Lala Fiz Photography wrote:
Would love to know.

You have some nice pictures in your port but unless you remove some of the weaker ones you may not be able to attract paying clients.
I understand per your profile you started shooting for friends and family and let me tell you it is the right way to polish skills.
Your best is this amazing sun set , listed
lighting is great on this one

and removing those will not be a big loss for various reasons
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23112436 (light is dark and flat, looks more like a snapshot from a throw away camera)
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23148774 (she is showing the ring but she looks a bit funny and perspective is not flattering her- always avoid wide angles with "big" people.
her face is burned, lifeless expression, she looks shorter then reality from this angle and shoes are cropped.
this would be excellent if
1-photosop out the dude at the right side in the back.
2-crankup the contrast to make the shadows and highlights to stand out.

as a general remarque I can tell you that a strict minimum photoshop skills are required in this day an age. You can save a lot of pictures in your port if you could give a try.
for instance this is too yellow for me, it is a very cute catch.
Again just like fat subjects never come this close to short subjects because your wide angle lens will deform the head and shorten the body from this angle.
you show some promises, keep clicking.

gery edra wrote:
please, I would like to know my best and worst and why...thanks

Great work overall, and you certainly know how to shoot nylons as witnessed here listed. Great job, beautiful lighting and sharp focus needed to see timeless shimmer and beauty of those nylon clad legs, the details of expensive lingerie, not to mention the stunning model selection.
This is your second best stunning eyes and styling.
light appear a bit flat in your outdoor shoot .
but colors are well saturated, great contrast, gorgeous backgrounds and well posed pictures like this in general.
Keep it up
you are doing great. keep clicking.

Niece Waidhofer wrote:
Me, please?

Ok another drop dead gorgeous model, love your port.
you have 2 eye catching thumbs jumping out immediately even if they are at the bottom.
first one is this but don't like your eyebrows and
second one I like the best  nice style and look. listed
This is your best and I usually do not like fake or doped photos, but I love this post work as it looks like a painting. Kudos to all involved.
I find your posing very professional and regardless of what you pose for you look great. All your angles are good and you would make any photographer shine.
all my best and good luck

Jeneva Jones wrote:
Lets hear it.

Well I love your proportions and how classy you look even in your risqué poses and outfits.
I like also your straightforward attitude and humble expression on your profile
quoting you "Don't let my "sexy" photos fool you. I am quite the goofy person, borderline dorky"
Actually I find that goofy/dorky people I worked with, can be better and sexier posers, because they can be molded much easier to a given concept then a seasoned "I know it all" kind of personality.
I love your confidence in this but the photo does not do justice to your beauty, it is not sharp enough, the light is a bit flat and the chair and the location makes this shot a “so so”.
Your best look is this even if I am unable to list because the cropping is a bit tight and the background is almost as busy and almost same color tones as your hair.
I am not so crazy about this don’t like the post work.
On some BW photos like this 
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19363536 shadows make your tummy bigger then actual (as your left side blends in with the background).
this is much better
This is my fav and very cute look love the face expression and make up, listed.
Because of your generous proportions, you can do two things, either hide behind dull colored outfits or take a “to your face” attitude and pose in flashy colors, which I would prefer.
You are a beautiful woman and you know it. I wish the thogs you worked with knew as well, because I don’t see evidence of that except in few shots.
Your features are underutilized in your port.
Keep shooting, you are gorgeous.

The Power of Beauty wrote:
Haven't been on for a while, but would love your feedback!

I don't like to critique retouchers much, retouching is an art in its own. I will tell you this much retouching and altering photos for me are 2 different things.
Copy paste layering scenes is not retouching, making pimples disappear is retouching.
I like to keep things simple and I don't like much doped, color shifted photos where at some  point they become so fake that it bothers me to look at them.
You have only 6 pictures in your port, they are all cool.
This is one of your best work
the model looks unnatural in this, her glance is also flawed and the water base line on the ship is way off meaning too low left side wave disappeared and the base line is perfectly horizontal and unnatural.
Since no shadow of the ship is cast on the water it looks very fake. The outfit of the model is also a long stretch to match that era.
in this the retouched version lost hair details
this one is your second best is really beautiful
keep it up, obvious skills but I don't see MM's very experienced category warranting as your skill tag on the profile.

