Forums > Critique > I will list your best and will tell you why.

Model

Lily Darling

Posts: 1299

Lansing, Michigan, US

varton wrote:

Wow Lily,
You are drop dead gorgeous
Love this body art
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110324/13/4d8ba58a41f26_m.jpg
Listed
I don’t care about gore and nasty style much but you are still a hot babe in this genre as well.
+18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20446746

Aww thank you! wink

Apr 23 11 06:41 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Elena Antonia Pappas wrote:
I would love to know your opinion ..just cant understand why the one I love seems to be the least favourite:(((

ELENA

this is my favorite
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100807/08/4c5d812f4268c_m.jpg
listed

Apr 23 11 09:15 pm Link

Model

Anamaly

Posts: 559

Woodstock, New York, US

Id love to hear what you think

Apr 23 11 09:16 pm Link

Model

ModelShannon

Posts: 115

Tampa, Florida, US

me please

Apr 23 11 09:16 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Annabella S wrote:
let me know what you think!

This is what I love most because of the drama and  high contrast in bw
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110305/11/4d7288d0e565d_m.jpg

Apr 23 11 09:18 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

ES Lingerie and Nudes wrote:
I would love some feedback - I'm re-doing this portfolio completely and MIGHT have wandered off the deep end.

love this as I commented already on it before
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080821/04/48ad25785cc10_m.jpg
listed

Apr 23 11 09:20 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Breann Rambo wrote:
Sounds fun! smile  I will play and thank you!

your work is stellar and had real hard time to pick my best from
I love them all but this one strikes a chord
great make up and expression
oustanding contrast and tonal balance
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101008/12/4caf6b4daaf31_m.jpg
listed

Apr 23 11 09:23 pm Link

Photographer

WildEye Studio

Posts: 659

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

me too!

Apr 23 11 09:23 pm Link

Photographer

Blue Ash Film Group

Posts: 10343

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

I would be interested to read what you think is my best. Thank you!

Apr 23 11 09:26 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

J-O-N-O wrote:
I would like to hear your thoughts.

Jon
this is awesome
listed in my gorgeous men's list
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100915/18/4c916c6346f91_m.jpg

Apr 23 11 09:26 pm Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Elaine Ford wrote:
me?

I love this a lot, you are a drop dead gorgeous model
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100406/12/4bbb868d7abf0_m.jpg
it was a pleasure to visit your port.
I also love this
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110412/16/4da4d98172029_m.jpg
listed

Apr 23 11 09:30 pm Link

Model

Lauren Linton

Posts: 38

Nashville, Tennessee, US

I'm game smile

Apr 23 11 09:31 pm Link

Photographer

Hinky Photography

Posts: 33

Austin, Texas, US

Please

Apr 23 11 09:39 pm Link

Photographer

unexpected captures

Posts: 272

San Francisco, California, US

would love to know...
thanks in advance

Apr 23 11 09:47 pm Link

Model

hotwifeviv

Posts: 103

DuPont, Washington, US

varton wrote:

I like the one below very much
+18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22130337
those eyes are trying to say something wink
Gorgeous hair and beautiful eye contact.

Thank you so much smile

Apr 23 11 10:37 pm Link

Model

KittyContagious

Posts: 4

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

I'm curious.

Apr 23 11 10:46 pm Link

Photographer

FotoMark

Posts: 2978

Oxnard, California, US

varton wrote:
Bring it on everyone.

edit:
I will be working on your port in the order of entry, and will be processing ALL requests ASAP, please be patient and give me some time to look around your port. I don't want to rush to judgment and rubber stamp my replies with one size fits all approach.
Thank you for the opportunity given and check back here once in a while for latest topic status wink

Right now it is really a crappy weather in NYC, raining cats and dogs and even my dog will not go out to poop! big_smile
So I am stuck at home in a way.

I'm interested smile

Apr 23 11 10:57 pm Link

Photographer

D P Photo

Posts: 740

Ferrara, Emilia-Romagna, Italy

varton wrote:

Your port has a lot of good photos but I am only in love with this one
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100725/00/4c4be49d7aa7c_m.jpg

thank you! I appreciate so much your comment!

Apr 23 11 11:01 pm Link

Model

Brianna Skylar

Posts: 47

Huntington Beach, California, US

I would love for you to stop by! Bri

Apr 23 11 11:02 pm Link

Photographer

Thommy Panic

Posts: 529

Chicago, Illinois, US

Hmmmm . . . .

Apr 23 11 11:05 pm Link

Photographer

ES Pin Ups and Nudes

Posts: 296

Casa Grande, Arizona, US

varton wrote:

love this as I commented already on it before
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080821/04/48ad25785cc10_m.jpg
listed

Ah, thank you! At least now I have a target to beat! Thank  you again.

Apr 23 11 11:32 pm Link

Photographer

pai

Posts: 577

San Diego, California, US

this is always fun!

