Shaun Tia wrote:

I dont like your black and whites.


The shadows in this photo suck.

Youre good.

Thanks

*mutters Im so confused.

Billy Pegram wrote:
Love it

You have some cool photos. But some aweful ones as well.

I love the shadows here

But the edges are too sharp for me, and the noise on the walls distracts me.

..Is this out of focus?

Her other arm isnt in the light. Find a way to do this better.


AHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Horrible duck face. Oh my goodness. Delete. I cant believe you used this.


Im a bit confused by your choice for covers...


This is cool except for the left lower corner.


This is horrible. You have better.
Get rid of it.



I want my Christmas card to be happy...not dead.

Ana Genevieve wrote:
Go for it

Most of your photos are aweful.

Your newest shot and your avi are your best.

I cant tell you how aweful most of your pics make you look. Can you not tell how bad you look in some photos?

Sarah Kanzler wrote:
Scary! I'm in.

This has no place in your port. What made you think it did?

Why do you have a folder?

I dont like your style.
Its good you have your own...But I would not want to be your model.

Shaun Tia wrote:

Most of your photos are aweful.

Your newest shot and your avi are your best.

I cant tell you how aweful most of your pics make you look. Can you not tell how bad you look in some photos?

I guess not, there are a few that i don't love the way that i look, but that other people seem to really like, I'm not crying but your meanness wasn't very helpful
or successfully catty enough to make up for not really saying anything

Ana Genevieve wrote:

I guess not, there are a few that i don't love the way that i look, but that other people seem to really like, I'm not crying but your meanness wasn't very helpful
or successfully catty enough to make up for not really saying anything

Ana, your pictures do not make you look horrible. 

However, I do agree that the cattiness is a far cry from helpful or constructive.

Ana Genevieve wrote:

I guess not, there are a few that i don't love the way that i look, but that other people seem to really like, I'm not crying but your meanness wasn't very helpful
or successfully catty enough to make up for not really saying anything

Okay here you go


You look like a trashy hooker on a corner. Better wardrobe, makeup, hair and pose. You should know better than to post stuff like this. Your hair is an aweful color.


Youve blocked your eye and this is simply grayscale, no real darks or real lights.


Horrible editing and makes me scared of you.


Fucking gross picture.
Lazy eye. Monkey lips. Brain shot.


This looks like a shot your daddy took. Horrible quality.


Sunglasses in the bra? Eye bags? Dead arms?


Icky crackwhore photo.


What is up with your hair? This looks like a snap shot from a camping trip.


You look like youre getting fucked by a blow pop. . .Thats cool if thats what youre going for...


Crack photos


Smoking is no longer cool. (Coming from a smoker too.) Stop smoking in your photos. Wash your hair.


Birthmarks are cool and all, but they do not belong in every photo. Watch your eyes and hands.


Im glad to see you dyed your hair. Now learn to pose. This is overexposed.

18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid … up_id=&ua=

If you dont have the great goods, dont show em off.

Hope this helps you.

LeanneLeanne wrote:

Ana, your pictures do not make you look horrible. 

However, I do agree that the cattiness is a far cry from helpful or constructive.

I just went through almost every photo. There are photos that do not do her any sort of justice. She should know the truth.

Adaeze James wrote:
I like my port selections, but I'm new to the game. Anything I should think about cutting out?

An example where no-neck works. Grand job.

You have an inate sensuality about you. Id like to see you out of your element though. It has to be easy for you to look sexy.

Your choice of avi is great.

I dont like these two:


No figure, or expression. Pose is blech.

Weird colors and hand.

DearestGrudge Studio wrote:
tell me.

Haha I would beg on my knees to work with you.

Now get the fuck out of here with your perfect port.

Hannah OBrien wrote:
Go ahead - I need some honest feedback!

Dont think Im an expert in this or anything but...

For photos for your port I should be able to see the makeup shots like this:

With that highlight suck.


This is nice for a clean look.
Does not make me want to look at the photo though. . .Just not impressed.

I dont see anything that the model shouldnt be able to do herself. . .I would post some extravagant stuff.

PhotoSmithography wrote:
It seems to me that you've looked over my work before and suggested that I get out of the studio and do more location work.  I agree, but I'm not up to it yet (physically).  So, it's studio work for me for the foreseeable future.  So, any other suggestions or comments.

Please get rid of this

I told you so last time.

I dont like your nudes.

Except for this one. I love this one.

Daniel M Martin wrote:
Make me cry and I'll kick your ass....

This is good for a laugh and Myspace, not for your port



This is not a good choice for avi, I dont even believe it belongs in your port.
The white is overblown, and the outfit is not flattering.

18+
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=
I like this. I wish her feet were in the pic.

WHY?!

Alice Donoghue wrote:
Please do me! I've been reading your critiques so far and I'm loooving it.

You have a gorgeous face. I want you to be painted.

Best:


Holy shit gorgeous.

This belongs on Myspace

It shows nothing of model potential.


Scared and weird face.


Holy scary crop your leg off.


Angry. Skinny. Anorexic.

Love your other stuff.

Shaun Tia wrote:

Please get rid of this

I told you so last time.

I dont like your nudes.

Except for this one. I love this one.

I have to agree with you on the first image, but I have a reason for keeping it.  It was a 16 year old's first shoot and I didn't want to discourage her by not including a couple of images of her in my port.  She'll rock with a little more experience and age.

Regarding my nudes, we'll I can't argue with what you like except to say, and you like these?
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pics.php?pa … p_id=59992
;-)
~David

Tatiana Mango wrote:
I'm honestly terrified, but I need to get rid of some stuff, so fire away.

I dont have much to say to you really...My advice would be to stop doing blatent open leg shots...theyre not appealing.

Youre in the middle ground I would say.

PhotoSmithography wrote:
I have to agree with you on the first image, but I have a reason for keeping it.  It was a 16 year old's first shoot and I didn't want to discourage her by not including a couple of images of her in my port.  She'll rock with a little more experience and age.

Regarding my nudes, we'll I can't argue with what you like except to say, and you like these?
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pics.php?pa … p_id=59992
;-)
~David

Your nudes to me are lacking taste.
This

Is trashy.
As is this:

Shaun Tia wrote:

Your nudes to me are lacking taste.
This

Is trashy.
As is this:

Shaun, Shaun, you're slipping (what happened to that insight?).  Those images are trashy and what is this?
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=

PhotoSmithography wrote:

Shaun, Shaun, you're slipping (what happened to that insight?).  Those images are trashy and what is this?
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=

Haha now my insight is slipping because I tell you the truth about your photos??

Goodness me.

That photo is not trashy Far from it. It is a butt...that is true. My legs are not spread, I am not sticking or pulling anything through my asscrack. Its not trashy haha

Could be a difference of opinion, dear.

Shaun Tia wrote:

Haha now my insight is slipping because I tell you the truth about your photos??

Goodness me.

That photo is not trashy Far from it. It is a butt...that is true. My legs are not spread, I am not sticking or pulling anything through my asscrack. Its not trashy haha

Could be a difference of opinion, dear.

You win Shaun.  That image of your "butt" is actually one of my favorites.  ha, ha

Shaun Tia wrote:

Haha I would beg on my knees to work with you.

Now get the fuck out of here with your perfect port.

and I'd happily agree. I think you're awesome!