!"
I love your port, keep clicking.

coendeheer wrote:
if you still have time... i'm in

Well well
You nailed this one on the head;) listed
You have great potential , You have some dramatic lighting and flat lighting overall in studio portrait work There is no harm to add outdoor shots to show your flexibility other then boring seamless paper portraits. Capture beauty where they live, in the nature

SNH Photography  wrote:
I'll play...gulp!

ok I will be gentle
wait, I love what you got.
here we go listed
LOL listed
NOPE black fishnets makes her look cheap. To contrast with the boot and burgundy chair you should have used light pink or off white nylons, preferably patterned lace.
This one has nice post processing and high contrast, love it

Nori Zay wrote:
Me?

Nori, you look super,
This one is listed
and I love this as well as concept but not the pose,
This is a good seller for jobs listed
Gorgeous job
Excellent posing and outfit here
Kudos to all involved, love your port.