Mihaela H wrote:
Do I?

I'm wondering how many Wizard of Oz jokes you've heard living in Kansas.

Nice body. I'm turned on that you take care of yourself. You make a great fitness model.

I like that every photo is different. No one photo stops me in my tracks, but I'd work with you in a heartbeat.

Magic Image Photography wrote:
If your up do it but do it do it till your satisfied

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18270322 **18+ TURN OFF!! (jk) I'm a Padres fan


You do make your pinups look like 1940s posters. Props for that.

This is completely different than what else you've got going on in your port. I'd like to see you explore more.

Your work isn't really my thing. I'm not turned on or off.

DW DALLAM PHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
Do it!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18990468 **18+ This is cool, but I think the lighting is too bright for the mood of this pic. I like the detail in the feet.

Turn on. I like the wardrobe and setting.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17792212 **18+ Turn off. The expression combined with the fabric bug me.

Nothing really grabs my attention.

K A M A wrote:
Oh I'd love to hear what you think if you're willing.

Thanks!

Your avatar makes me look forward to looking at your port.

I think got a thing for stairs.

I'd like to see more variation in the placement of your subjects within the frame. For the most part they seem to be right in the center.
Center placement works perfectly here though because the figure is in such a symmetrical position.
I like the detail of the painted skin. Texture is lost in the face.
This is pretty

I think your avatar is your strongest pic. Nothing turns me off.

Mike Narciso wrote:
Everything in my work is just where it should be. Spacially, what can I say, that's just the way I see things. I let the people I work with bring their own ideas, props, wardrobe, I just gently push them around a bit.
Thanks for commenting on my work, well said.  I also enjoyed reading your comments on others.
I'll keep reading, thanks.

Yeah, you definitely captured their character's

SigneSigne wrote:
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You've got a lovely figure and a certain grace in your posing.

I like that your look varies photo to photo.

Turn on

Turn off. The lighting makes you look older. Specifically under your right eye.

Is this supposed to have that big white block in the photo?

Turned on, but you're 5'11!!

BRB, gonna go get a phone book to stand on...

Sogi the Model wrote:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17792212 **18+ Turn off. The expression combined with the fabric bug me.

I have no idea why that is on my port--lol.

Windy West wrote:
I hope I do

Ok sorry for the long break. I hope those of you who've posted are still listening

Windy my dear, you are first on my mind.

You have a lot of pics, and they vary greatly in quality. Overall I'm turned on, but I see lots of opportunity to cut out the excess.




These for example have nearly an identical expression. Pick your favorite of the two.

lovely

This one is weird for me. It's either the angle, or there was some contouring done in photo shop. It doesn't look proportionate compared to your other pictures.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13057800 **18+ Turn on!


Again, similar photo, similar expression.

Turn on. It feels like you're looking into me vs just at me.

Way Beyond Productions wrote:
After reading a few of your critiques, my curiosity is aroused.

And now you find out if you arouse me!

Oh my god...

Well a lot of your photos are very similar, but I don't care because they're all beautiful and I don't get tired of looking through them.

LOVE what you've done here. Turn on

Not necessarily a turn off at all but this photo just doesn't match the magic in the rest of your port.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/9671030 **18+ Turn on!


Lots more great images that I see. Turned on!

Meg101 wrote:
Do i?

I like that you're my-sized

Nothing in your port particularly jumps out at me. I think it's the presentation, not necessarily the ideas/poses.

For example,
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18225020 **18+ This would work better in a different setting, more dramatic lighting. It's just bright and just seems like you picked a random spot on the floor to take a picture.

I don't see a lot of variation in expression. Some, but not a lot. If you asked me to look at a picture and choose an emotion to match...
Can't really put my finger on any mood that is conveyed in these photos.

Not really turned on, but if you asked me to shoot with you, I'd say yes because I want the experience.

JimmyRayy wrote:
me?

You!

I'm not gonna critique the photography, but I'm just gonna say ignoring you, none of the photos themselves were executed in a way that WOWs me.

This for example: makes me hope it's a drawing... I'd excuse a lack of depth in a 2d drawing. Don't like the vignetting.

Turn off. You look very flat, and it doesn't bring out your lovely feminine features. Work those muscles to create that shapely arch.

