April 10, 2010 1:04pm Hi first welcome to MM second I am going to comment on your portfolio and offer some technical tips to watch out for as you add to your book and change out the images that could be improved. I like this shot a lot nice wardrobe and cool pose and nice expression the issues are cropping both part of your head and feet have been cut off and the background with the unpainted spots at the bottom of the wall. Both issues could be easily correct with better framing and photo shhop editing can fix the unpainted spots on the wall But clearly you have potential in front of the camera