Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

Square Jaw Photography

Posts: 378

Fresno, California, US

If you got the time, tell me what you think

Jan 17 13 11:05 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Chelsea Broussard wrote:
I wanna know your opinion smile
Thank you

Yes. I like the warm feel to this image and your smile is lovely. The makeup and your skin look good. Eyes are a nice color but they look to be not natural.  But overall, nice closeup of your face.

Jan 17 13 12:00 pm Link

Model

Anna Kl

Posts: 192

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

whut whut

in da butt

Jan 17 13 04:14 pm Link

Model

Mercy Clark

Posts: 32

Long Beach, California, US

If you're still responding....

Jan 17 13 04:17 pm Link

Photographer

PR Brown

Posts: 98

Los Angeles, California, US

yea or nea

Jan 17 13 04:39 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

ultimate dream wrote:
Base on your av, not at this point in time

I would say maybe. I really like the lighting in this image- and the suit looks great on the model. The pose is a bit "just there" though and I dislike the crop at the bottom. Also don't like the blank expression.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090312/05/49b902bf68c69_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110609/07/4df0d8bb04cea_m.jpg

Jan 17 13 09:14 pm Link

Photographer

Gavin Poh

Posts: 229

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

ive never subscribed to these things but shoot smile

Jan 17 13 09:20 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

chellforte wrote:
I'll have a go at this! big_smile

No. While I like the softness of the image, I don't like the pose- especially the arms are awkward. I also dislike the crop and the background is too dark- blends in with your hair. And though you do have nice shoulders/neck the facial expression is really blank and needs more engagement

Jan 18 13 08:19 am Link

Photographer

B R U N E S C I

Posts: 25319

Bath, England, United Kingdom

Tell me! big_smile

Jan 18 13 08:20 am Link

Photographer

E Delsigne Photography

Posts: 30

Los Angeles, California, US

Thanks for sharing!

I'm in! smile

https://wwwfacebook.com/EDPhotos

Jan 18 13 10:21 am Link

Model

Louis Kline

Posts: 22

EAST ELMHURST, New York, US

young & new smile

Jan 18 13 12:42 pm Link

Photographer

YRG Studios

Posts: 20

Villa Rica, Georgia, US

I'll play!

Jan 18 13 12:54 pm Link

Photographer

Julia Koch

Posts: 28

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

would you?

Jan 18 13 09:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Just Li wrote:
why not smile

No. I can't really make you out clearly in the smaller view of the avatar and while the bathtub with bubbles theme is cool, it would be better if the leg up was extended more and if your expression wasn't so blank.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120927/10/50648929a3daa_m.jpg

Jan 18 13 09:37 pm Link

Model

Holly Summers

Posts: 173

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

So would ya?  smile

Jan 18 13 09:41 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

dd photography wrote:
Would you?

Yes. Sexy outfit- really shows off her figure, sexy and seductive llama (that makeup is smoldering!) and I really like the color scheme. The pose is also quite good as is the llama's bronzed skin, facial features and jewelry. Nice background as well. Though expression could be more engaged and the llama's head is tilting upward, so can see up her nose...

Wow:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/22/50ea689a768b1_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/22/50ea689d0e436_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121225/14/50da23c21caee_m.jpg

Jan 18 13 10:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Danel Photography wrote:
Would you work with me???

Yes. I like the lighting and color scheme here, as well as the pretty ocean background. The model's white suit is lovely and looks great on her. Plus she has a good pose going on and great long neckline and bone structure. Also nice how you filled the frame.

Jan 18 13 10:19 pm Link

Model

Keyana Annette

Posts: 5

Phoenix, Arizona, US

me please

Jan 19 13 10:32 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Valenten Photography wrote:
me smile ?

Maybe. I like the background color and the composition is nice. The male model looks nice, even though his eyes are covered- he's got nice hair and facial features. The BLIND word is well placed. It's a unique sort of image to use for an avatar but well done.

Jan 20 13 12:41 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Kyle T Edwards wrote:
Would you work with me in a house?
Would you work with me with a mouse?


(See, this is why I should not be allowed to post while on any medication that the pharmacist says "might make you dopey.")

Haha. And yes. I love the images that utilizes a mirror and you've executed it pretty well. The model looks good- I like the red lingerie and her wavy hair. The expression needs a little work as it should be seductive and there should be emotion from the eyes which I'm not getting.

Jan 20 13 01:02 am Link

Photographer

JVo Photography

Posts: 8

Grand Prairie, Texas, US

Don't worry, I'm a professional flasher.

Jan 20 13 01:13 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Axana wrote:
Hit meh.

I would say maybe. Looks like you have a very nice fit figure and the pose is decent, just not the placement of your hand that is in front of your leg. Cute bikini and love that background- water is so pretty! Nice lighting as well and cool that your hair is blowing in the wind. Expression looks natural which is good.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120918/07/5058810d31f07_m.jpg

Jan 21 13 01:50 pm Link

Model

xMissLaurenElizabethx

Posts: 84

Boca Raton, Florida, US

Would you work with me?

