Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

Shanel Simone

Posts: 42

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Would you work with me?!

Dec 17 12 10:08 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

NeufeldDesigns wrote:
Does mine make the cut?

Yes. The image is a bit dark for me but I actually like it- The dress looks great on the model and you can distinguish it from the background. Pose is okay but don't like the left arm as it's just kind of sticking out but model looks good with an decent expression and love how her hair frames her face.

Dec 17 12 10:45 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Brittany Young MUA

Posts: 77

Atlanta, Georgia, US

me?

Dec 17 12 10:47 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Lost Photo wrote:
I can't believe you still have the patience for this, but I'll play anyway!  smile

Maybe. Not sure if I would have that type of mask painted on but you've done a good job with capturing the details of it and I love the llama's eyes and that her long lashes still stand out despite the black around it. The crop/positioning of the llama's face is well done but don't know about the background color- not so fond of it.

Cool:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120825/19/503983f3c3e79_m.jpg

Dec 17 12 11:24 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Tricolorkittie wrote:
How about me?

I would say maybe. I like the blue color scheme and the clarity of the shot. Model looks good- especially makeup and jewelry but the pose is not great- she's just standing there. Also expression is not engaged.

Like better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/070502/07/46387603c80ba_m.jpg

Dec 18 12 12:14 am Link

Model

Philipp-T

Posts: 84

Freiburg, Baden-Württemberg, Germany

I'm in smile

Dec 18 12 12:15 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

MS JO wrote:
Opinions rock!

I would say maybe. The image is decent and your pose is pretty good but expression is very blank- should be more engaged. Also not sure I like the background. But your hair is done up nicely and I like the colorful flowers in them.

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080619/23/485b23ebb5f1e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121114/18/50a451d1b72c9_m.jpg

Dec 18 12 10:12 pm Link

Model

AnthonyCruzNYC

Posts: 4

New York, New York, US

Yes / No / maybe so?

Dec 18 12 10:21 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

samsationalphotos wrote:
What about me. If not based on my avatar,which picture should i switch it to

No. I don't think the angle is so great and the placement of arm is awkward- also looks like the model has no neck.. But she does have a cute expression. Also, though the background location is cool, I dislike the blurriness.

Some of these images are good, especially row 2 and row 4:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121211/23/50c834743e555_m.jpg

Dec 19 12 12:13 am Link

Model

Leone P

Posts: 515

Batley, England, United Kingdom

Okie doke, give it to me straight lol.

Leone P.

Dec 19 12 03:22 am Link

Photographer

TheCustomTs

Posts: 24

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Holy crow! I wonder if I will be a yay or nay. You have a lot of people wanting your opinion, you are definitely revered.

Dec 19 12 05:20 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

emily-jayne wrote:
Would you? :-)

Probably not. You have a nice look- lovely hair and pretty features, but the reason I'm not sold is because your expression isn't good- very sleepy and bland with no real emotion or connection. And the bare skin as well as the black/white doesn't do it for me.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121119/07/50aa49a656db6_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121214/03/50cb099d4bc44_m.jpg

Dec 20 12 12:43 am Link

Makeup Artist

Dorota MUA

Posts: 82

Leeds, England, United Kingdom

interesting question tongue
Yes / No / maybe?

Dec 20 12 01:25 am Link

Photographer

Allard Kamermans

Posts: 13

Houten, Utrecht, Netherlands

Based on Avatar : Sure thing.

Dec 20 12 06:21 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Maddy Powers wrote:
interested in your opinion smile

Yes though your expression needs work, I really like your sense of style - the outfit looks really good on you and accenates your body. The pose of the lower part of your body is good.. on top though would do something different with your arms.. also the crop at the bottom of image that cuts off your shoes, I dont like. Nice background though.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121213/14/50ca59223642b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121214/19/50cbed4a2305d_m.jpg

Dec 21 12 12:07 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Paul Pardue Photography wrote:
i'll play

Yes. Overall I like the model, especially the shirt with the pretty silver necklace. I think the crop is pretty good and pose shows off her figure and long neck. Nice hair and light makeup but her expression is kind of haughty,  bored which is probably the only complaint I have.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081230/23/495b21906ebd2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080430/03/48182168bdd9a_m.jpg

Dec 21 12 12:47 am Link

Model

PerfectionxQueenie

Posts: 90

Sacramento, California, US

Let me know,personally I love it but I am having second thoughts about it as my avatar.
I have a great idea for a headshot which soon hopefully I will put that in as my next avatar.

Dec 21 12 01:08 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Kenna Lynn wrote:
Just a casual shot.

