Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

Kelsey Baile

Posts: 10

Brockville, Ontario, Canada

I would be interested in your opinion smile

Jan 02 13 11:12 pm Link

Photographer

LikelyStudio

Posts: 4

Orlando, Florida, US

seems like an interesting game.

I'm in!

Jan 03 13 12:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Jezzyka Luv wrote:
Would you work with me?

No. This looks like a snap shot and though I like the black and white tones, it's not of great quality. The pose is not the best and left hand is awkward. Also your expression is lacking.

Jan 03 13 09:46 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Bronte Ann wrote:
Me please smile

Probably. The image itself appears a little over processed, but overall nice color scheme. The outfit looks pretty good on you and shows that you have a decent figure. The pose could be improved upon though but I like your hair style and color. Also nice facial features and smile.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/21/50dbddef136dd_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/21/50dbdc8cd99ee_m.jpg

Jan 03 13 10:50 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Christine J Summers wrote:
Me smile

Yes. You have lovely features- I like your light soft wispy blond hair with your greenish eyes. Very pretty! And the bra looks good on you. Expression is okay- doesn't seem to reach your eyes though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130102/22/50e527eaef63f_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31090841 18+

Jan 03 13 09:33 pm Link

Model

Topher John

Posts: 1

Huntington Beach, California, US

Me please!! big_smile

Jan 04 13 12:03 am Link

Photographer

GT3

Posts: 4

Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa

Hit me...

Jan 04 13 04:13 am Link

Photographer

Dontez Akins

Posts: 327

Douglasville, Georgia, US

go for it

Jan 04 13 04:45 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Denique Lindsay wrote:
me?!

No. You're a bit too fitness for me- I don't think our styles would work well together. Also I don't like the shoes with the rest of your outfit, though your pose is pretty good.

I like better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121223/17/50d7b51262d2d_m.jpg

Jan 04 13 11:38 pm Link

Retoucher

Agustin_0

Posts: 17

Buenos Aires, Buenos Aires, Argentina

How about me?

Jan 05 13 01:37 pm Link

Model

Audrian Aubri

Posts: 3

Houston, Texas, US

Hello everyone! Just a fresh face, i would love to hear your comments on my pictures would you work with me?

Jan 05 13 06:46 pm Link

Model

Lizzy Takahashi

Posts: 54

Tulsa, Oklahoma, US

Hey-o

Jan 06 13 02:41 pm Link

Photographer

My name is Frank

Posts: 554

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

Jan 06 13 03:04 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Top Level Studio wrote:
New avatar for me.  What do you think?

No. It's a bit weird for me- The top image of the model is okay- and I like her shirt and hair color but the bottom image with the intense gaze is a bit much. And I don't really like the background color, especially with the bright red hair.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121002/18/506b9235bb1a8_m.jpg

Jan 06 13 06:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

PhotoByOve wrote:
We still playing :-) ?

Yes. Lovely model- well cropped image and I love how the model's hair is framed around her face and her blue eyes. Nice use of the color red though would like to see more color on the lips. Also would like to see more connection in the expression.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081218/07/494a714cb6a99_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090716/09/4a5f555797c7e_m.jpg

Jan 06 13 06:41 pm Link

Photographer

Dan Brady

Posts: 610

Perth, Western Australia, Australia

Yes please big_smile

Jan 06 13 06:59 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Rob J Photo wrote:
oh yup!

Not sure. While I do like the mask a lot and the fur around it, and the model's light brown eyes are pretty, I just can't stand the expression -it's blank and there's no connection to the camera. Also the lips and skin don't look great. And the snowflake is a great idea but it's out of focus.

Jan 06 13 07:36 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Mandee87 wrote:
What do you think smile ?

Maybe. Don't like the lighting - too dark, and not sure about the expression. I do like the lacy part of your shirt and the panties look good on you- the image does show off a good figure.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100803/20/4c58dd74af5e7_m.jpg

Jan 06 13 07:44 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Anastazie wrote:
Me thanks

Yes. You have a high fashion look- love the high cheekbones and the color/style of your hair as well as how it frames your face. However, the coloring is a bit off- yellowish skin etc and the expression isn't great- seems like you're glaring.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120929/05/5066e8ce1a9e5_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120926/19/5063bc71e8115_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120926/19/5063bb59f21ce_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120926/19/5063baf490658_m.jpg

Jan 08 13 11:19 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Digital Blitz wrote:

No. The image is too dark for me- and the model's pose, makeup and expression is not very good.

Jan 08 13 11:59 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Marin Photography wrote:
Give it a try........

Maybe. The image is a bit too up close/in your face though. Also the pose makes the model look like there's no neck which is never good. But I do like the makeup and the model's eyes are beautiful. Expression is a bit blank though.

This:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/13/50e9e73fa9f41_m.jpg

Jan 09 13 07:38 am Link

Photographer

Brosius Photographics

Posts: 1491

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

well, how about it?

Jan 09 13 07:51 am Link

Model

Autumn Rose Brightly

Posts: 1097

Crowley, Texas, US

Me? smile

Jan 09 13 07:52 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Elegance Reflected wrote:
I am in

I would say maybe. The image is a little too close up and crop a bit close as well. But the llama has lovely features, though her expression is kind of blank. Also I don't like that bottom part of the image is blurry.

Much Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120916/03/5055ae060ce07_m.jpg

Jan 09 13 01:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Ksenia wrote:
I love when model can make some creativity on her photos....

Probably. I like the blue color scheme but your skin color is a bit pale. However, love the look of your thick hair and the way it's styled. And the pose is decent- seems like you have a nice figure. Though not sure about your expression- would like to see more of your face.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120821/17/50342ae2c9264_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121228/18/50de580fd0ee6_m.jpg

Jan 09 13 09:53 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Herb Way wrote:
OK, how about me?

Maybe. I like the color scheme, and the pose is decent- I also like the model's hair but would like to see more of the model's face.

Jan 11 13 07:59 am Link

Model

HEATHER 19

Posts: 1156

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Hi
Skipped or I am lost in the buch :0

Jan 11 13 10:51 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

HEATHER 19 wrote:
Hi
Skipped or I am lost in the buch :0

Must've skipped you so I'll do you now.

Yes, I like how your hair is in movement around you and that dress looks great on you. The pose could be better though- would like it more if your left hand wasn't hiding behind you. The makeup looks pretty good but expression could be more engaged. Also, while the black and white tones are decent, am wondering how it looks in color.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120412/10/4f870a54eba24_m.jpg

Jan 11 13 08:59 pm Link

Model

RenaBeana

Posts: 1104

Lillington, North Carolina, US

Me?

Jan 11 13 09:04 pm Link

Photographer

Catalin Palosanu

Posts: 65

Bacău, Bacău, Romania

me?

Jan 12 13 01:37 am Link

Photographer

MidnightSun Designs

Posts: 358

WINSTON SALEM, North Carolina, US

me next

Jan 12 13 04:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Kelsey Baile wrote:
I would be interested in your opinion smile

I would say maybe. I like that your personality seems to shine through in this image and you have a cute smile (only thing is it doesn't reach your eyes). The hair is nice too- love how it's curled. But the pose isn't too flattering- especially your arms are awkward, seems like you have no neck and the dress makes you look short- Even if you *are* short, you don't want to enhance that.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121227/15/50dcdca282b91_m.jpg

Jan 12 13 07:55 pm Link

Photographer

Beyond the Physical

Posts: 903

HAZLET, New Jersey, US

Tell Me

Jan 12 13 07:58 pm Link

Photographer

RavenRavageRaptor

Posts: 8

Boston, Massachusetts, US

cool

Jan 12 13 08:03 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 7957

Imperial, California, US

Wow!! 91 pages!!!:-)

Let me know, please!

Jan 12 13 08:03 pm Link

Artist/Painter

Translucent Skin

Posts: 2

Scranton, Pennsylvania, US

Photography, film, digital media, traditional media etc... I have to assume what we're all chasing is immortality. To breath life into something that will outlive us all. As with all life, it takes collaboration to make something from nothing. I hope to find some collaborators here. My name is RenDi. Nice to meet you all.

Jan 12 13 08:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

LikelyStudio wrote:
seems like an interesting game.

I'm in!

Yes. This is interesting- and I like it! The model is beautiful- love her blue eyes, glossy hair, bone structure, skin, facial features and that pose- great neck! Pretty good expression as well. I also like the composition. And the Star Wars book and glasses add to the story.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120902/07/504371c134549_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120902/07/504370ee2b724_m.jpg

Jan 12 13 08:22 pm Link

Photographer

Quantum Element

Posts: 274

Austin, Texas, US

You might -maybe- if you like Diane Arbus sort of stuff :-)

Jan 12 13 08:29 pm Link

Model

Chelsea Broussard

Posts: 1

Palmdale, California, US

I wanna know your opinion smile
Thank you

Jan 12 13 08:32 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

QRIS JON wrote:
Me please!! big_smile

Maybe though I'm not really sure what's on your face and shirt- is it paint? What is the point of it? I do like your smile though and it seems like you have pretty decent looks.

Like better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120917/18/5057d3b90b88c_m.jpg

Jan 12 13 09:37 pm Link