Jan 21 13 01:58 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Shelly Sunflower wrote:
smile

No. It kind of looks like a snap shot and it's not really modeling- You're just there smiling with your hands over your breasts. And it's not even done in a sexy way. Also the smile doesn't reach your eyes- and I don't really like the eyeshadow. I do think your red nails look great though! And you have nice skin.

Jan 21 13 02:17 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

JVE Photography wrote:
Me? smile

Hm, probably not. The model is pretty but the bikini top looks very much like a bra and I don't like that. The pose is okay though but expression not very engaged. Pretty blue background though.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130119/12/50fb02f062c05_m.jpg

Jan 21 13 05:34 pm Link

Model

Brittany lynn MODEL

Posts: 2

North Port, Florida, US

Critique me please!!!

Jan 21 13 05:36 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

The Aperture Studio wrote:
I'm game.

No. The model looks not so great- I dislike the messy hair look and her expression is really lacking. Also the pose is weird and close up is too in your face.

Nice:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16867122 18+

Jan 22 13 07:14 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

GRPhotos wrote:
Ill try my luck!

Maybe. I like the background and the color scheme -The model's shirt looks great on her and I like her overall look and she has a pretty good expression as well. The scarf seems a bit in the way though and placement of the model right in the center of the image is a bit boring.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130114/17/50f4ac4566819_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130102/19/50e4f57b5f3c9_m.jpg

Jan 22 13 07:32 pm Link

Model

Danielle Diener

Posts: 4

Lincoln, Delaware, US

Very interested! Do me!!

Jan 22 13 07:40 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

richardsphotographybc wrote:
Me plz.

Not sure. I like the model's dress and the way it is swaying in the wind- and it looks good on the model but the model herself looks a little unsure and expression is a bit tense. Also, placement of arms and legs are a bit awkward. I like the background/location though.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121002/16/506b75f9701c9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121203/15/50bd3812dec41_m.jpg

Jan 22 13 08:17 pm Link

Model

Masha Rudenko

Posts: 9

New York, New York, US

Me?

Jan 22 13 08:25 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Caveman Creations wrote:
Just changed mine. What do you think?

No. I don't like the look of the model- the makeup is a bit much though the shimmery blue lips look decent. However, skin looks pallid and hair is not the best, plus expression is not great. She does have nice eyes though.

Jan 22 13 09:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

NikkiVendetta wrote:
This could be interesting.

No. Though I like your outfit (though jeans are a bit dark, blending in with the shoes etc), the pose is not flattering - Also looks like you have no neck. And the expression is not good- should be more engaging.

Jan 23 13 09:27 am Link

Photographer

juliarabkin

Posts: 600

Rochester, New York, US

check it out

Jan 23 13 09:45 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Nadine-J wrote:
Let's have a try :-)

Maybe. I like the outfit on you- seems like you have a nice figure but the pose is not great- looks like you're just standing there and your arms are awkward. The makeup and hair is well done- but I don't like the expression. The background is cool with that light reflection of you.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130116/11/50f70014f115d_m.jpg

Jan 23 13 10:41 am Link

Model

Riot Grrl Photography

Posts: 3

Baltimore, Maryland, US

How about moi?

Jan 23 13 04:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Nadia Selen wrote:
Entertaining thread is, entertaining.

I lolled => "But not sure why he's wearing sunglasses while inside, and reading a magazine."

?
No. Not sure why you're posing in that way- looks a bit http://assets.modelmayhem.com/images/smilies/scary.pngas if you're in a horror movie, especially the hands and feet. But I guess it's good that you can contort that way. Also your expression is not good.

Jan 23 13 06:26 pm Link

Model

Lisa Agee

Posts: 2

Carmel, Indiana, US

Interested in your comments.

Jan 23 13 06:34 pm Link

Photographer

richardsphotographybc

Posts: 415

Langley, British Columbia, Canada

winking_wonder wrote:

Not sure. I like the model's dress and the way it is swaying in the wind- and it looks good on the model but the model herself looks a little unsure and expression is a bit tense. Also, placement of arms and legs are a bit awkward. I like the background/location though.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121002/16/506b75f9701c9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121203/15/50bd3812dec41_m.jpg

Thank You Winking Wonder. Much appreciated. Also thanks for the listing.

Jan 23 13 06:47 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5798

New York, New York, US

Christo C93 wrote:
What about me?smile

Probably. Though I think the coloring is off in the image. But you have a great physique and I like the curve your body has made in your pose (just the placement of left arm is a bit awkward). Also you have as strong face but kind of a blank expression - more engagement would be nice there.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120826/19/503ada465abf5_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120919/04/5059b2bab5109_m.jpg

Jan 23 13 08:59 pm Link