No. This is clearly a snap shot and not a very good one.. It's blurry, and doesn't have the best light. Your expression is weak- not engaged at all and pose is just kind of there.. Plus the background is not professional.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121215/15/50cd056db3781_m.jpg

Dec 21 12 04:39 pm Link

Model

Brandi Olsen

Posts: 1

Savannah, Georgia, US

What about me? smile

Dec 21 12 04:45 pm Link

Model

Kristin Howell

Posts: 101

Morehead, Kentucky, US

Yes, no, maybe? smile

Dec 21 12 07:47 pm Link

Photographer

CBs Photography

Posts: 842

Ontario, California, US

I'm game.

Dec 21 12 07:54 pm Link

Model

MireyGal

Posts: 9

Selkirk, Manitoba, Canada

just got some new pics done, including the avatar. smile

Dec 21 12 09:53 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Philipp-T wrote:
What about me?

Yes. While the high contrast dark shadows are a bit much for me, I can tell that you're very handsome and love your chiseled features. You've got great bone structure, nice hair, intense searing eyes and what looks like a decent figure. The expression is a bit too intense, but kind of fits with the black and white of the image.

Wow:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121213/19/50ca96a3a330c_m.jpg

Dec 21 12 10:37 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Shanel Simone wrote:
Would you work with me?!

Maybe. I like the milky skin you have and the long neck. Also the gold makeup and long lashes are quite beautiful but the angle of your face could be more flattering and  your expression could be stronger. The arm that's cut off doesn't help either.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121204/18/50beacf26d996_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121204/18/50bead0ad25a8_m.jpg

Dec 21 12 11:02 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Brittany Young MUA wrote:
me?

Yes. I really love the colors in this image and the silvery smoky shadow looks great, but would be even greater if the lashes were longer, more noticeable. I would also like to see a bit more color on lips and cheeks.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/17/50bc000eae5b1_m.jpg

Dec 22 12 12:03 am Link

Model

Sibby S

Posts: 178

Adelaide, South Australia, Australia

me please smile

Dec 22 12 12:19 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 900

San Francisco, California, US

Would you?

Dec 22 12 12:27 am Link

Model

Thiha

Posts: 15

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

Curious to know smile
Thanks

Dec 22 12 01:14 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Philipp-T wrote:
I'm in smile

Yes, here is my response: http://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?threa … st17844387

Dec 22 12 01:15 pm Link

Photographer

Poulsons Photography

Posts: 4451

Duchesne, Utah, US

Would you?

Dec 22 12 05:45 pm Link

Model

Jhomel

Posts: 180

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

How abt me?

Dec 22 12 06:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Uknownceleb wrote:
Yes / No / maybe so?

Yes. I like your facial features and the angle/pose you're showing. I would maybe lose the red plaid shirt but otherwise outfit looks decent. And your expression is pretty good too.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121202/16/50bbeef44b880_m.jpg

Dec 22 12 10:34 pm Link

Photographer

A Virtual Inferno

Posts: 20

San Jose, California, US

Sure, I'll try. It's a selfie, though.

Dec 22 12 10:39 pm Link

Model

KJlove22

Posts: 5

Lancaster, Pennsylvania, US

ok:)

Dec 22 12 10:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Leone P wrote:
Okie doke, give it to me straight lol.

Leone P.

No. This is clearly a snap shot. Though I do like your blue hair and your eyes are lovely, I'm not sure about the angle, the crop isn't great and looks like you have no neck. Also, expression can be improved. I like the white outfit you have on though.

Dec 22 12 10:56 pm Link

Model

Cristal Bell

Posts: 22

Newport News, Virginia, US

I would like to know!

Dec 22 12 10:58 pm Link

Model

Kathrynn Gatton

Posts: 271

Waverly, Kansas, US

I would love some feedback. I am in the process of overhauling my portfolio due to a recent weight change. Thanks!

Dec 23 12 05:52 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

TheCustomTs wrote:
Holy crow! I wonder if I will be a yay or nay. You have a lot of people wanting your opinion, you are definitely revered.

Maybe. I'm not sure what the concept of this image is - why the glass bottle is there etc but I do like the model. I think her pose is lovely and graceful. Also, the eye makeup is a pretty color though would like to see more of her face.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121217/22/50d00dd42cc65_m.jpg

Dec 23 12 09:33 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5637

New York, New York, US

Dorota MUA wrote:
interesting question tongue
Yes / No / maybe?

Yes. While I'm not a big fan of blood, I like your work a lot.. Glitter is definitely my thing and you've applied it masterfully. I really enjoy the deep purple, pink, gold for the eyemakeup and that it goes up towards the model's hair. Also love the gold sprinkled on the model's bare skin. And the nude pale pinkish lips go well with everything!

Wow:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120807/08/5021387ce9230_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/00/50d41fcb2c59a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120921/12/505cc20c69198_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121220/01/50d2d6c0b8889_m.jpg

Dec 23 12 10:01 pm Link

Model

Justin Kayy

Posts: 19

Dublin, Dublin, Ireland

Your thoughts

Dec 24 12 04:51 am Link