Well, You asked for critique and advice and you are getting it.. You should read over all of the responses again, but with a more open mind. You are going to have to have a much thicker skin and a far better attitude if you are going to model at all! You asked for advice for a new model... Be humble and honest! You may be a lovely girl, but you do not have the height or (as your photo's show) the figure to make a real living at this. The modeling world is brutal (in each and every category) and there are thousands of girls trying to make it, and MOST never will. The smartest thing you can do here is be honest with yourself about what you can get out of this. With that said, If you want to continue, find where you fit and work on that. Pay for (or Trade for) photos that will better your portfolio and shoot a whole lot. Work on your poses and facial expressions in front of a mirror or have a friend take photos to see what you look like. The Photo's that you have now show a full figured model. If that is what your figure is, then learn how to work with your body and pose to work with your shape. I am not going to tell you not to try your hand at modeling, but having a good, honest, laid back attitude will get you a lot further than the diva stuff you are spouting now. Humility goes a long way. Good Luck! Nov 06 12 11:19 am Link George Ruge wrote: It's William Hung all over again, but without his charm and his graceful ability to take a hint. Nov 06 12 11:20 am Link ^^^ really like your avi btw. Nov 06 12 11:33 am Link Blue Ash Film Group wrote: SPRINGHEEL wrote: CHUGGA CHUGGA, WOO WOO! Nov 06 12 11:36 am Link Shawn Meadows wrote: Thanks! And she's even nicer than she is pretty. A photographer's dream. After this thread, I appreciate her all the more. Nov 06 12 11:38 am Link Orca Bay Images wrote: You'll get more with honey than vinegar Nov 06 12 11:42 am Link I just read the entirity of this thread.... I am a smiley lady at the moment. A few giggles and what not. Nov 06 12 11:44 am Link Jade Honey wrote: When the thread is a lemon, make lemonade. Nov 06 12 11:45 am Link Orca Bay Images wrote: ....I do like lemonade Nov 06 12 11:47 am Link Orca Bay Images wrote: You have some Ahh...Ma...Zing images by the way, turely breath taking Nov 06 12 11:48 am Link I think this is a joke profile and thread. Very entertaining, nonetheless. Nov 06 12 11:50 am Link Well she got a lot of image views . Nov 06 12 11:51 am Link In Balance Photography wrote: So Does that Car wreck on the side of the Hi way , everyone cant help but look at the messed up pile of Metal and Flesh , You just can't stop looking at it , regardless of how Bloody of a mess of gross goo it maybe , your eyes continue to stare as you drive by ..... Nov 06 12 11:56 am Link In Balance Photography wrote: And a couple comments from people trying to be nice Nov 06 12 11:56 am Link lol..wow...I just read most of this thread too .... Kimberly .... By no means am I someone to guide you to the light on this, but I do have to say that you have a lot of passion. However, your attitude isn't helping your case. Since you might not be taking any of the pages of valuable advise offered, maybe go to an open call to an agency near you for a face to face "real" "brutal" critique. Best of luck to you .. and pick your battles, the world is too small. Nov 06 12 11:57 am Link Jorge Kreimer wrote: Can we Say 'Delusional Threads' Nov 06 12 11:58 am Link Wow! (@ thread) ...just wow...and I don't mean in a good way. Nov 06 12 12:02 pm Link Kimberley Elodie wrote: Not in the REAL world that this industry is made up of . Nov 06 12 12:02 pm Link Escalante wrote: +10000 Nov 06 12 12:08 pm Link PhotographybyT wrote: well it has certain comical value.. Nov 06 12 12:26 pm Link Jade Honey wrote: Thank yew. Nov 06 12 12:27 pm Link To the OP. You don't like like a model. Its not something you should try professionally. Just be happy that you have a MM account.. Nov 06 12 12:34 pm Link Kimberley Elodie wrote: Ok. Well. Your enthusiasm is adorable (you're gonna need it in order to survive here in this place). Nov 06 12 12:40 pm Link _ Robyn Elizabeth _ wrote: +1 Nov 06 12 12:42 pm Link WOW I thought this would have been given a mercy lock already at page one. Nov 06 12 12:50 pm Link Swank Photography wrote: The self-immolation she's performed in this thread has been pretty memorable. Nov 06 12 12:50 pm Link Orca Bay Images wrote: Honestly I havent read any of the other responses as of yet...but I am about to now. Nov 06 12 02:44 pm Link Orca Bay Images wrote: ^100% agree^ Nov 06 12 02:46 pm Link Photos 4 The Memories wrote: I know, I'm just a cock-eyed optimist, but