ArtistryImage
Posts: 2,379
Washington, District of Columbia, US
Chace Photography wrote: ...serious feedback...
not really a fan of Facebook albeit would like to compliment you on this hair stylist visual statement... truly creative technique... thank you for sharing...
not really a fan of Facebook albeit would like to compliment you on this hair stylist visual statement... truly creative technique... thank you for sharing...
Find as many photographers that will shoot with you as possible because the more you are in front of the camera, the more confident/comfortable you will be.
Note: Only the primary folder is actually meant to be my online port. The others, such as 90s Kodachrome is older work here for interest only.
Composition is good overall...light is minimum. One more light or some bounce fill will bring more depth to the overall image. Minor re-touching will help as well.
Now that you've moved from on-location to studio, it's important to remember that you own the light. You have complete control so utilize every light on purpose, and attempt to create images that will be remembered. Keep shooting!
You have a great look...perhaps editorial fashion work is in line. Find as many professional photogs as possible who will shoot with you and be certain that they are providing you with high quality images.
Right Poes
Posts: 638
Colorado Springs, Colorado, US
If you are still doing more Id love to take you up on this. I am hoping to do be doing product photography when I graduate. I LOVED the CK orange and silver add you have.
Frann Lazzari
Posts: 232
Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom
Chace Photography wrote:
Find as many photographers that will shoot with you as possible because the more you are in front of the camera, the more confident/comfortable you will be.
Try to shoot more fitness looks...the 'commercial' type images you have might not work as well as fitness, but I cannot say for sure because you have no fitness images.
I'm not sure if you are in photography for commerce or for hobby, but if for commerce you could focus more on the Boudoir. This could be marketable for occasions like valentine's day, anniverseries, pre-weddings, etc. You have some good images. Keep shooting.
Try to shoot more fitness looks...the 'commercial' type images you have might not work as well as fitness, but I cannot say for sure because you have no fitness images.
(((chace)))
Thank you for the feedback...That's actually something I've got in the works right now
Right Poes Photography wrote: If you are still doing more Id love to take you up on this. I am hoping to do be doing product photography when I graduate. I LOVED the CK orange and silver add you have.
I started out with product work and was fortunate enough to land some projects with large companies; thanks for the input. I would like to see more commercially driven product work of yours if that's what you're going into. You have some decent portrait work. It's good that you are familiar with Photoshop because product photography cannot and doesn't exist without solid post production. Keep creating!
You're quite welcome. Also, look more closely at what type of modeling you are interested in and gear your photographer search to those who specialize in that form.
sbourson wrote: why you want to critique Portfolio, your portfolio have so many default . do you want a critique ?
Yes, we don't mind a critique. We don't look at critiques as being a bad or negative thing; we arn't on here to down people's work. We are on here to just offer anything we can that might help people with their career.
I'm not on FB. I don't trust their ever-changing privacy policy - or the fact that about once a year I see on the news that they have repeated their claim to ownership of all the material posted on their site.
Camerosity wrote: I'm not on FB. I don't trust their ever-changing privacy policy - or the fact that about once a year I see on the news that they have repeated their claim to ownership of all the material posted on their site.
Just wanted to say that your work is excellent.
I completely understand. No worries! We truly appreciate your kind words and taking the time to look at our work! You have some great images as well! Keep shooting and we'll keep in touch.
We, as a team, believe that beauty is all relative and definitely in the eyes of the beholder. Your images, determination, and courage is beauty in and of itself. Keep going and we wish you the best!
NicholasJ wrote: Not only do I now like you on FB, your are now a favorite of mine. Your work is amazing!!!
Your comments are greatly appreciated! It's always the biggest compliment to hear these types of things from other professionals! Your work is fantastic as well! We'll keep in touch. Keep shooting!
Neil Snape wrote: The rules for serious critique you should be reviewed.
Your method to get FB likes is appalling.
Your work is excellent...thanks for your comments, although they were negative. Keep shooting, creating, and hopefully being a little more positive about the art-form that we both share.
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