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Model
Vinny
Posts: 93
Harrisburg, Pennsylvania, US


Let me know! smile
May 09 13 08:59 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


BreDesiree wrote:
Just curious smile

Probably not. The quality of the image is not the best - It's a bit blurry and I dislike the shadow in the background, as well as the bulky jacket and scarf you are wearing-- Not sure why you need all the outerwear, especially since the shoot is indoors. The jean shorts look good on you though and shows off your long legs, and would probably look good with just the tshirt you have under the jacket etc. The way your legs are crossed look nice-- good relaxed pose but the hair style and expression needs work- You look upset/blank..

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130502/00/51821274d035c_m.jpg

May 09 13 10:20 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Alex Haze wrote:
Just started modeling, curious what you think! wink

Yes. I like your muscly physique.. A lot and you have beautiful blue/green eyes. Your pose is decent. But the shadow from your arm on your face is a bit much, and expression could be more engaging. Not bad for someone just starting out though!

May 09 13 12:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Alexxis Johnson
Posts: 15
San Diego, California, US


Yes or no?smile
May 09 13 02:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Elyse Nicole Craft wrote:
Im curious!

Yes. You have a lovely look- I love the color and style of your hair, and I like your delicate facial features as well.. And the light makeup is applied beautifully. Looks like you have great skin as well. The lingerie looks good and doesn't expose too much. I just don't like the crop at the bottom of the image but that's not your fault. Expression is okay.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130219/21/512460740c3e9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130219/21/512461521e431_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130507/19/5189b64d7c9ab_m.jpg

May 09 13 06:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Deletethisaccount
Posts: 79
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


I'm in!
May 09 13 06:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Mandee Rose Photography wrote:
I'm down for a critique!

No. First of all, it's hard to make out the details of the shot. It's also got overblown lighting, and a gritty, scratchy feel which I'm not a fan of.. I prefer smooth. The llama is pretty, but her expression look uncomfortable and forced, and her left hand is awkward.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130430/19/51808359d85e9_m.jpg

May 09 13 08:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Arielle Laurito wrote:
Well let me know what you think of my avatar? smile

I would say maybe. The overall feeling of the image is a little dark but in this case, it's in a good way. I like the green foliage background and you have a nice pose going- it looks relaxed and natural. Also the dress color and material is lovely- though looks a little big on top. The curls in your hair are also nice but expression looks a bit angry- Not sure if that was intentional?

Cute:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/13/50d4d9c497cbb_m.jpg

May 09 13 08:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Barely StL
Posts: 759
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


New avatar. smile
May 09 13 10:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


lnvidia wrote:
Would you?

I think yes. I like the outfit on you- the lingerie is particularly sexy and your fur jacket  covers just enough. Also can tell from the image that you have a nice figure and the pose is decent. Your expression could use improvement though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130221/22/512716bd62178_m.jpg

May 10 13 08:21 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Cherrie Nova
Posts: 549
Fairfield, California, US


Moi? Sil vous plait et merci. (the lil bit of french that popped in my head. lol)
May 10 13 08:34 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Starsquid
Posts: 356
s-Gravenhage, Zuid-Holland, Netherlands


hey winking wonder! got a new avatar, so I'm curious!
May 10 13 08:41 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


[url=http://florida.arrests.org/Arrests/Tyler_Waitt_2207044 wrote:
Tyler[/url] Mulcahey] How about me?! B)

Maybe. The suit looks good on you though placement of left hand is kind of awkward. I also think you could do without the glasses, but I really like the blueish/gray color of your eyes. Expression could be more engaging.

May 10 13 08:57 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AWP Photography
Posts: 164
Chicago, Illinois, US


Have been gone for a bit....new avatar posted. Thanks in advance!
May 11 13 11:49 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DreamPhotography1
Posts: 256
Ivins, Utah, US


I would love to hear your opinion. Thanks in advance for your time.
May 11 13 04:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Mekare Acton wrote:
This is interesting i'd like to see.

No, as this is not really my style. The yellow pollen overpowers the image so that my focus isn't to the model which it should be... And the lighting is a bit dim. Also I'm not a fan of the outfit - though I do like the leather jacket on the model. Her strawberry blond hair also looks good. Pose is kind of just there and composition not too interesting, as the model is just planted in the middle of the image.

Better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130217/03/5120c07b7f0e9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130217/03/5120c26541e6d_m.jpg

This is cool:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130217/03/5120c1b8931bf_m.jpg

May 12 13 07:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Olivia Ashton wrote:
I want to play.

Yes. You are lovely - Long lean figure and I love that lacy white cream dress on you. Your hair is pretty- nice color and style, and the makeup looks good on you. Expression is decent- intense in a good way and you definitely have connection with the camera. Nice posing as well.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130422/06/517534de4fd4e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130422/15/5175ba72c13ff_m.jpg

May 12 13 08:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Sorry, DP
May 12 13 08:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


-Studio 8- wrote:
me??

Yes. I like the crop of the image- nice colors and smooth texture. The light purple color looks great on the model and love her hair color/style. She's also got a great, genuine smile for expression.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130105/09/50e865b0bd308_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31604161 18+

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29938213 18+

May 13 13 09:12 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


JBerman Photography wrote:
May 13 13 11:51 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Connie Berchem
Posts: 10
Asheville, North Carolina, US


It may take a few days to get to me there's an awful lot of requests  Please be brutally honest, I need all the help I can get.

