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Peach Jones
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Champaign, Illinois, US


Cecilia Or wrote:
Please give me your kind advice. Thank you very much. Have a nice day.

Hello Cecilia,

There are avatars that will catch my eye when I post on another person's photo, thread or even on the main page, some avatar's will catch my eye. What makes those Avatar's stand out? Here is a short list:

1. bigger is usually better. Far away photos don't work on a small avatar. They have to grab my attention in about 1/4 of a second at most, and if my eye/brain has to figure out the avatar photo because you are too small in it or it is too busy, then it will not catch my eye

2. Colors.....bright colors catch my eye better. White (not so much a color but you get the idea) and red do the job the best. If you do a B/W then make sure that it really pops me in the face and says "HEY!! Look at me!!"  That is why I use the avatar that I use. It stands out. If the photo was smaller, it would not stand out. Do you agree?

3. Photos with curves and lines work very well. I will quantify this up front by saying I am a huge heterosexual. Just the way I am. We all have things about the opposite sex that really catch our attention. Look at the previous comments I have made... There is something in the photo that sets the female apart.......legs, curves, behind, eyes, ........those catch my eye alot. And if you can highlight them, then I will more likely look at your port.......and maybe even list  or want to work with you if even possible.

4. Males. As I said before, I am a heterosexual. So you are already at a disadvantage if you are a male model. However, I will look more if you have a very creative avatar (because I like creativity no matter what your sex is), and I also enjoy beauty. Beauty can be male or female, but once again I inherently believe that females have more inherent beauty. Just the way I am.

OK, now to your avatar. I do like the photo. But if I was quickly scanning a page, yours probably would  not stand out. The lack of color might be detrimental, but it does have some good contrast. That is good.  Once again, all this is my opinion, and someone else may give you a different opinion. So value this as much as you choose. It is beautiful, and you are beautiful (duh, a model)....but IMO I don't believe it is your best bet as an avatar. But I will say that you have other shots that will have a much better chance of getting you seen and getting the attention you deserve. 

So based on these simple guidelines, which photo or photos do you think would work best?

Have a fabulous evening!!

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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,232
Champaign, Illinois, US


AngelicaDemonica wrote:
I'll give it a shot, would you take a look at mine based on my avatar?

No. I like the shot but would most likely not get my attention

Mar 14 13 04:32 pm  Link  Quote 
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R Fraticelli
Posts: 115
San Juan, San Juan, Puerto Rico


What about now?  I dug up my old 2011 underwater shoot and found it still had one more little gem to give..  smile
Mar 15 13 10:38 am  Link  Quote 
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DXM Productions
Posts: 10
Houston, Texas, US


I hope it does.  My model is beautiful in that shot.  For sure you would at least want to see if I had more shots of her.  :-)
Mar 15 13 02:00 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,232
Champaign, Illinois, US


R Fraticelli wrote:
What about now?  I dug up my old 2011 underwater shoot and found it still had one more little gem to give..  smile

It is a gorgeous shot!!Congrats on doing such great work. But I am not sure it would make me want to see your port. IMO you have some others that I see that would work better. Thanks again for stopping by!

Mar 15 13 06:20 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
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DXM Productions wrote:
I hope it does.  My model is beautiful in that shot.  For sure you would at least want to see if I had more shots of her.  :-)

Yes she is beautiful indeed. But the lack of pop would most likely cause me to pass by

Mar 15 13 06:21 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jhomel
Posts: 180
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


is mine alright?
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mmphotographyca
Posts: 1
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Mine?
Mar 15 13 09:38 pm  Link  Quote 
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907Benjamin
Posts: 1,712
Lake Geneva, Wisconsin, US


yes, i'd like to know.
Mar 15 13 09:44 pm  Link  Quote 
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Vega
Posts: 5
Seymour, Indiana, US


Sure why not, does it?
Mar 15 13 10:06 pm  Link  Quote 
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DaniNikole
Posts: 129
Sacramento, California, US


Me smile
Mar 15 13 10:42 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,232
Champaign, Illinois, US


Jhomel wrote:
is mine alright?

You have a good look and that is a good avi........60% yes

Mar 16 13 07:39 am  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
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Champaign, Illinois, US


mmphotographyca wrote:
Mine?

The darkness is going to hurt you. While I like the shot very much, the lack of light and color will most likely mean no

Mar 16 13 07:40 am  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
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Champaign, Illinois, US


907Benjamin  wrote:
yes, i'd like to know.

It is too far away and the lack of color means no

Mar 16 13 07:41 am  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
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Champaign, Illinois, US


Vega wrote:
Sure why not, does it?

