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Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

*****Rules:*****

Dont cry.

Dont get pissy.

What I say is not just for shits and giggles, there is truth behind it all. Take it as constructive.

Go.

**Edit**
I am coming back to this thread continuously. I *will* get to you.

STOP sending me messages. The messages I have replied to, the senders could not handle the private critique.



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Jan 18 10 08:13 pm Link

Model

Smashulie

Posts: 1621

Federal Way, Washington, US

What happens if I tear up? lol just a kidding wink

Jan 18 10 08:14 pm Link

Model

Elaine Ford

Posts: 2045

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

ok:)

Jan 18 10 08:17 pm Link

Model

Aderial

Posts: 233

Hamilton, Ohio, US

i am intrested

Jan 18 10 08:17 pm Link

Photographer

T-D-L

Posts: 10303

Los Angeles, California, US

What do you say?

Jan 18 10 08:18 pm Link

Photographer

Renagade Graphics GFX

Posts: 24

Raleigh, North Carolina, US

OK i'll bite

Jan 18 10 08:19 pm Link

Model

Crystal Quin Tero

Posts: 316

Irving, Texas, US

I do take things to heart and wear my heart on my sleeve from time to time (damned hormones!) but for y'all...I shall put on the coat of armour...

Jan 18 10 08:20 pm Link

Photographer

DystopianStudios

Posts: 792

Los Angeles, California, US

Rip away.

Jan 18 10 08:22 pm Link

Photographer

RMT Photography

Posts: 1323

Clearwater, Florida, US

Go for it. Critique away!

Jan 18 10 08:27 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Ashley McMahan wrote:
What happens if I tear up? lol just a kidding wink

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100110/11/4b4a29fe76841_m.jpg
I want to see you with different hair. I dont like your expression here.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100103/17/4b413fea23367_m.jpg
You look alien and creepy here. Your pose is bad...Your left hand is flat against the tree, and your right is dead. You lost all of your body shape. The outfit is horrible.
Bad photo. Just because you see a cool tree doesnt mean you can pose with it.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100102/15/4b3fdb602e2f3_m.jpg
Please work on your hands. This photo rocks besides your dead hand.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091228/15/4b393aa3e95d5_m.jpg
...This bugs me. Do something with your face.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090522/16/4a173bda0e218_m.jpg
Delete. Did you photoshop this yourself?

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090622/17/4a401b191d22a_m.jpg
THE CLAW!!! Watch out for the CLAWWWWWW! Mwahahahaha.


http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090626/17/4a456a674cab0_m.jpg
MM demands better photos than Myspace.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090611/22/4a31e2bc38bf9_m.jpg
Bowed leg and THE CLAWWWWWW. Watch how red your face gets....makeup friend.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090705/23/4a519b990a8ec_m.jpg
Better hair, retarded face.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090706/17/4a5298ac26958_m.jpg
You need a cooler window to pull this off. . .I enjoy the lighting...but the plastic, modern window sucks ass.

Jan 18 10 08:28 pm Link

Model

Smashulie

Posts: 1621

Federal Way, Washington, US

Shaun Tia wrote:

Just because you see a cool tree doesnt mean you can pose with it.

lol I agree with everything you said... but that line just cracked me up!

Jan 18 10 08:33 pm Link

Photographer

Franko Photo

Posts: 1622

San Jose, California, US

OK - I'm in ...

Jan 18 10 08:35 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Elaine Ford wrote:
ok:)

Ive told you before, and you dont like to take the advice...Pick *one* freaking photo from each outfit.
FORCE yourself to pick the best.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091213/08/4b251d25a97bc_m.jpg
This is aweful.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091208/17/4b1efdd5460d1_m.jpg
Cropped hand. Ditzy blonde face.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091201/03/4b14fc39dfc8a_m.jpg
Get this stupid freaking photo out of your freaking port.
UGH. Ive told you before. TELL people on your port what shows you were in, we dont need to see some bad quality photo that makes you look aweful.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090313/06/49ba66747783f_m.jpg
This is your best. I like that you have only one photo of this. Its niiiiicce.

