Kelsey -Scamp- Swan wrote: I've seen you've done this with a few models, you've not only told them why a shot sucks, but you've told them what to do to make it better artistically. I'm desperately seeking to broaden my horizons and I would love to be told what I'm doing wrong. (or right? That couldn't hurt either =] )
You have 16 pictures. Do not use folders. You will piss people off.
This is horrible.
Do you think you are well represented?
If you saw this is someone elses port, what would you think?
You look awkward. It is out of focus, and boring.
The railing is distracting, as is the whiter wall behind your head.
Damianne wrote: Sure. I'll roll with it. Always love a more in depth critique.
I dont know how to tell you how bad this picture is. It makes my ill.
Your face sucks. Open your eyes, and I dont want to see your brain either.
Your arm is dead. Bend it.
Youve completely lost your other arm.
You look pissed and like you should have a unibrow...Bad expression
Neck lines should be taken out in photoshop. As should your stray eyebrow hairs. This is not flattering.
Lady Vailen wrote: minus the fact I have no shoot photos yet, but critique my face and makeup instead please (oh and the boobs, they won't go down. I tried and don't know how to wear nice tops to make em look flattering)
Ive critiqued you before, havent I?
If you have dark eye makeup on, you need to keep your lips more on the natural side of things or you end up looking like a clown.
amycore wrote: I'm still working on building my port and would love constructive criticism.
This photo is bad.
It looks like youre poking yourself in the eye. Probably because the makeup sucks. Lazy eye, loss of hand and fat arms. Keep your arms away from your body...they shouldnt be pressed against you, especially for close shots like this.
We never show our brains to our photographers.
Keep your chin down. You also need to watch your double chin. Its very pronounced in a majority of your photos.
Your face should be better lit. And watch your hands. You can clench your fists, but you have to make it look pretty. Its our job as models to make things that other people cant make beautiful or comfortable look effortlessly eye appealing.
If you want a chance in this industry you need to practice