You do simply fabulous work! I very much like the shot and it shows how beautiful you are. However the lack of color may cause me to skip over your port, which would be a shame. IMO you have some other works that would do better in drawing attention to your port

Mar 16 13 07:45 am  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
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Champaign, Illinois, US


Dani Nikole Feist wrote:
Me smile

Your curves are top notch, but with the colors a bit muted it mike cause me to pass over your port. I will say 50-60% yes

Mar 16 13 07:47 am  Link  Quote 
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SoftLights
Posts: 332
New Orleans, Louisiana, US


How about mine.
Mar 16 13 03:14 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
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Champaign, Illinois, US


Soft Lights wrote:
How about mine.

I like the dramatic lighting. The lack of color may hurt you, but if I did notice it I will say yes to wanting to see more.

Mar 16 13 04:55 pm  Link  Quote 
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Chelsea Booth
Posts: 10
WILKES BARRE, Pennsylvania, US


Tell me, tell me... smile
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Gulf Coast Glamour
Posts: 493
Bradenton, Florida, US


Ok, I'd like to hear the truth
Mar 17 13 02:11 am  Link  Quote 
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MRM Make-up Artistry
Posts: 1
New York, New York, US


I think it does. What do you think?
Mar 17 13 02:43 am  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,232
Champaign, Illinois, US


Chelsea Booth wrote:
Tell me, tell me... smile

the horizontal orientation along with lack of color hurts you. I like the shot, but if you can get a vertical one with more color to pop it then IMO you will do much better. On this current one though, probably not

Mar 17 13 04:13 am  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,232
Champaign, Illinois, US


Gulf Coast Glamour wrote:
Ok, I'd like to hear the truth

the truth is I cannot tell what it is on a glance. Or even after several seconds of staring.  With thousands of other avatars out there that don't make me have to try to figure out what is in the frame, I will look at theirs before I look at yours.

Mar 17 13 04:15 am  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
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Champaign, Illinois, US


MRM Make-up Artistry wrote:
I think it does. What do you think?

Sorry but no. The lack of color and the darkness of the photo means I will most likely pass it by

Mar 17 13 04:17 am  Link  Quote 
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ELiffmann
Posts: 1,404
Baton Rouge, Louisiana, US


How about this one?  Thanks in advance.
Mar 17 13 10:55 am  Link  Quote 
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Lisa Verhoeks
Posts: 73
Nieuwegein, Utrecht, Netherlands


okay smile
Mar 17 13 11:41 am  Link  Quote 
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Jeff Nemec
Posts: 5
Dallas, Texas, US


Mine!?
Mar 17 13 11:58 am  Link  Quote 
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Keddy Davis
Posts: 187
Birmingham, England, United Kingdom


I'll play smile
Mar 17 13 01:12 pm  Link  Quote 
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Celine Sophia
Posts: 503
Santa Barbara, California, US


please tell me
Mar 17 13 03:01 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Vega
Posts: 5
Seymour, Indiana, US


Peach Jones wrote:

You do simply fabulous work! I very much like the shot and it shows how beautiful you are. However the lack of color may cause me to skip over your port, which would be a shame. IMO you have some other works that would do better in drawing attention to your port

Thank you! I appreciate the opinion. smile

Mar 17 13 09:09 pm  Link  Quote 
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Leone P
Posts: 515
Batley, England, United Kingdom


Hey!
I have joined in this game in the past and you have liked my Avatar but what i would like to know is this.. Is there an image in my port that wold make a better Avatar? x
Mar 18 13 03:54 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Lilly Rae
Posts: 3
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


So what about mine? Ive been wanting to change it for a while, but have had many good responses.
Mar 18 13 04:49 am  Link  Quote 
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cwwmbm
Posts: 432
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


I'd love to play as well smile
Mar 18 13 10:35 am  Link  Quote 
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Jessica Model
Posts: 46
London, England, United Kingdom


Do me smile
Mar 18 13 06:29 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,232
Champaign, Illinois, US


ELiffmann wrote:
How about this one?  Thanks in advance.

Probably not. Too far away and colors are not very bright

Mar 18 13 09:11 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,232
Champaign, Illinois, US


Lisa Verhoeks wrote:
okay smile

not bad....50/50

Mar 18 13 09:13 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
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Champaign, Illinois, US


Jeff Nemec wrote:
Mine!?

The bright coloring may get my attention initially, but subject is too far away to draw me in

Mar 18 13 09:14 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,232
Champaign, Illinois, US


K Davis Photography wrote:
I'll play smile

The lack of brighter color may hurt you, but the subject is nice. 60-70% yes

Mar 18 13 09:17 pm  Link  Quote 
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Peach Jones
Posts: 6,232
Champaign, Illinois, US


Jessica Henderson wrote:
Do me smile

Great curves and lines. Yes

Mar 18 13 09:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Michelle White
Posts: 39
Moline, Illinois, US


my turn.
Mar 18 13 09:18 pm  Link  Quote 
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