Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Craig Palms Photography wrote:
I'll participate.. smile

Maybe. I like the color scheme (pink is one of my favorite colors) and the outfit and model is really cute, as well as the Hello Kitty theme. However, the expression looks angry -not good.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/13/5137b090a230b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120607/12/4fd107af33f0d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130618/09/51c0843aab101_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130507/08/51891a91ca972_m.jpg

Sep 04 13 10:49 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Selene Viktoria wrote:
Ok, Go ahead

Yes. Love the color scheme, soft feel and location of the image. Plus you look lovely, graceful and elegant- That red gown is so beautiful on you and your pose is effortless- shows off your figure well. And you have really nice hair and makeup. I also like your serene expression

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130114/05/50f403a8777ba_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130114/05/50f403418eb59_m.jpg

Sep 04 13 12:18 pm Link

Photographer

F O R B E S

Posts: 576

New York, New York, US

i'm down!

Sep 04 13 12:20 pm Link

Model

mr__das

Posts: 2

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

How about mine ?
Thanks

Sep 04 13 12:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Reystignac wrote:
Thank you in advance for your opinion.

See here:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st18465739

Sep 04 13 01:19 pm Link

Photographer

Doc McCoy

Posts: 381

Rancho Cucamonga, California, US

Me...?

Sep 04 13 01:23 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Melodye Joy wrote:
Winking_wonder,
As I have a new avatar and I have updated/redone a few things around the ole port...what are your thoughts?

Xo

Yes. I like the fashion-y shot and the colors are lovely. The shiny blue on you looks very nice and drapes beautifully. I'm also liking the pose as well as the sunglasses and clutch. I just can't make out your expression.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130723/18/51ef2756884ee_m.jpg

Sep 04 13 01:38 pm Link

Photographer

WDI

Posts: 187

Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada

Well, I'm a photographer who feels I owe it to models to show myself once in my portfolio. It's only fair, right? I made sure a model was in the shot with me.

Should it stay or should it go, Winking Wonder?

Sep 04 13 08:18 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

coendeheer wrote:
I've updated my avatar and I’m curious about your opinion. Please let me know what your thoughts are, thanx!

I would say maybe. I like the black and white tones of the image and I normally love hair movement in photos but would like to see more of the model's face- from what I can tell, the model has lovely features. I can't really make out the expression well though. I do like the leather jacket on her.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121110/01/509e1a829bdfc_m.jpg

Sep 04 13 09:46 pm Link

Photographer

DicePhotography

Posts: 59

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

go for it!

Sep 04 13 09:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

MC Photo wrote:
Hit me up.

Yes. This is a lovely portrait of the model. I love the model's hair (and the way it frames her face) and facial features- she almost has a doll like quality about her. The outfit is nice but I don't like the crop at the top and the expression could be more engaged.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120501/23/4fa0cdb61717b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130831/02/5221b918946d3_m.jpg

Sep 05 13 08:15 am Link

Makeup Artist

Perris Cartwright

Posts: 8

Fredericksburg, Virginia, US

Would you work with me? Thank you.

Sep 05 13 08:36 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

udor wrote:
Probably not... my avatar is not sexy enough... wink

A few people complain that I show a self portrait and not some of my work... although... it's part of my work... smile


EDIT: Waaaa??? 131 pages... OMG... LOL! Winking Wonder, you are still going strong...

No. The image is not really my style. The colors are a little dark and your expression is very stern/strict but the pose you have is good. However, the avatar shot is completely different from the rest of your port/style, which is the reason it shouldn't be your avatar.

PS Yes still going strong, at 122 pages now!

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/060822/14/44eb55aa5b994_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130803/15/51fd860bbd409_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120812/09/5027e0d9a1aab_m.jpg

Sep 05 13 09:19 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

romen cole wrote:
This thread has been going since.....July. O_O.

Yes, July 2011.