Connie
May 13 13 12:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Journey wrote:
i want to play this game :]

Maybe. The image is a bit of a strange look but you have strong features and what looks like a decent physique. However the angle of your head doesn't show neck and that ear looks disproportionally large. Your expression is intense (in a good way)

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130403/23/515d1ca87be6d_m.jpg

May 13 13 04:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Wake Smith
Posts: 1
Austin, Texas, US


I'd love to hear your thoughts!
May 13 13 06:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


_eMMe_ wrote:
New one!

Yes. I love this.. Beautiful black and white tones, gorgeous hair up do- love how it frames your face, nice makeup job, and I like that profile view of you. And beautiful bare shoulders/back- which makes the image a bit sexy as well.

Lovely:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130506/13/51880fe8205c9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120327/12/4f72159cdf648_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30608066 18+

May 13 13 06:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Zman-Photog
Posts: 19
Missouri City, Texas, US


let me know - please
May 13 13 07:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Alan_K wrote:
Me too please.

Yes. Nice posing by the model- and the basic black outfit looks good on her. You've captured her figure well and expression is decent.

May 13 13 07:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Edward McGowan wrote:
I'll give it a go

Probably. This image is sort of a different style from anything I've done, but I like it. The outfit is simple but looks good on the model. The pose works well and I like the amount of detail you've captured.

I lke:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110929/15/4e84f0bc2f8b0_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130323/21/514e7f28324f2_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110222/10/4d63fb6498190_m.jpg

May 13 13 08:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Bernadette Newberry
Posts: 126
Cincinnati, Ohio, US


I'm curious!
May 13 13 09:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


ShalemLA Photography wrote:
ok...?

I would say yes. I like the white dress and the movement of it - Looks great on the model. The shoes go really well with it too. Posing is pretty good except for the left arm that is hidden behind the model's hair. Expression I think looks genuine.

Like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120730/16/50171259e9cf3_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121221/11/50d4b9dd3e813_m.jpg

May 14 13 08:49 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Elena Antonia Pappas wrote:
WOULD YOU???

Yes. You are lovely. Very sexy looking in the black lingerie and you pull that look off well. Great figure too! I also think you have beautiful hair and facial features, though your expression is a little blank.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120912/03/5050623d3049c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120214/05/4f3a6579d6cf9_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121211/21/50c81149d5d79_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26612705 18+

May 14 13 10:12 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Sarah Victory
Posts: 18
Tampa, Florida, US


I would like to know?
I'll make nothing but improvements.
May 14 13 07:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Vinny  wrote:
Let me know! smile

No. I don't really like the gritty quality and the lighting looks a bit off. But I like the blue shirt on you but not the way your hand is cut off at the bottom of the image- Also it's not the best pose and it detracts from the outfit etc. Your expression looks a bit uncomfortable too.

Maybe:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130509/08/518bc4fc3700b_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130311/05/513dca298fae1_m.jpg

May 15 13 08:37 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Alexxis Johnson wrote:
Yes or no?smile

Yes. Great look - the black shirt looks good on you and love the material. Also like that you can see a faint outline of your very nice figure. Love the color and style of your hair. Expression though could be better- Also I don't like that parts of your face is covered by shadows.

Even better:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130419/16/5171d37ea3dfe_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130403/21/515cfb685de5c_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130403/21/515cfb672aea6_m.jpg

May 15 13 09:06 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Gabrielle Ann Cyr wrote:
I'm in!

Yes! I love the lighting, the colors, the background/location and the model's dress, heels, pose. Model looks good and expression is decent.

This is nice, but would be better if expression didn't look so worried:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130508/20/518b19fa616c0_m.jpg

May 15 13 12:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kaydee-Jean
Posts: 6
Birkenhead, England, United Kingdom


Newbie who is curious smile
May 15 13 01:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Barely StL wrote:
New avatar. smile

Yes. Normally I don't like dark backgrounds, but in this case it works. You've captured the model well and used great lighting to illuminate her. The black underwear looks sexy on the model and her posing is good. I really like her reddish hair and the way it is flung in front of her and the feeling of movement. I also like that I can still see the model's face through her tresses. Nice makeup job and expression too.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121113/03/50a2323799e04_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30621990 18 +

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30715435 18+

May 15 13 07:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Raina Rivera wrote:
Moi? Sil vous plait et merci. (the lil bit of french that popped in my head. lol)

I would say maybe. You have a long lean body and the outfit shows that off well. Also I like the outfit on you and the high heel shoes as well. Your posing is pretty good but not sure what's going on with your expression.

I like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120804/18/501dd2c5f3709_m.jpg

May 16 13 10:00 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,502
New York, New York, US


Starsquid wrote:
hey winking wonder! got a new avatar, so I'm curious!

Yes. I love the outfit on the model - It's very pretty and shows off her figure well. Also like the blue/teal/green background. And I'm a huge fan of hot pink so really like the model's nail polish and lipstick. Normally having so many different vibrant colors may clash but they look together in this particular image. Plus her makeup looks flawless. The expression is quite plastic, but maybe that was your intent.

Also like:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121205/03/50bf370f4a501_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130508/16/518adf854aa20_m.jpg

May 16 13 11:40 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
LC Photography
Posts: 54
Hong Kong, Hong Kong, China


How about me? Thanks.
May 16 13 12:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Pierre Gussman
Posts: 165
San Francisco, California, US


???
May 16 13 05:26 pm  Link  Quote 
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