varton wrote:

Great work overall, and you certainly know how to shoot nylons as witnessed here listed. Great job, beautiful lighting and sharp focus needed to see timeless shimmer and beauty of those nylon clad legs, the details of expensive lingerie, not to mention the stunning model selection.
This is your second best stunning eyes and styling.
light appear a bit flat in your outdoor shoot .
but colors are well saturated, great contrast, gorgeous backgrounds and well posed pictures like this in general.
Keep it up
you are doing great. keep clicking.

Thank you very much...

Stylemasters wrote:
don't beat me up too bad!

I love your work and style,
this is very sexy
One of your best and my fav
you have great talent.

Christie_R wrote:
Please I'm curious!

Very gorgeous look, great job Christine.
Love this but upon close inspection I find it a bit out of focus. Your cheeks lack contrast and washed out. It is definitely out of focus where it needed to be because your hair on your shoulder is much sharper then your eyes. Blur on the earring is obvious.
nice color on this but make up is meh for me:) Nail polish stands out better.
This fashion shot is a miss. It is shot in a residential area and the gate in the back is ugly. The sun glare mess up the detail of your make up and outfit, it is a distraction and causes your features (like earrings) to wash out. (deleting  would not be a big loss)
I like your natural look here
Your best is listed
I see many missed opportunities in your fashion shots, not your fault.
You may want also add some more urban/ country commercial looks

CJ Photography - LR wrote:
Love to get your thoughts!

I understand you are doing photography as a hobby. Which is fine, I saw some hobbyists doing lot better then pros before.
Well it will take you some time to get there.
You need to work on your lighting.
I like this a lot, you really took advantage of her ink to come out through the classic dress and perhaps playing with photoshop might improve it in a contrast level I like to see.
Great model selection I love her however color saturation and flat illumination makes this photo look darker.
The foreground subject's flesh tones mixes with the background, but I commend you on your framing those gorgeous curves, excellent angle and cropping.
I find this cute and an excellent concept, not seen elsewhere much.
Keep up the good job. Experiment on indoor shoots as well

Flesh  Odium wrote:
Sure. :>

Hmm Canadian Alt model, I like your look. You can be cast from cute (listed) to horrific wow I just had goose bumps. another one here https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20428461
I am surprised you don't have a Diva look on your port.
I don't do goth, horror vamp spooky style photos but I would probably take a chance with you
Keep up the good work. Try not to get stuck too much  in a single genre.
A talented photographer can make you look great in any genre.

Andrea Cronshaw wrote:
Oh wow, I hate to add to your very long list but I just can't help myself

We have a young talent here
This is your best photo best in concept, creativity, and color saturation, (Listed in my spooky list )
You have an interesting vison of life
Bottom one in this is very nice.
but in the bottom photo cut and paste is not that realistic
concentrate more on lights, develop studio level lighting skills and add variety.
In any case you will do great.

Ron_Lee wrote:
Me please!

I like how you photograph the female form, like this
you have some good erotic feel on this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17698776
but the collage is too small and cropping is too tight to judge the light which is a bit "meh".

I see a lot of sneakers in your photos and I hate them in general especially worn with nylons so I will skip commenting on those 2
+18 but that's just me.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17666069
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17666086
and there is more

Your best pantyhose glamour  shot is this geting some glitter and glance of the heels there
some images have hue shift to yellow https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17983675 I am not sure if it was done on purpose.
Your lighting is a bit flat except on few photos, other then that, I like your layouts and concepts like this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17666054
keep it up, very  interesting work, and a lot of room for improvement.
It would not hurt to add outdoor shoots in your port.

Scarlett Brown wrote:
Will you do mine?

You look gorgeous.
I saw some nice additions since my last visit.
let's start with headshots
They are either too bright or too dark for my taste.
on this retouching is bad because all the edges of your face is burned.
great make up though as opposed to too dark on this
In your recent pics I like this series are nice, especially with the violin concept I would have listed if it was a full height shot.
Oh well.
I am not so crazy about the smirk here on this one , and there was no need to put a chair by the edge of the desk to shoot you. Big distraction that takes away the charm of this shot.