Anyway I would work with you- Great capture of the model's figure and she's got a great pose going on. Very sexy and sensual. Would have liked to see the model's face and expression a bit more though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130822/13/521678e9c9e9b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130822/14/52167cffbabac_m.jpg

Sep 05 13 09:45 pm Link

Photographer

udor

Posts: 25255

New York, New York, US

winking_wonder wrote:
No. The image is not really my style. The colors are a little dark and your expression is very stern/strict but the pose you have is good. However, the avatar shot is completely different from the rest of your port/style, which is the reason it shouldn't be your avatar.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/0 … b994_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … d409_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 1aab_m.jpg

Thank you... this is actually the face I am making when I am focusing on shooting... right in-between of joking with the team... smile

Sep 06 13 05:49 am Link

Photographer

darensphotos

Posts: 4

Honolulu, Hawaii, US

How about me?  I'm still really new to photography but learning with each shoot.

Sep 06 13 06:02 am Link

Photographer

PhotographE

Posts: 72

Liverpool, England, United Kingdom

what about me please : )

Sep 06 13 10:07 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Bianca Sullivan wrote:
ME im curious smile

No. This image looks like a snap shot. The image POV is weird- showing you as lifelike but the outfit does show off your nice figure especially legs. Posing is okay- natural at least but expression is lacking connection and emotion.

Sep 06 13 10:18 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Ashley Kirby wrote:
Curious???

No. This shot is clearly a snap shot and a bit blurry- especially the background. But you are pretty- nice blond hair, facial features and nice figure. Outfit is okay- just don't love the boots. Expression is not great though-- the smile doesn't reach your eyes.

Sep 06 13 11:38 am Link

Photographer

Lovely Day Media

Posts: 5885

Vineland, New Jersey, US

If you're still playing, I'd like to know. smile

Sep 06 13 11:55 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

John David Studio  wrote:
Okay let me know!

I would say maybe. I love the model's hair-color and shine- and the movement in it and the outfit is cute. Shows off the model's figure pretty well. I just don't love the sunglasses and can't see the expression well.

Amazing work:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130615/14/51bce270653da_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130216/14/512005f7807ce_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130801/18/51fb07537a997_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090912/19/4aac5fbdbdcd1_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090629/03/4a4896bb6e895_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090621/18/4a3ed8a1ab22c_m.jpg

Sep 06 13 12:49 pm Link

Photographer

Mountain Image

Posts: 1184

Morgantown, West Virginia, US

Curious what you think.

Sep 06 13 12:57 pm Link

Photographer

Dave McDermott

Posts: 720

Coill Dubh, Kildare, Ireland

I just put up a new avi so I'd like to know. smile

Sep 06 13 12:57 pm Link

Photographer

PhotographE

Posts: 72

Liverpool, England, United Kingdom

Sep 06 13 01:13 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mary Luna Enderle wrote:
Yes, please let me know. I am open to suggestions.

Mary

No. This is very much a snap shot and the coloring in it is not very good- your skin tone/color looks unnatural. The bikini/lingerie is nice but the pose isn't great- though you do have a decent figure. The jewels on your face is a bit much and your expression is very blank.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130218/21/512307be20cd3_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130303/15/5133e371af1b5_m.jpg

Sep 06 13 02:04 pm Link

Photographer

Black Rainbow Inc

Posts: 21

Kansas City, Kansas, US

Thoughts?

Sep 06 13 02:07 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Open Eyes wrote:
I'll play smile

I would say maybe. I like the colors- the purple pinkish material is very cool and I like the way it's lit up but the lighting is a bit harsh on the model's face. Her hair is pretty but her expression looks blank and a little scary.

Love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130804/23/51ff4b0f64181_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130414/15/516b2e9c9e028_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32303189 18+

Sep 06 13 09:10 pm Link

Photographer

Open Eyes

Posts: 109

Seattle, Washington, US

winking_wonder wrote:

I would say maybe. I like the colors- the purple pinkish material is very cool and I like the way it's lit up but the lighting is a bit harsh on the model's face. Her hair is pretty but her expression looks blank and a little scary.

