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Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 3716
San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
Jorge Kreimer wrote: The first thing i notice here is that the mouth and eyes are out of focus. The focus is on the ear. This immediately distracts me from the emotion here. I love the mouth. It is just right, but the eyes look squinted. I find myself confused on what this image is trying to say.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
B C L wrote: This is great. Very crisp and clean. The expression on the woman is perfect. I can feel the longing or loneliness she is feeling. The way her hand is holding her shirt really adds to it. Perfecty expressed.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
Madison P Cook wrote: This is a fun shot, and i can see a lot of work went into it. However, the expression feels forced to me. It can be hard to make an expression look genuine. But that is what it takes to get the viewer to connect.
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BrandonLundby
Posts: 117
Las Vegas, Nevada, US
Poulsons Photography wrote: This is great. Very crisp and clean. The expression on the woman is perfect. I can feel the longing or loneliness she is feeling. The way her hand is holding her shirt really adds to it. Perfecty expressed. thank you!
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Mortonovich
Posts: 6209
San Diego, California, US
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_eMMe_
Posts: 866
Florence, Toscana, Italy
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HEATHER 19
Posts: 1156
Boston, Massachusetts, US
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TDSImages
Posts: 1017
Salt Lake City, Utah, US
This?
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Thiha
Posts: 15
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
Select Models wrote: yes. great work. i can totally feel the emotion here, and it is very believable. Well done.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
John Allan wrote: close, but i find the face expression to look forced.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
ChiMo wrote: kind of torn on this one. she just seems to be staring at something.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
HEATHER 19 wrote: Here is one In the middle on this one. The expression almost looks blank to me. lifeless.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
TDSImages wrote: This?
yes, solitude and loneliness. Works great.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
Thiha Ty Htut wrote: not really any feeling in this one.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
Drew Smith Photography wrote: Cop for this then:
Very well done. full of emotion. Well portrayed. This is a perfect example.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
Jeffrey M Fletcher wrote: Cool picture, but I have no idea what is trying to be expressed.
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Pixyst
Posts: 356
Phoenix, Arizona, US
What are your thoughts?
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
Pixyst wrote: What are your thoughts?
The pose is great. With the right face expression this would be perfect. But there seems to be no emotion in her face. Is she excited, shocked, embarrassed?
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Jeffrey M Fletcher
Posts: 4861
Asheville, North Carolina, US
Poulsons Photography wrote: Cool picture, but I have no idea what is trying to be expressed. Perhaps that's good: it's certainly supposed to be something that would be difficult to describe using words. Trying for enigmatic, a surreal variant of that enigmatic Mona Lisa theme. My thanks.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
MissLaurelle wrote: Shows a feeling of shyness, while at the same time an excited look. Well done.
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C A T H Y
Posts: 5464
Anaheim, California, US
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
Kristen_C wrote: I really can't tell if its a look of passion, tiredness, or happy.
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
C A T H Y wrote: The top one works. It feels sad and alone. But the bottom not so much. the expression is almost one of warning!
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retiredanddeleted
Posts: 3561
Azul, Buenos Aires, Argentina
this is the one I really wanna get your intake on
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Poulsons Photography
Posts: 4453
Duchesne, Utah, US
MissLaurelle wrote: this is the one I really wanna get your intake on I think this one is very well done. I felt as though I just walked in on you unexpected. The look on your face says it all. Great work. PS. I would love to work with you if you are ever in my area. You would be a great addition to what I do!
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