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Senryū (川柳?, literally 'river willow') is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku in construction: three lines with 17 or fewer total morae (or "on", often translated as syllables, but see the article on onji for distinctions). Senryū tend to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature, and senryū are often cynical or darkly humorous while haiku are more serious.
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E X P O S E D
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New York, New York, US


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quickly overlooked
if inattentive- careful:
intimate glimpses

Jun 01 13 12:10 am  Link  Quote 
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Dimitrius C
Posts: 236
Gary, Indiana, US


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Jun 01 13 12:39 am  Link  Quote 
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Dimitrius C wrote:
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cold winds on chilled skin
past disturbances forget-
rest in depth within

Jun 01 13 12:57 am  Link  Quote 
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Axioma
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Gent, East Flanders, Belgium


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Axioma wrote:
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mist mutes vision too
distances obscured, in a
silence of mist: still

Jun 01 13 06:49 am  Link  Quote 
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Jorge Kreimer
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Los Angeles, California, US


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Salt Lake City, Utah, US


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Jun 01 13 12:51 pm  Link  Quote 
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MatureModelMM
Posts: 1,022
Detroit, Michigan, US


http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27800803  18+

I would love one on that photo, your poetry is always really nice!
Jun 01 13 01:01 pm  Link  Quote 
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Sarah_Bird
Posts: 292
Merrick, New York, US


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If you don't mind, I'd love one smile
Jun 01 13 07:39 pm  Link  Quote 
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Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
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designer shades, her
hiding behind rings of light
shout lost in silence


or
Designer shades her
hiding, behind rings of light
shout lost in silence

Jun 01 13 09:31 pm  Link  Quote 
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TDSImages wrote:
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hybridized roses-
overdressed, as if more were
needed by beauty

Jun 01 13 09:33 pm  Link  Quote 
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MatureModelMM wrote:
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I would love one on that photo, your poetry is always really nice!

I did this before
though in the dim past, a search
may recall, I can't

Jun 01 13 09:35 pm  Link  Quote 
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Sarah_Bird wrote:
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If you don't mind, I'd love one smile

the sweet time between
youth and age, hold on, before
the joy of play's lost

Jun 01 13 09:36 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jahanara
Posts: 124
Washington, District of Columbia, US


I'd like one!

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Jun 01 13 09:41 pm  Link  Quote 
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Chynecia De Ancariis wrote:
I'd like one!

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fire in the forest
dead of winter, longing for
imagined delight

Jun 01 13 10:22 pm  Link  Quote 
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Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,288
Los Angeles, California, US


Light Writer wrote:

designer shades, her
hiding behind rings of light
shout lost in silence


or
Designer shades her
hiding, behind rings of light
shout lost in silence

Very nice! Thank you!

Jun 02 13 04:17 pm  Link  Quote 
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MelissaAnn
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Seattle, Washington, US


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BlackSilk_GothModel
Posts: 200
Lynchburg, Virginia, US


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Tuesday Hanson
Posts: 32
Bellingham, Washington, US


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Light Writer
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Oakland, California, US


MelissaAnn  wrote:
How about this one?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32755519 (18+)

desert plant reaching
defying the earth, stone calls-
escape the gray sky

Jun 03 13 06:59 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
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Oakland, California, US


perpetual light,
a myth of romantics- death
perpetual myth

Jun 03 13 07:04 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


satire of sunset
political comment in
ironic cross stars

Jun 03 13 07:06 am  Link  Quote 
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Tuesday Hanson
Posts: 32
Bellingham, Washington, US


Thank you!
Jun 03 13 07:25 am  Link  Quote 
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The Dark Side
Posts: 308
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Light Writer wrote:

hybridized roses-
overdressed, as if more were
needed by beauty

Beautiful...thank you!!

Jun 03 13 08:12 am  Link  Quote 
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Dimitrius C
Posts: 236
Gary, Indiana, US


Light Writer wrote:

cold winds on chilled skin
past disturbances forget-
rest in depth within

I love it smile

Jun 03 13 09:49 am  Link  Quote 
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Marciia Gringe
Posts: 324
Lloydminster, Alberta, Canada


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Vampire Jessie
Posts: 2,129
Branson, Missouri, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130630/13/51d0978dd181a_m.jpg
Jun 30 13 02:13 pm  Link  Quote 
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Avatar Shots
Posts: 73
Los Angeles, California, US


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Jun 30 13 02:23 pm  Link  Quote 
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Acanthus Tattoos
Posts: 421
Union, New Jersey, US


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Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


power games with she
whose unlimited trust frees-
choosing to submit

Jun 30 13 07:45 pm  Link  Quote 
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Oakland, California, US


Vampire Jessie wrote:
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clinging to the shore
sand slipping away- shadow
the refuge- invites

Jun 30 13 07:48 pm  Link  Quote 
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Oakland, California, US


Avatar Shots wrote:
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bright eyes glistening,
strong posture, confident smile
belie nervous hands

Jun 30 13 07:51 pm  Link  Quote 
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Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


shadows like anise-
concentric rings- odor and
flavor of absinthe

Jun 30 13 07:58 pm  Link  Quote 
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EdwardKristopher
Posts: 3,375
Tempe, Arizona, US


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Jul 01 13 12:53 am  Link  Quote 
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Acanthus Tattoos
Posts: 421
Union, New Jersey, US


Light Writer wrote:

shadows like anise-
concentric rings- odor and
flavor of absinthe

thanks!

Jul 01 13 04:04 am  Link  Quote 
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Vampire Jessie
Posts: 2,129
Branson, Missouri, US


Light Writer wrote:

clinging to the shore
sand slipping away- shadow
the refuge- invites

Love it smile

Jul 02 13 03:27 pm  Link  Quote 
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Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
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EdwardKristopher wrote:
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sharp needle painting
modern iconography
in tender places

Jul 04 13 07:03 am  Link  Quote 
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Acanthus Tattoos
Posts: 421
Union, New Jersey, US


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