Jan 18 10 08:35 pm Link

Photographer

PrettyHate Studios

Posts: 23

Tempe, Arizona, US

alright.. next months marks my 1 year of shooting...

let me have it.

Jan 18 10 08:36 pm Link

Photographer

Ronnie_Smith

Posts: 463

Austin, Texas, US

I hide behind the camera...no one knows who I am. Fire away!

Jan 18 10 08:37 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4485

Chicago, Illinois, US

I'm in

Jan 18 10 08:38 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Aderial wrote:
i am intrested

Are you begging for people to shoot with you?? Oh my goodness thats pathetic.

By your port, I can see why though.

The FIRST photo in your port is this:
http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100114/23/4b501ecf11559_m.jpg
What. The. Hell.
This is horrible.

http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091028/14/4ae8be9c0c2ce_m.jpg
You look so red. Work with a makeup artist and a better photog.

http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091212/14/4b2416a751196_m.jpg
This is nice, I cant see much of you.

http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090820/22/4a8e335dedaca_m.jpg
CHIN! Why is it cropped at the CHIN?! Learn makeup please.

http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090503/20/49fe613ce2c4b_m.jpg
Bleahhhhhhhhhhhhhchalk. Point your toes. Always. There arent exceptions for you.

http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090503/20/49fe64dc11ef6_m.jpg
Why are you afraid to show your toes?
Are you wearing a table cloth? Where is your left hand? What is that expression? Is that supposed to be alluring?

http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090429/20/49f91b0d6dad3_m.jpg
Neck is VERY important as a model. Do. Not. Do. This. Ever. Again.

http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090423/17/49f10ba42caa8_m.jpg
Sad?

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid= … up_id=&ua=
Your armpits and stomach look weird. I dont like your breasts.
Why are you wearing a fat lady's denim skirt?
You have one leg.
You lost neck and added chins.

http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090423/18/49f10f62b4215_m.jpg
This is nice except for the foot coming out of your head and cropped fingers.

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid= … up_id=&ua=
Point. Your. Toes.
Having your arms above your head flattens your chest. Keep that in mind.

Im done here.

Jan 18 10 08:43 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Tyrone Lavigne wrote:
What do you say?

First off get rid of the folder. You have ten photos. I can handle looking at them all at once. Trust me. Im a big girl.

Your choice for avi is terrible.

Your photos can stand alone, I would advise straying away your safe zone. Pick the strongest photo.

http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090104/23/4961b6bd4063a_m.jpg
This is a step up from a Myspace picture.

http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090530/23/4a22242c416d7_m.jpg
Please, Ive told you before. Get rid of this.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_ … =76518&ua=
You should know to direct your models to point their toes. This series doesnt work. At all.


http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091120/22/4b078f8cd1e90_m.jpg
Maybe you should shoot men more....

Jan 18 10 08:48 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Renagade Graphics GFX wrote:
OK i'll bite

Your port makes me want to be racist. This is ghetto.

http://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090730/21/4a726d27e6f37_m.jpg
This is so fucking horrible.

I have no words to describe how horrible and disgusting this photo is. It literally makes us ill.

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_ … up_id=&ua=
Did you learn photoshop from a 5-year-old?
No...they would know better than that.

I cant say anything else.

We are thoroughly terrified by your port.

Jan 18 10 08:51 pm Link

Photographer

T-D-L

Posts: 10303

Los Angeles, California, US

Shaun Tia wrote:
First off get rid of the folder. You have ten photos. I can handle looking at them all at once. Trust me. Im a big girl.

Your choice for avi is terrible.

Your photos can stand alone, I would advise straying away your safe zone. Pick the strongest photo.

http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090104/23/4961b6bd4063a_m.jpg
This is a step up from a Myspace picture.

http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090530/23/4a22242c416d7_m.jpg
Please, Ive told you before. Get rid of this.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_ … =76518&ua=
You should know to direct your models to point their toes. This series doesnt work. At all.


http://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091120/22/4b078f8cd1e90_m.jpg
Maybe you should shoot men more....

