Forums > Critique > OK, I want to see some SERIOUS models only!

Model

mireille zsa zja

Posts: 60

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

Merci for yur input..i will work on being more expressive...
ameties
mireille

Mar 12 09 07:04 pm Link

Model

Kels Hunter

Posts: 255

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

me please

Mar 12 09 07:04 pm Link

Photographer

Image Designers

Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

Tarachin wrote:
Me please smile Its been a while since I had honest criticism wink

Beautiful model and beautiful images. Very nicely done work.

Mar 12 09 07:06 pm Link

Model

aminel

Posts: 69

Ronkonkoma, New York, US

mine pls?

Mar 12 09 07:06 pm Link

Photographer

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

LA Bajan  wrote:
Let me know please

Are you trying to go the fashion way?  If so, you need more styling to your work.  You have the physique and looks but fashion is all about styling.

Mar 12 09 07:07 pm Link

Model

Tarachin

Posts: 805

London, England, United Kingdom

Image Designers wrote:

Beautiful model and beautiful images. Very nicely done work.

Thank you so much, I am overjoyed to hear, but I will continue to better my work as I'm never content with it.. Thank you again smile

Mar 12 09 07:09 pm Link

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

Miss Amy Ripp wrote:
I'm pretty sure I know what you'll say...

LOL, what am I going to say?

Actually you're pretty and I would have liked to seen you more styled in images.  If you like fashion, then be more fashionable.  Look away from the camera.  When you look into the camera...ti's all about you.  Fashion means that it's not about you...but how you look in the dress and how good you make the dress look.  So look away from the camera to take away the attention to you.  Also work on poses and expressions.

Mar 12 09 07:11 pm Link

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San Francisco, California, US

Kindra Marie wrote:
Please if your still going

Love the height, poses, styling, expressions.  I'd certainly work with you.  Need anymore encouragement?

Mar 12 09 07:12 pm Link

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San Francisco, California, US

NiccoAlain wrote:

go for it

Need to be much more expressive in your face.  I just see the same thing in all the images.

Mar 12 09 07:13 pm Link

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San Francisco, California, US

PhillipPhotography wrote:
Hit me! Hope I'm not too late smile

This was more for models, but I'll say something about your work....it's good work but needs more punch to it.  Get more images that have impact.  The impact comes from expressions and strong poses along with contrast and color saturation.  Lighting seems ok for the most part though.

Mar 12 09 07:16 pm Link

Model

Aubrey Mills

Posts: 28

Johnson City, Tennessee, US

Me next, please.  And thank you in advance!

Mar 12 09 07:18 pm Link

Photographer

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

aenux wrote:
skipped me...

I'm so sorry, didn't mean to do that.  I really like your work.  Good variety, means you really think about what you're trying to achieve.  Keep it up...by the way, your face really lends itself very well for high-contrast images.

Mar 12 09 07:18 pm Link

Model

Engel Schrei

Posts: 14458

Indianapolis, Indiana, US

Mar 12 09 07:19 pm Link

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

Elley S wrote:
I'm curious.  smile

Really like the first row and the 3rd one on the second row.  Do more of those.

Mar 12 09 07:21 pm Link

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Golden T wrote:
hey..im up for this :-)

~T

Learn more body control to hide some features and show better the other features.

Mar 12 09 07:22 pm Link

Model

Shabay

Posts: 1139

West Hollywood, California, US

Please!

Mar 12 09 07:23 pm Link

Model

Jacqui Faye

Posts: 855

Tulsa, Oklahoma, US

I'd be pleased as punch to hear what you think, if you still have time.  smile

Mar 12 09 07:24 pm Link

Photographer

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

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Mar 12 09 07:26 pm Link

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San Francisco, California, US

x-Abstract-x wrote:
what bout me?

You need full length images, and more variety with better expressions.  No expressions = boring images.  You have more potential than that so work on it.

Mar 12 09 07:28 pm Link

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San Francisco, California, US

Natalie Swift wrote:
ok smile id appreciate it

Exotic looks giving excellent expressions.  Great figure and a lot of variety.  Love it!   I want to see more so that's a good thing.

Mar 12 09 07:30 pm Link

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Kelceiii wrote:
me please

I like your looks and being young you have time to develop yourself.  I'd simply say that you need to watch more movies and show drama in your motion and face.  The image with you caressing the guy's face could have been done better such as in my port with the girl in black leather in the grave yard titled "Twilight" as in the movie.  You're in that kind of pose...look away and down to your lower shoulder.