wouldn't it be nice if some other misinformed newbies might stumble across it, read it all the way through, say to herself, "Wow! Do I come across like that?" and learn from it? Nov 06 12 02:48 pm Link Isn't there a rule about arguing with people when you asked for the critique? Nov 06 12 02:55 pm Link Kimberley Elodie wrote: Getting snarky here doesn't help you in the least. I am an individual, I don't let others decide my fate or how I view myself. Congratulations. What makes you think that I really care about your opinion on how "hard" I am trying on my profile? Simple, you are asking for opions/advice/etc. from others. If you don't want to know, or don't want advice, then don't post and seek it out. Remember: ask and ye shall receive Maybe you are an underachiever You do not know Orca in the least so stop being rude here or the mods will put you in time out for being rude. Also, it tends to put you in a bad light and nobody will want to remotely work with you from here at all simply because of your attitiude. but my dynamic personality always drives me to impress and go above and beyond with anything I do. That includes taking about my dazzling, dynamic, multifaceted personality. Believing your own hype is a good start, but not when you come off in poor light. Knock it off. There is a HUGE difference before confidence and being obnoxious. Learn it quickly. This is a networking site buddy, get with the program. You might want to heed your own advice here young lady. Don't come on internet message boards hiding behind your computer trying to bring down someone because you are too narrow minded. Again you might want to heed your own advice on this one too. Nov 06 12 02:59 pm Link Since the OP thinks I was picking on her, here are a few recent critiques I did for others. Heads up, Twinkletoes. For model Cameron Abraham - https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st17698508 For model Michele Bowers - https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st17698035 For photographer Kick Kn - https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st17695978 For model Melissa Milford (probably my harshest crit) - https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st17695830 Perhaps some of you folks (certainly not the OP) will find something in common among the critiques. Detailed and detail-oriented, mentioning some good points where possible and analyzing the bad where needed. I try not to cheap-shot, but neither do I pull punches. I calls 'em like I sees 'em. Given the OP's horrendous portfolio and ridiculous profile, I was *far* gentler with her than with those others listed. Nov 06 12 05:59 pm Link Mnemosyne Photography wrote: I think it's more a guideline or recommendation, rather than a rule. Arguing about feedback is just bad form. Nov 07 12 12:48 am Link Mnemosyne Photography wrote: Orca Bay Images wrote: I believe it says to be nice on the first page of the thread, then all hell can break loose once past that. Nov 07 12 08:08 am Link Hello Doll, I've worked with a plus model or two, and I'm happy to not discriminate, HOWEVER, you need to read fashion magazines, and lots of them. From them you can swat up on poses, on which you're weak. You can't rely on a photographer to tell you and put you in good poses, for that we could use a mannequin. And talk to a stylist, learn what works for you. That dress does not. At all. Not even a little. Learn the difference between A Line and Bodycon. A line is a curvy girls best friend, body con is not. I should know, I'm a size 16 girl myself. Being new to the business and a plus sized girl you are going to find that you will have to provide your own clothes to the shoot, so you are going to need to update your wardrobe. Just one more tip, Bigger girls need to avoid strapless or asymmetric straps, it adds inches to your shoulders, thus making your body shape look boxy. Choose thicker straps, or longer arms like cap sleeves. Loose chiffon is a friend Avoid lycra Even if you aren't toned, and can I say, you don't HAVE to get fit if you don't want to, there is an industry for your body type, but it isn't all pretty frocks, it's lingerie and a little saucy, but if you're wanting to make money, then that's an avenue to go down, just make sure you don't do anything you dont want to, and may regret further on in your career. So if you don't want to tone up then you need how to learn how to tense your body, but in a way to not make yourself look stiff. Practise in the mirror, start with your arms, they are often a problem area. If you want any more advice send me a message. Tish Nov 07 12 08:22 am Link |