Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

AWP Photography wrote:
Have been gone for a bit....new avatar posted. Thanks in advance!

I'm going to say yes. I like the warm lighting, and the way the model's hair is framing her face. Lovely serene expression as well, and I like the background blue color.

May 16 13 07:12 pm Link

Photographer

iPhoto

Posts: 21

Boca Raton, Florida, US

Hit me!

May 17 13 04:36 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

DreamPhotography1 wrote:
I would love to hear your opinion. Thanks in advance for your time.

No. I don't like the black background, especially paired with the dark color of the outfit- Model doesn't really stand out. And that's a shame because the dress and shoes look great on her. Also the posing isn't great, especially the hands behind her back and expression looks uncomfortable.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130509/11/518be7f5d7cbb_m.jpg

May 17 13 01:33 pm Link

Retoucher

FKW

Posts: 371

Yogyakarta, Yogyakarta, Indonesia

I would love to hear your opinion

May 17 13 03:16 pm Link

Photographer

250465

Posts: 134

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

back again big_smile also completely changed and updated my port.

May 18 13 04:19 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Connie Berchem wrote:
It may take a few days to get to me there's an awful lot of requests  Please be brutally honest, I need all the help I can get.

Connie

Maybe. I like your outfit- the white blazer looks great on you as does your white and black bra - it shows off some nice cleavage. Your hair is also nicely done and the makeup is pretty good, but your expression looks uncomfortable/blank.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130317/15/51464226d464a_m.jpg

May 19 13 07:51 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Wake Smith wrote:
I'd love to hear your thoughts!

I absolutely would. Love your look, outfit and the lighting in the photo is great. But you're not on the site any longer? sad

May 19 13 09:14 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Zman-Photog wrote:
let me know - please

Maybe. I like the lighting and the model's lacy material white shirt but think the grey sweater/jacket clashes with the orange couch/pillow. The model's hair is nice, though expression could be more engaged.

May 20 13 10:04 am Link

Photographer

Marin Photo NYC

Posts: 7348

New York, New York, US

shoot!

May 20 13 10:16 am Link

Photographer

Matthew Gwinn

Posts: 131

Ypsilanti, Michigan, US

Me too

May 20 13 10:31 am Link

Photographer

Cory Boehne

Posts: 4

Miami, Florida, US

Color me curious.  Would you work with me based on my avatar?

May 20 13 03:17 pm Link

Model

Ruben van Waas

Posts: 24

Zwolle, Overijssel, Netherlands

Mm curious wink

May 20 13 03:45 pm Link

Photographer

Posh Rocket Studio

Posts: 136

Skowhegan, Maine, US

Perhaps when you have a moment?

May 20 13 03:51 pm Link

Model

AnnieS

Posts: 34

Bountiful, Utah, US

Thought I would have a go smile

May 20 13 03:55 pm Link

Photographer

Joseph William

Posts: 2039

Chicago, Illinois, US

I have had a few million avatars since I tried this last... WaddaYa think now?

May 20 13 04:09 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Bernadette Newberry wrote:
I'm curious!

Yes. The lighting is lovely and I like the look and pose of the model. She has beautiful curled hair that is nicely styled and framing her face. Love her facial features as well. And the makeup is pretty though the white spots are not even on both sides. Other thing is expression looks quite blank..

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130503/10/5183f72ee3ad1_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130503/10/5183f7761db2f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130502/15/5182e5e81a442_m.jpg

May 21 13 08:21 am Link

Photographer

TravarezParsonsStudios

Posts: 13

Baton Rouge, Louisiana, US

What about me?

May 21 13 08:29 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Sarah Victory wrote:
I would like to know?
I'll make nothing but improvements.

No. I don't really like the color scheme, the gritty feel of the image, the hand is awkward and appears quite large in the frame. Also not sure about the flower petals all over the place. Though you do have a quirky, unique expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130501/16/5181aba4ed28c_m.jpg

May 21 13 09:36 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Kaydee-Jean wrote:
Newbie who is curious smile

Yes. I like the black and white tones in the image and the clear, soft quality. You also have pretty hair and I like the curls in it. The tilt of your head looks good, but expression is kind of blank- should be more engaged.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130516/14/5195529223ed1_m.jpg

May 21 13 10:44 am Link

Photographer

Francisco Castro

Posts: 2628

Cincinnati, Ohio, US

Sure.

By the way, kudos on having one  of the longest running threads on MM where the original poster is still actively involved. In July, it will be 2 years!

May 21 13 04:22 pm Link

Model

Sophia Grey

Posts: 69

Yuma, Arizona, US

me??

May 21 13 05:08 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

LC Photography wrote:
How about me? Thanks.

Maybe. I do like the black and white tones of the image and the composition of the image, as well as where you have placed the model- Plus her pose is a good one. But I don't really like the crop on the top that cuts off part of the model's head and that only the foreground is in focus. Also model's expression looks bored.