Mar 12 09 07:33 pm Link

Model

ElleV

Posts: 3343

San Antonio, Texas, US

Image Designers wrote:

You need bigger, brighter pictures.  You have a great figure and can pose well in showing the figure.  Show more expression and do more with your hair.  You need variety badly.

Thanks, I'll work on that!

Mar 12 09 07:34 pm Link

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San Francisco, California, US

aminel wrote:
mine pls?

I'm sorry to say this but you need more work on your whole port.  The images are to flat and simply not interesting...get better lit pictures, more color and better expressions and poses.

Mar 12 09 07:35 pm Link

Model

Tamara-marie

Posts: 3574

Kingston upon Hull, England, United Kingdom

me please thank u

xx

Mar 12 09 07:36 pm Link

Model

Meg enJoy

Posts: 52

STUDIO CITY, California, US

I'd love to hear your critique! Thank you

Mar 12 09 07:37 pm Link

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

Aubrey Mills wrote:
Me next, please.  And thank you in advance!

you're so tiny but look tall in because of your think build.  That's a great thing.  However, less skin and more substance is what you need.  Get better concepts and not just pretty, sexy girl images.

Mar 12 09 07:37 pm Link

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San Francisco, California, US

Engel Schrei wrote:

Mar 12 09 07:40 pm Link

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San Francisco, California, US

Shabay wrote:
Please!

Oh it's you.  I've commented your pictures in the past.  I really like your work and see a lot of great potential for you.  I'd certainly work with you.  Just keep on doing what you're doing.

Mar 12 09 07:41 pm Link

Model

Leo Velo

Posts: 1248

Portland, Oregon, US

me, perhaps?

///Leah

Mar 12 09 07:41 pm Link

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

Jacqui Faye wrote:
I'd be pleased as punch to hear what you think, if you still have time.  smile

really like the 2nd picture on the first row and maybe the 4th on the first row.  It seem like you have personality...let it show in your images.

Mar 12 09 07:44 pm Link

Model

Daniel Richter

Posts: 7

NORTH HOLLYWOOD, California, US

me next  smile

Mar 12 09 07:44 pm Link

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

Tamara-marie wrote:
me please thank u

xx

Tamara, your port seems more geared for a photoshop artist or an mua.  Get single, high quality images in your port unless you have each one of them be a lot different than the other.  You need better concepts and more drama.
Romel Evans

Mar 12 09 07:46 pm Link

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San Francisco, California, US

EmJoy wrote:
I'd love to hear your critique! Thank you

Good variety, not enough full length images, pretty, expressive face, good concepts and good image quality.  The only thing I'd suggest is get rid of the multiple-image images....not enough variety in there.

Mar 12 09 07:50 pm Link

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

velocity girl wrote:
me, perhaps?

///Leah

Nice alt work.  Keep it up...not enough of it here.

Mar 12 09 07:51 pm Link

Model

Dark Entries

Posts: 1822

San Francisco, California, US

I would like to know.

Mar 12 09 07:51 pm Link

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

Daniel Richter wrote:
me next  smile

Nice smile but not enough serious, masculin poses and looks.  Also, with that height you should have some nice suites and look more GQ.  Work on styling...it's what's all about.

Mar 12 09 07:52 pm Link

Model

Kindra Marie

Posts: 2089

San Diego, California, US

Image Designers wrote:

Love the height, poses, styling, expressions.  I'd certainly work with you.  Need anymore encouragement?

Thank you so much and if you are ever down this way let me know I would love to work with you.

Mar 12 09 07:54 pm Link

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

Alexandra R M wrote:
I would like to know.

Not enough variety and too much lens distortion used in your images.  Think about concepts and what you want to show others before doing it...seems too much of playing it by the ear here.

Mar 12 09 07:54 pm Link

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Posts: 1740

San Francisco, California, US

Kindra Marie wrote:

Thank you so much and if you are ever down this way let me know I would love to work with you.

And the same for you...if you're in the Bay area let me know a couple of weeks in advance.

Mar 12 09 07:55 pm Link

Model

Kindra Marie

Posts: 2089

San Diego, California, US

Image Designers wrote:

And the same for you...if you're in the Bay area let me know a couple of weeks in advance.

I will for sure

Mar 12 09 07:56 pm Link