Apr 23 11 11:36 pm Link

Photographer

gatmen

Posts: 49

Lawton, Oklahoma, US

I am up for it

Apr 23 11 11:49 pm Link

Photographer

All Yours Photography

Posts: 2731

Lawton, Oklahoma, US

If you're still at it, take a look at mine.

Apr 24 11 12:46 am Link

Model

Cillers

Posts: 29

Saint Paul, Minnesota, US

As of right now, I do not have much to go on, but I am always interested in the feedback of others. I'd like to know what your opinion is so far of my portfolio.

Apr 24 11 12:57 am Link

Photographer

Brown Bear Photography

Posts: 2

Braintree, England, United Kingdom

Apr 24 11 04:29 am Link

Photographer

Brown Bear Photography

Posts: 2

Braintree, England, United Kingdom

Please mate, any criticism is good criticism:-)

Apr 24 11 04:29 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Terrell Gates wrote:
Love to know what you think is my best...

your port is very artistic and well thought out but I was expecting much better
photo quality.
I picked the one below, but it barely made it
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110323/13/4d8a5263990a0_m.jpg

Apr 24 11 04:30 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Victoria Gail wrote:
love to know~hope the weather gets better! thank you in advance~

Easter Sunday Morning now, a lot better, sunny.
this one is too much doped over high contrasted and your face look unnatural
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110326/22/4d8ec48f4c3fd_m.jpg
I picked this one instead, soft glamorous and beautiful
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110225/21/4d689056b2bfc_m.jpg
your pinup category is mostly portrait work, I wanted to see more leggy shots
and could not find many.
most of your photos are over brushed and too smoothed up for my taste. I like to stay with the real thing
this one  below is not exaggerated I think and listed as well
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110326/21/4d8ec35ca4b2f_m.jpg

Apr 24 11 04:40 am Link

Model

Vikki A

Posts: 297

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

How about me?

Apr 24 11 04:41 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

BWGPhoto wrote:
Ok

I could have picked this one below for my pinup list
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090329/14/49cfeac3e3ad6_m.jpg
But I see a failed attempt to shoot a pinup. Guess what, where there are no legs are no pinups either.
I am also disappointed to see this
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090503/21/49fe6a5b2ba14_m.jpg
Although the background and concept is excellent, models do not fit in, especially in blue jeans for this type of scene. The model on left should not be looking at the camera but the glass. She looks angry? Anyway better wardrobe would make this picture more dramatic with an impact rather then showing 2 girls pouring wine.
I was leaning also on this +18 to list
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/7078960
but the face is too much burned up
Your best pic for my list is below, I am glad I found it
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090503/21/49fe6bc53f375_m.jpg
You take quality pictures; keep clicking but try to make your point and send a message across.

Apr 24 11 05:16 am Link

Photographer

E Warren Photo

Posts: 2

Springfield, Virginia, US

I'd like to know as well, please!

Apr 24 11 05:21 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

ConnorStewart wrote:
im in

Those boots and lace top nylons are total mismatch for my taste. But it is just me.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110420/13/4daf45ef2e552_m.jpg

I was in love with this one below
she is reading Madame Bowary, wow. You are good!
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090817/10/4a89969cc3c15_m.jpg
gorgeous lighting, perspective and the drama as a result of the bw effect
never ever cut off feet again wink
listed

Apr 24 11 05:26 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Bad Charlotte wrote:
Go for it. ^.^

With you it was easy wink
all these below goes to my best of the best list
+18
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15607277
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8116025

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091031/14/4aeca8ac0edba_m.jpg
You can make any photographer shine.
Gorgeous work compliments.

Apr 24 11 05:49 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

RD Photos wrote:
please let me know.

thanks

You have so many good ones I had hard time to pick
Nylons are mismatch for the fifties sixties era
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101126/17/4cf059f5e1497_m.jpg
Make sure the nylons fit models well. If welts are closer to the groin they look more classy.

Added several
Here they are:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110316/07/4d80c6a847653_m.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080719/14/4882318edf8d7_m.jpg

Love your humor and art in below gangster shoot. Madame looks fabulous
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110306/17/4d743791dd9e8_m.jpg

You do great work, love your style, we have some points in common.

Apr 24 11 06:00 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

L Raye wrote:
Which is mine?

(Mostly 18+)

love this one
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18174479
makes me dream wink
good job overall.
be more selective while picking models.

Apr 24 11 06:03 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Klaudia Zadlo wrote:
please(:

This is the one I love most
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110329/19/4d928ebd532fd_m.jpg
listed

Apr 24 11 06:05 am Link

Photographer

Varton

Posts: 2755

New York, New York, US

Raissa Restivo wrote:
Me smile

You look great on this one
try to cut down on your port, remove redundent pics
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110330/23/4d9420955c3bf_m.jpg

The third page is finished
keep requests coming.

Apr 24 11 06:07 am Link

Photographer

Concepts 5 Photography

Posts: 80

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

I'm kinda game

Apr 24 11 06:24 am Link

Photographer

Mike Mango

Posts: 399

Toms River, New Jersey, US

Count me in!

Apr 24 11 06:34 am Link