Quote that motivates me. "If it hurts, it probably looks good" Or something along those lines...

On the right track for being a turn on. You know where the light is, and it casts lovely shadows that highlight your bone structure in your face. I think I might be allergic to pink cloth though... ACHOO!

Too much of you is hidden. Sometimes the hair in face CAN work if there is some form of variation... whether it be hair color, or lighting. Darker hair is harder to get either effect.

Here is an example of a 'hair in the face' pic that works. The way the light catches is very appealing to the eye.. er.. well at least my eye--err eyes. No wait-- one eye. It's Halloween! I'm a pirate! Yarrr


But notice none of these critiques are against you as a model... more against your choices. I want you to see what I think looks good (or doesn't).

Nothing really turns me on

Inventor wrote:
Does my work turn you on?

Your avatar was focused and detailed and made me excited to click on your profile. I like that the hair sparkles... kinda reminds me of... Team Edward lolz


Hmmm... iiiiinteresting...

I didn't really see anything that I liked as much as I liked your avatar.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/4547370 **18++ I kinda like this one just for the metaphors it queues in my head. Ya know, with the crotch being all on fire and stuff.

I feel like your fetish work is missing something... They just feel fairly raw to me. Raw and untouched is good for artistic work, but I feel fetish just needs a little something extra.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/4484530 **18+ Turn off. It looks like she's checking out the moth hovering around the light. Oh and she happens to be bound while doing it. Her expression doesn't show me at all that she's into what's going on with her. Image doesn't look sharp.

Yeah, it was the sharpness and details of your avatar that gave it that "ooh!" factor.

Not turned on...

Steve Wall wrote:
Tell me if I'm hitting the switch, or tell me where it is...

Your avatar made me reach for my switch to turn it on... I have to look at the rest of your port before I make that decision though.

If your series pictures were a thousand words, I skip over them because they're tl;dr and don't have the attention span for it. If I were a fan of yours, or if I were researching about you, I would take the time to try to understand what your series photos mean. Instead I am taking more time explaining to you why I'm not taking the time to appreciate those serieses...es. Maybe I will do it later, but right now I'm "brushing through" to try and catch up on this thread.

I like the top. I don't like the hiked shoulders/missing neck in the bottom photo. It's too light for a silhouette, and too dark for me to appreciate all the model's beauty and features.

Hair not working for me.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/7975813 **18+ nice shadows.

You've got some good photos, but it's not different enough for it to be a turn on.

Maybe I'll go check out those series photos you've got now...

Beach Photo wrote:
ME?!   (or more importantly - my work)

I wanted to honor both questions. Quirky is a turn on when it comes to photographers. I judge that by profile pages. I see the normal standard MM stuff on your page. Nothing wrong with that. Someone that reveals their interesting personality in their profile page while still keeping it to the point turns me on.


Your work...

Before clicking on your port I started singing '99 bottles of beer on the wall' but replaced bottles of beer with 'photos of yours' Don't ask me how that's relevant. Maybe I was getting ready to 'take one down pass it around'?

ANYWHO...

Turrrrrn on! (Are you rolling your r's for that? Good!) It's different. Interesting. Sexy and fun to look at.

doesn't compare to the above photo. Say cheese! Or better yet HallowEEEEEEEEn. There's no smile in the eyes. It looks forced.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19265277 **18+ I want to see you playing around with this kind of stuff with different models.

Interesting... I mean that in a good way!

Excellent!

Make that umbrella dot EXACTLY in the center of the photograph, and this will definitely grab my attention. It's kinda hypnotizing as it....

Oh wow. An amputee! Oh wait... that's just her gloved arm being eaten by matching color furniture. Be careful when choosing colors. It can be very dangerous! Limbs will disappear if the background is the same. They can get lost in... limbo. I couldn't resist the opportunity for that pun. Sorry.

I want to draw this!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19269380 **18+ and this!

I do like this.

Some photos are capital "OOH!" Others are meh. There are a lot of photos. I am not convinced all are necessary.

*take one down... (because I'm a Charger fan for life!) pass it around... 98 photos of yours on the wall*

Sorry about your loss last night I did win my pool this week because of it though!