February 16, 2012 10:08pm You have great possibilities, but you must forget about posing and focus on being in the moment. That mean you have to act the part and get yourself to the point that you place your body and mind in a situation as if there was no camera. Instead a boyfriend, a feared situation, great happiness, sadness, fear, etc. You face and body must tell the same story. This picture is posed and look that way and has little artistic value - of course you are beautiful but the images lacks power as you are in a awkward position and not that happy with it.