Interesting advice.  Deleted a couple of the ones you don't like.  About the folder, I only use it to separate the older work from new.  Hopefully will have enough to completely delete and forget about it in a couple months, and hopefully will have some new stuff for an avatar in a couple days.  Unfortunately there aren't many male fashion type models here sad  Thanks for the critique smile

Jan 18 10 08:52 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Crystal Quintero wrote:
I do take things to heart and wear my heart on my sleeve from time to time (damned whoremones!) but for y'all...I shall put on the coat of armour...

....whoremones? Are you serious?

Are you calling yourself a whore? You know its spelled "hormones" right?

Anyway...to your port....

Ooooohhhhweeewwww. Is our first impression.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091221/23/4b306f078fe36_m.jpg
This is aweful for you. Fat and midget.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091010/22/4ad1690726d9b_m.jpg
What the hell is this doing in your port?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091221/23/4b306edd6f1fa_m.jpg
This is probably the best look for you.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100118/20/4b553528013fb_m.jpg
Mad Whoremones

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091230/10/4b3b9a53ac29b_m.jpg
wtf.

Jan 18 10 08:55 pm Link

Photographer

Michael Magers

Posts: 4050

Fullerton, California, US

I will throw in my hat in this. smile

Jan 18 10 08:56 pm Link

Model

Jalanis

Posts: 323

NORTH HOLLYWOOD, California, US

lets do it

Jan 18 10 08:57 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

DystopianStudios wrote:
Rip away.

18+
http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic_ … up_id=&ua=
Fix your fade.
This wouldve been awesome with some non-fucked makeup.

All I see is a bunch of cliche stuff thats been done a million times over. Youve just done it more crappy.

Try something more original.

Some of your stuff is almost impressive.

Jan 18 10 08:58 pm Link

Model

Crystal Quin Tero

Posts: 316

Irving, Texas, US

Shaun Tia wrote:
....whoremones? Are you serious?

Are you calling yourself a whore? You know its spelled "hormones" right?

Anyway...to your port....

Ooooohhhhweeewwww. Is our first impression.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091221/23/4b306f078fe36_m.jpg
This is aweful for you. Fat and midget.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091010/22/4ad1690726d9b_m.jpg
What the hell is this doing in your port?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091221/23/4b306edd6f1fa_m.jpg
This is probably the best look for you.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100118/20/4b553528013fb_m.jpg
Mad Whoremones

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091230/10/4b3b9a53ac29b_m.jpg
wtf.

I do know how to spell it. It's kind of a running joke...that we become mean due to hormones as we get older. NM, I know the majority on here are super young compared to me. So ... I will correct that spelling! smile  Speaking of which, it's spelled "Awful" not aweful.

I will also update accordingly - per your advice! smile

Thanks! smile

Jan 18 10 09:00 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

RMT Photography wrote:
Go for it. Critique away!

http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/071028/22/4725447e32c6d_m.jpg
Orange. Blurry. Cropped to shit.

When I look into a port, I expect to see only the best of what you can do. If this is in your best, I would never work with you.

I dont like the majority of your pictures.

Jan 18 10 09:01 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Anzalone Photography wrote:
OK - I'm in ...

99 photos...and not one of them is properly exposed.

Grade: D-

http://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080229/18/47c8937b5fa23_m.jpg
What demographic are you trying to attract with this photo?

Creepy.

Jan 18 10 09:04 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

SunsetBlack Photography wrote:
alright.. next months marks my 1 year of shooting...

let me have it.

Youre goddamn grounded.
http://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091015/04/4ad70ca181791_m.jpg
Selective color.
n00b.

Not a good picture, regardless.

http://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100109/19/4b4944c5011ed_m.jpg
Nice plastic skin. (Note the sarcasm.)

http://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100109/19/4b4942deed42f_m.jpg
This shows how bad you are. If you want to book people, I would delete it.

http://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091015/20/4ad7e7c74f5bb_m.jpg
Good lighting, but I am afraid to enjoy this photo...what the hell is the concept?

http://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091015/11/4ad7647714c6d_m.jpg
We dont need to know what you look like, especially with a shitty photo.