Nice:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28693065 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32457597 18+

May 21 13 07:04 pm Link

Photographer

ClashnClairty

Posts: 133

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

interesting, would love to know!

May 21 13 07:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Pierre Gussman wrote:
???

Yes. I like the color scheme and the background is very cool- love the different textures in it. Model's jacket looks good on him and I enjoy the smooth finish of the model's face as well as the clarity/detail of the entire image. Expression is quite brooding, but it works within this shot.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120725/00/500f9e31e181f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130413/18/516a06406139f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130221/00/5125d7cbae67f_m.jpg

May 21 13 07:59 pm Link

Model

Emily Smiles

Posts: 295

Columbia, South Carolina, US

me??

May 21 13 08:05 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

iPhoto wrote:
Hit me!

Yes. I like the whole silhouette concept and you've executed it well here. The lighting is lovely and I love the water/sunset background. The model's pose is very good- sexy and shows off her great figure.

Nice:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32483897 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32486377 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32469498 18+

May 21 13 08:36 pm Link

Photographer

Duncan Cheng

Posts: 81

Los Angeles, California, US

Deal me in smile

May 21 13 10:48 pm Link

Photographer

Bravo Magic Images

Posts: 765

Temple City, California, US

Mon Tue and Wed are my shooting days.

May 21 13 10:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

FKW wrote:
I would love to hear your opinion

Probably. I like the clear smooth image, nice lighting and the white background. Love how the model's hair looks and he pose. Though looks like the leg/foot is a lot bigger in comparison to the model's body -it's disproportionate but that's not really your fault since you're not the one who took the photo.

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130427/07/517be6b45b1e9_m.jpg

May 22 13 10:43 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Joris van der Ploeg wrote:
back again big_smile also completely changed and updated my port.

No. I don't love the gritty feel of this image and the model's pose is just there, boring. Also her expression looks really uncomfortable, blank, even a bit sad. And the hair's a tad on the messy side. I do like the sheets in the background and black + white tones though.

May 22 13 11:43 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Marin Photography wrote:
shoot!

Maybe. I like the outfit on the model and the way that it flows around her - The colors are lovely and the posing is decent. However, lighting could be illuminating and the background colors are dark/dull/boring. Also model's face is quite shadowed... plus the expression looks a bit upset or angry.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130424/08/5177fc5e99c47_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130522/13/519d28c986e7f_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32049363 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32049345 18+

May 22 13 07:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Matthew Gwinn wrote:
Me too

Yes. I like the color scheme and that yellow dress looks great on the model. The makeup is really pretty as well and the hat looks good on her. A couple things though: The model's skin looks way too processed and there is no way her actual skin is that perfect, without blemish. Also the posing of the model's arms is awkward and weird. And expression looks kind of blank.

May 22 13 08:17 pm Link

Model

Courtney L Cameron

Posts: 72

Los Angeles, California, US

me?

May 22 13 08:48 pm Link

Model

Pandora James

Posts: 2

Henderson, Nevada, US

I woul like to know what you think

May 22 13 08:52 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Cory Boehne wrote:
Color me curious.  Would you work with me based on my avatar?

No. Just not my style. And the image is too small to make out the details and the green mask on the model doesn't look that great but I do like the long green leaves that are sticking out..

May 23 13 08:42 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Alex Haze wrote:
Mm curious wink

Um, yes! I would be crazy not to! I love your physique and the blue hoodie looks great on you. It's a bit too shadowed around you face but can tell that you are handsome and I like your hair! Looks like you have a good brooding expression.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130521/11/519bc3eca4e0c_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/12/519a7414da642_m.jpg

May 23 13 11:36 am Link

Photographer

claudio400

Posts: 2

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Why Not.

May 23 13 01:56 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ernest Sambrano wrote:
Perhaps when you have a moment?

Yes. I like the color scheme, lighting and smooth finish of the image. Pretty model as well, beautiful light makeup and I really like the ring she has on too. Expression looks pretty peaceful but with a hint of worry.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121024/10/508820a63c89a_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32561776 18+

May 23 13 04:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

AnnieS  wrote:
Thought I would have a go smile

Maybe. I don't love the color scheme and the slightly melancholy feel. But the way you're positioned is pretty good along with your expression.

You have better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130518/03/51975ad642bdf_m.jpg

May 24 13 08:09 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Joseph William  wrote:
I have had a few million avatars since I tried this last... WaddaYa think now?

I've seen your current avatar before... I would say maybe. While I like the color scheme and the model's look- blond hair with blue eyes, pale skin and freckles, I dislike the crop and the model's expression looks kind of upset.. Not sure how to describe it.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120810/11/5025562e4d168_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111209/10/4ee24ce3c80f0_m.jpg

May 24 13 09:52 am Link