Love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130804/23/51ff4b0f64181_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130414/15/516b2e9c9e028_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32303189 18+

Thanks for the feedback.  You picked two of my favorite photos from my port smile  Yes the avatar photo is a bit harsh with the lighting but I wanted something that would stand out from the crowd.  I knew it would not appeal to everyone but thought it might grab their attention.  Should I change it?

Sep 07 13 12:18 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Open Eyes wrote:

Thanks for the feedback.  You picked two of my favorite photos from my port smile  Yes the avatar photo is a bit harsh with the lighting but I wanted something that would stand out from the crowd.  I knew it would not appeal to everyone but thought it might grab their attention.  Should I change it?

I would change it... Maybe to this one:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130414/15/516b2e9c9e028_m.jpg

Sep 07 13 05:13 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Tiffany Rae D  wrote:
Do you like my avatar? If not do you see a pic in my port that you think would be a better avatar?

I would say maybe. I like the color scheme and lighting. Very sexy outfit that looks great on you- the jewelry adds to it. The posing is not great though and the bottom part of your body is blurry. Your hair and makeup look nice but the expression is not great...

Better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130704/05/51d56a1186837_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130817/11/520fc554f3176_m.jpg

Sep 07 13 06:27 pm Link

Photographer

Tomas Kibsgaard Larsen

Posts: 85

Kongsberg, Buskerud, Norway

Sounds interesting.. I'll give it a go!

Sep 07 13 06:29 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Justina Faith wrote:
what about mine?

I would say yes. I like the black and white tones, and the lighting is really nice on you. Plus you have a really sweet look - I like your hair and the way it frames your face, as well as your facial features. Also, lovely big beautiful smile you have!

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130831/16/52227aa800c25_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130818/13/52113358ccdb8_m.jpg

Sep 07 13 08:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Kelly Daugherty wrote:
?

Yes. I like the colors- especially the pale blue, along with the model. She's got a lovely look- very delicate and pretty. I love the blue dress on her and the blue cloth material wrapped around her, as well as her makeup. Expression is just okay though- could be more engaged.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130907/00/522adbf894d1f_m.jpg

Sep 07 13 08:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Olivia Preston wrote:
I'll play!

Yes. I love the lighting and color scheme. You have a lovely look- Pretty hair and a nice figure. I like how the lingerie looks - Delicate and sweet. Also nice background. The pose is decent, but your expression is a bit forced.

So lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130515/14/5193f8fceba30_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130725/06/51f1277bac921_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130817/23/52106bd20487e_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33512297 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33601091 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32903387 18+

Sep 08 13 09:34 am Link

Model

Lee Clarke

Posts: 8

Belfast, Northern Ireland, United Kingdom

do your magic

Sep 08 13 10:23 am Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

I'm sure I posted here a few months ago, but I changed my avatar since then. What do you think?

Sep 08 13 11:08 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

mPm Studios wrote:
I'm in please and thank you!

I would say maybe. Normally I don't like dark images but I sort of like the blueish tinge that the image has. Plus it's a very sexy shot- great capture of the model's figure- The dress looks lovely on her and the pose is good. The jewelry also looks good with the dress, and I like the model's hair/how it frames her face. But expression could be better- more engaged.

Cute:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130826/07/521b6b180dff9_m.jpg

Sep 08 13 06:10 pm Link

Model

Britney Lee

Posts: 7

Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada

I'd love your opinion as well !!

Sep 08 13 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

Phil Bartow Photography

Posts: 12

Columbus, Ohio, US

If your not out of breath, I'm In !

Sep 08 13 06:21 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Eric Kristiansen wrote:
I would be curious to know about mine, or which photo you like more.  Thank You for your time!

No. I don't like the stark color scheme and dark background. The pose is okay but expression is quite blank- There should be more connection with the camera.

Sep 08 13 07:16 pm Link