This is a great shot, showing your profile and gorgeous curves.
not so crazy about girl girl shoot here https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22843450 +18 light is great but holding is wrong, your partner's hands on your shoulders does not send me the right vibes. I like some symmetrical positioning that I feel creates better sensual mood.
this is probably best of your nudes https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22843487 +18 great emotional pose and very good light despite the little burn on face and lack of the field depth causing bluring from your breasts down.
you may want to delete this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23129647
in this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22871742
shoot angle bothers me.

Your outdoor shots are nice. Careful selection of yellow color is outstanding with the surrounding area. gorgeous location
keep it up, add some plain Jane style pictures, you have too many glamour shots.

Shawn Feile wrote:
I'll take up my waiting position.

well I can see you are an expert rigger, and your Shibari work is excellent
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19762308 listed
amazing tedious work.
I wished she smiled a bit on this one great loaction, awesome saturated colors
your lighting is excellent both in BW and color work.
You promise a lot, you have amazing capabilities.
Don't be stuck only in bondage
Keep it up and keep clicking

varton wrote:

We have a young talent here
This is your best photo best in concept, creativity, and color saturation, (Listed in my spooky list )
You have an interesting vison of life
Bottom one in this is very nice.
but in the bottom photo cut and paste is not that realistic
concentrate more on lights, develop studio level lighting skills and add variety.
In any case you will do great.

Thankyou very much But I couldn't help but laugh, the girl actually fell onto the mattress, so bit funny that reality looks like a bad photoshop job Definitely agree with you though on other things and will be doing a studio lighting course at uni next semester.

Alexey Tsvetkov wrote:
im in) id like to listen)

Alex you have great talent
this one is very well nailed my fav listed
your port has great extravagant hair styles like these
and obvious great fashion statements and style
this is your best great job in light and feeling of motion
this is the weakest  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23149900
keep it up you are doing great

U R Lucky to work with Russian woman they are all beautiful

varton wrote:

Alex you have great talent
this one is very well nailed my fav listed
your port has great extravagant hair styles like these
and obvious great fashion statements and style
this is your best great job in light and feeling of motion
this is the weakest  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23149900
keep it up you are doing great

U R Lucky to work with Russian woman they are all beautiful

Thank you for your thoughts) Russian models are beautiful and businesslike , yeah)
American or European models aren't worse =P
I'll try to make more beautiful pics one after another!)

Asher Thompson wrote:
I'm in. Tell me what you think?

Hello, you have a port with only a handful of pictures.
On some the cropping is a bit odd. But some great shots like this I like a lot. your best and 1/3 rule compliant.
you picked real gorgeous models, but you need to work more on lighting especially on black and white work.

Keep it up, watch your power points and rule of thirds for better impact on your framing;
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds

BMoten Photography wrote:
Is is still possible to receive a critique?

Yes, this thread will continue as long as you show interest in hearing my opinion on your work.
Check back the index in a few days

Emily Maddison wrote:
Me please?

Hello Emily, you have a gorgeous look
and in your port the first eye catcher is this I like the post job buth the background is totally washed out, therefore i am not listing it. Perhaps that is the effect wanted but not my taste in pictures.
great make up in that picture.
This is your best look but wished was higher contrast.
gorgeous eyes in this and beautiful figure. Listed
this would have been better without the crates.
this is a great bw but you are not alone in it.
can be removed https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23116540
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23197870 too dark and does not add much, weakens your port.
keep it up , super job!

Monochrome Set wrote:
Me please ... ?

Thanks

Hello,
I love your bw Hollywood glamour work, excellent job here

in this bw work I feel the vintage vibeslisted but probably would come out better without tattoos on her thigh. Listed.
You are very fond of nylons and this one is an eye catcher listed.
your work is well exposed with excellent contrast in lighting and your portraits are awesome. You have also timeless classics like this listed
Great mastery of light, taste and nostalgia sums up your great skills and beautiful work.
Keep clicking, great job