Jan 18 10 09:08 pm Link

Model

Cameron Jane Fox

Posts: 21

Flagstaff, Arizona, US

Wow! Some real honesty, I'm a bit shocked. Your 2 cents please?

Jan 18 10 09:09 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Ronnie_Smith wrote:
I hide behind the camera...no one knows who I am. Fire away!

Shoot something other than Asians?

Learn to crop.
Learn to light.
And get rid of the snapshot like photos. They dont belong in a professional's port.

Jan 18 10 09:10 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

TrackBelle wrote:
I'm in

I love you but I hate this photo
http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090827/06/4a968e465d37d_m.jpg
Overblown to hell and it doesnt work.

http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090827/06/4a968cf3ef2c9_m.jpg
Okay...Youre holding an Xbox controller...cool??
Bad quality photo. It sucks. A lot.

You have too many headshots. Okay we get it, youre cute. Pick your best.

http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080405/10/47f79385271e8_m.jpg
This is scary. Looks like you want to come kill me.

Jan 18 10 09:13 pm Link

Photographer

Billy Pegram

Posts: 261

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Love it

Jan 18 10 09:14 pm Link

Photographer

Ronnie_Smith

Posts: 463

Austin, Texas, US

Shaun Tia wrote:

Shoot something other than Asians?

Learn to crop.
Learn to light.
And get rid of the snapshot like photos. They dont belong in a professional's port.

There are actually three Latinas in there smile  Thanks for your time and hope you feel better!

Jan 18 10 09:14 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Michael Magers wrote:
I will throw in my hat in this. smile

I dont like your black and whites.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100117/18/4b53c9958206d_m.jpg
The shadows in this photo suck.

Youre good.

Jan 18 10 09:15 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4485

Chicago, Illinois, US

Thanks smile

Jan 18 10 09:15 pm Link

Model

Anamaly

Posts: 559

Prague, Prague, Czech Republic

Go for it

Jan 18 10 09:17 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Jalanis Fishe wrote:
lets do it

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091105/15/4af3623760b88_m.jpg
Foot fetish shot?
This does absolutely nothing for your port. Delete.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091027/12/4ae7491432c10_m.jpg
Ditzy face, cropped foot, and short legs.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090820/16/4a8dd9a0c5cea_m.jpg
Meh..take that as a compliment

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100101/15/4b3e8c4b930d7_m.jpg
This is horrible.
Do you think you look good here?

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100101/16/4b3e8c859ecb3_m.jpg
Short legs, distracting bg.

Etc. Etc.

Jan 18 10 09:19 pm Link

Model

Jalanis

Posts: 323

NORTH HOLLYWOOD, California, US

Shaun Tia wrote:

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091105/15/4af3623760b88_m.jpg
Foot fetish shot?
This does absolutely nothing for your port. Delete.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091027/12/4ae7491432c10_m.jpg
Ditzy face, cropped foot, and short legs.

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090820/16/4a8dd9a0c5cea_m.jpg
Meh..take that as a compliment

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100101/15/4b3e8c4b930d7_m.jpg
This is horrible.
Do you think you look good here?

http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100101/16/4b3e8c859ecb3_m.jpg
Short legs, distracting bg.

Etc. Etc.

thank you. i was expection more brutality but whatev

Jan 18 10 09:20 pm Link

Model

Shaun Tia

Posts: 1696

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Maren Hardy wrote:
Wow! Some real honesty, I'm a bit shocked. Your 2 cents please?

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090808/13/4a7ddf3e7e4bb_m.jpg
This makes your thigh look so huge.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090330/21/49d19c023e924_m.jpg
Stupidly creepy.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090326/07/49cb9065ceb0f_m.jpg
Myspace.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090323/09/49c7b911c56b7_m.jpg
No place in your port for this.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090323/09/49c7b832d7e57_m.jpg
This is good.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091219/14/4b2d4e6336c0c_m.jpg
I want to like this one. But I dont.

http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091221/08/4b2fa0e454b2e_m.jpg
This is cute

Jan 18 10 09:24 pm Link

Photographer

Sarah Kanzler

Posts: 97

Bodega Bay, California, US

Scary! I'm in.

Jan 18 10 09:25 pm Link