January 07, 2008 5:03pm Nice ! long focal length gives you the detail and clarity of the building wall in the background but use rule of thirds for compositiion she is too centered. Always angling the model helps as well with depth of field and spacial realtion so its not as flat looking. also it can be cropping might help as there is so much clarity going on behind the model that you look past her to check out the cool lighting and detail on the walls behind. Nice spot.
