Dominique Banner wrote:
Please and thank you!!!

You have a pretty and fresh look, and I can see you doing good bikini and boudoir stuff, if you're in to that.


https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32392619
This is an amazing photo of your body. Your best shot in your port.

You have a lot of pretty amature-ish photos, so I'd suggest working with more top quality photographers.

Meghan Hale wrote:

You have a pretty and fresh look, and I can see you doing good bikini and boudoir stuff, if you're in to that.


https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32392619
This is an amazing photo of your body. Your best shot in your port.

You have a lot of pretty amature-ish photos, so I'd suggest working with more top quality photographers.

Thank you so much!!!!

Rebekah Watkins wrote:
Please, I need help! I'm not sure if I have real potential or if I'm just putting my time and effort into something that I don't really have what it takes for, so please! Tear me apart!

It's difficult to tell how much potential you have when you only have four mediocre photos. You're much too short to have "what it takes" to do high fashion runway someday, though.

You need to start putting more emotion in to your posing and your facial expressions. You look bored in all of yours.

Reyna Etheria wrote:
I'll bite:)

You have an absolutely beautiful look. There's too many photos in your portfolio, though! It's a little overwhelming!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29589201
This is my favourite. The shape your body forms is beautiful, and you look beautifully intense.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26584928
You look beautiful, though the editing isn't the most realistic, therefore it's my least favourite in your port.

Donna DeFrance wrote:
Me please?! I've Liked your Facebook page

Your display picture is so soft and beautiful. Definitely my favourite image from your portfolio.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28345593
This is your worst photo. The photography and editing style aren't professional, and your breasts don't look great in the photo.

Some of your photos are amazing, but you also have a lot of mediocre ones. You should go through your whole portfolio and only keep the best, because you have some pretty great ones.

Ginger Rothestein wrote:
I love these

I take that as an ask for a critique

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22736692
Your face and neck is angled awfully here but your body looks FANTASTIC. I'd suggest you get another shot similar to this but change your facial expression and angling.

Your girl-on-girl shots are beautiful and very sexy.

You need to keep on doing what you're doing with more facial expressions and keep up the great work!

Meghan Hale wrote:

Your display picture is so soft and beautiful. Definitely my favourite image from your portfolio.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28345593
This is your worst photo. The photography and editing style aren't professional, and your breasts don't look great in the photo.

Some of your photos are amazing, but you also have a lot of mediocre ones. You should go through your whole portfolio and only keep the best, because you have some pretty great ones.

Thank you for the input! :-) I've been trying to weed out some of the mediocre ones...more work to be done.

Chynecia De Ancariis wrote:

I like this photo:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31588495

But all of your other photos are lacking in quality. You have potential but you really need to work with better photographers to showcase your beauty.

Emmanuel Brown EP wrote:
Hi so far my photos have progressively gotten better however nobody really wants to tell me what i lack on. I need someone to rip apart my port and tell me what i need to improve on. i do my own editing as well. please be as mean and as harsh as you possibly can its the only way i will grow and learn.

thnx

The name of this thread is "Will critique any MODEL's portfolio".

Models only.

Meghan Hale wrote:
You're doing some great work for a model who isn't the typical age.

I especially love your display image, and this:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28516240
They were just the first to stand out.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23147206
Your expression in this is beautiful, and your body looks like it's dancing. Beautiful photo.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 6#28307296
Id delete this photo if I were you. It's not a good nude and VERY unflattering.


I definitely like your overall port though!

Thank you for taking the time to view my port and share your thoughts.  Your input is much appreciated!

The Original Sin  wrote:
Yes, please.

I was just looking at your portfolio the other day, actually!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29538238
THIS SHOT IS BEAUTIFUL. Really. No words. Well done on all parts. I think it should be your display picture.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17291808
I also really like this one. Very pretty.

Your nude shots are beautiful. You have a pretty great body.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28191245
This is the only shot in your portfolio that I don't like at all. It's just awkward and unflattering.

Madison P Cook wrote:
I'd love some feedback!

You have a very pretty, young, fresh face!
We've exchanged comments on photos before. I LOVE your work.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32463360
This is very cute.

You have a very nice, fresh look that works for things like boho, indie, and beauty. So very versatile! Though I'm not sure about high fashion.


https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29764180
This is my favourite in your port. I've always loved it. You look so fresh and pretty.

Keep on doing wonderful things!

VirtuousDezi wrote:
Critique me!

Your description needs some serious changes made. It's not very serious or professional.

You can tell you're a new model. You need to get more versatility in your portfolio, as well as much better posing.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32418022
Bad photo. I'd delete it.

You have a beautiful face and amazing hands. You have potential, it's just too soon to give you a full critique.

The Original Sin  wrote:
Meghan, TY!!

I agree on the one you said was unflattering- it was my first shoot after having my baby, and I feel like it just wasn't my best work.  It's slated for the chopping block.

And also... you are just too pretty.   Your avatar makes me want to put you on my table as a centerpiece display for fall.

Awh, thank you so much! That made me smile.

shahzaade wrote:
Critique please?

I've critiqued you in this form before!

shahzaade wrote:
You did?
I honestly forgot
I aplolgize

Haha, it's alright! You can scroll back a few pages and find it if you want

But I remembered you, which means you left a good impression with your photos!

Chynecia De Ancariis wrote:
Just revamped my portfolio and added some new images. Let me know what you think!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32476811
This isn't very flattering.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32476807
This is very pretty!

You have a very fresh, pretty look. You have some potential. I think you should tone your stomach a little bit, though.

Sucker Punch wrote:
What do you think?

I love the name Sucker Punch!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29768649
These photos are so beautiful. Everyone involved did an amazing job.

You've done some photos that aren't showing off your true beauty and potential, like these:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26826141
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30333675

And then you have ones like your display picture, that are FANTASTIC.

I think you should focus on only doing shoots that are outstanding.

LexLethal wrote:
*closes eyes*
Be gentle.

You wouldn't need to worry about me being harsh! I like your look!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32379882
Other than your mouth, I love this photo, especially the styling.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27080095
Love the feel to this image.

Overall you have a pretty great portfolio. There are a few amateur shots that you should delete, so skim through your port and only keep the best ones and your favourites.

Keep on doing awesome!

Meghan Hale wrote:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32476811
This isn't very flattering.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32476807
This is very pretty!

You have a very fresh, pretty look. You have some potential. I think you should tone your stomach a little bit, though.

Thank you for the feedback! I am a beginner so I do have much to learn. If you have any other tips/recommendations please feel free to share them!

Meghan Hale wrote:

I love the name Sucker Punch!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29768649
These photos are so beautiful. Everyone involved did an amazing job.

You've done some photos that aren't showing off your true beauty and potential, like these:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26826141
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30333675

And then you have ones like your display picture, that are FANTASTIC.

I think you should focus on only doing shoots that are outstanding.

Sucker Punch wrote:

Thanks for the feedback!

Ceci L wrote:
me

Some of your photos are phenomenal!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31511969
I don't like this one very much. It looks very amateur, and isn't as good as most of your photos.

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31290985
This is one of my favourites of yours. I love your expression, the styling, and your body positioning. Beautiful.

You have a fantastic range of poses and expressions shown in your port, and you're doing great. I'd suggest you do some more conceptual shoots, though.