February 09, 2016 12:26pm I like the pose but it isn't dynamic enough. Needs something a little more, maybe a little kick in the hips. Maybe a little twist to the body more to the camera. Like the head position but the expression isn't saying anything specific other than a forced smile. Can you see what I am saying? You could have been so much more expressive. Professionals want to create EMOTIONS and FEELINGS. Not just pretty girls in photos. We need dynamics, tension, attraction, desire. I want to WANT you, to FEEL your emotions, to KNOW a little something from inside, otherwise I could just photograph a mannequin. I want you to work harder for it, with PASSION and sweat and dedication.
I like something in you, maybe your relaxed style, I'm still working it out.
Catch you later,
SteveG
