Forums > Critique > I'll tell you 1 thing to make yourself better !

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

jessy nix wrote:
i'd like to know, when you have the time! i hope you feel better :-)

Thank you, I think you should get at least one good clear headshot. I want  to see your face smile

Apr 11 09 07:25 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Sye Ellis Photography wrote:
Interested!!

Seems like the same 2-3 poses in every shot. Try switching up your angles for more interesting shots.

Apr 11 09 07:26 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

PhyliciaV wrote:
I'm down !!

Get some full length shots, and extend your neck more smile

Apr 11 09 07:27 am Link

Model

Asha Etch

Posts: 1803

New York, New York, US

Me please.

Apr 11 09 07:29 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Don Reynolds  wrote:
I'd like to hear your thoughts.

I love #'s 2 and 3, they really pop from the rest, also your balck and whites photos are well done. Maybe try more studio work? You're great with outdoor work.

Apr 11 09 07:29 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

attila zsargo wrote:
would like to see your thoughts smile

I really enjoy your work! Maybe try working on the cropping of some shots. Some are too tight whereas others could be cropped more. Great work!

Apr 11 09 07:31 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

KEKnight wrote:
I can always improve.  Please tell me how!!!  hmm

I like the technique you use to make the photos look sort of like drawings, I don't know what that's called, but you do it well, and it gives a special pop to your photos!

Apr 11 09 07:35 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

BH fotografik wrote:
I'd like to hear your thoughts...

I'd like to see what you can do with studio work. Also, try to have your models strike more flattering poses.

Apr 11 09 07:37 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Essensuate wrote:
be my guest . . .

Your "stamp" is a bit distracting. I want to see your work, not your name all over the photos. You have a great sense of humor with some of your photos which is nice.

Apr 11 09 07:39 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Sahra S wrote:
ooh ooh I want to improve!

I think your hair is too mousey for your attitiude. Maybe a fiery red, or darker brown would help? Nice work though smile

Apr 11 09 07:40 am Link

Photographer

Sendu

Posts: 3530

Cambridge, England, United Kingdom

tell me

Apr 11 09 07:41 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Aleks Hayward wrote:
mee =]

You're good wink Very good. I would love to see more full length fashion shots from you!

Apr 11 09 07:41 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

OliviaChristine wrote:
still playing?

Your avatar is unbelievable! That glamorous look suits you well! You have an amazing body, do more fashion work!! Hot!!

Apr 11 09 07:43 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Jon Souer wrote:
Sure - I'd love your opinion

Please practice with photoshop, the best PS jobs are the ones you can't tell have had any work done to them. You are very heavy handed in some photos, and it doesn't look natural at all. Best of luck!

Apr 11 09 07:45 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

RSM-images wrote:
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I am always appreciative of constructive criticism.

Please be aware that the MM thumbnail process makes images appear flat (such as the red bikini image) and enlarging them makes a huge difference.

Thank you for doing all of these critiques.

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Do you shoot for you, or for the model? You should be more direct in asking the model to do what YOU want, rather than just taking photos of her. You have good outdoor shooting skills, but they feel very casual and I think you can go much further with your talents.

Apr 11 09 07:48 am Link

Photographer

KEKnight

Posts: 1876

Cumming, Georgia, US

Kat Livingston wrote:

I like the technique you use to make the photos look sort of like drawings, I don't know what that's called, but you do it well, and it gives a special pop to your photos!

Thanks Kat.  Love  your port!!!!  smile

Apr 11 09 07:48 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Sahani Blue wrote:
Me please.

I noticed you like to use props a lot. I'd suggest trying more interesting poses, and facial expressions. Nice creative work though.

Apr 11 09 07:50 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Sendu wrote:
tell me

I love your outdoor work! I think in-studio, you could work on your lighting by trying new techniques and placement of your light sources. Nice work!

Apr 11 09 07:52 am Link

Model

gee-uh

Posts: 593

Kirkwood, Missouri, US

oh me! i love your default, so effin pretty!

Apr 11 09 07:53 am Link

Photographer

attila zsargo

Posts: 680

Shenzhen, Guangdong, China

Kat Livingston wrote:

I really enjoy your work! Maybe try working on the cropping of some shots. Some are too tight whereas others could be cropped more. Great work!

thanks and keep up the good work smile

Apr 11 09 07:59 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

gia poopoozolo wrote:
oh me! i love your default, so effin pretty!

You have TONS of potential! I am curious to see how you grow as a model. You could do any kind of work really. Beauty, fashion, pin-up, commercial, alt....
I'm gonna keep an eye out for you wink

Apr 11 09 08:00 am Link

Model

KimberLeigh

Posts: 1384

Howell, Michigan, US

I really admire you and I'd love to hear how I can improve. I know I have a looooong way to go.

Apr 11 09 08:00 am Link

Photographer

The Alternative Image

Posts: 4129

London, England, United Kingdom

Yes please if you have time.

Apr 11 09 08:03 am Link

Model

jessy nix

Posts: 1297

Urbino, Marche, Italy

Kat Livingston wrote:
Thank you, I think you should get at least one good clear headshot. I want  to see your face smile

i agree!! it's difficult to get a really good headshot, but i'm trying :-) thank you!

Apr 11 09 08:04 am Link

Model

Axioma

Posts: 6822

Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium

Please do wink! I value your opinion. thanks!

Apr 11 09 08:23 am Link

Model

Meichelle Johnson

Posts: 1183

Clovis, New Mexico, US

I would love to know!

Apr 11 09 08:24 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

KimberLeigh G wrote:
I really admire you and I'd love to hear how I can improve. I know I have a looooong way to go.

Be creative with your angles. You can try looking away from the camera, tilting your body, hips, shoulder, chin, etc. Take chances smile

Apr 11 09 08:30 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

The Alternative Image  wrote:
Yes please if you have time.

You take lovely and creative photos,well done smile Maybe try working on your lighting to help your photos stand out. Great job!

Apr 11 09 08:31 am Link

Photographer

Alan H Bruce

Posts: 421

San Diego, California, US

Kat Livingston wrote:

I'd like to see what you can do with studio work. Also, try to have your models strike more flattering poses.

Thanks for the comment, and me, too... I don't have a studio!

Apr 11 09 08:31 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Mini_ wrote:
Please do wink! I value your opinion. thanks!

You pose so well! I might suggest that you try a look far from your own. A wig maybe? Or modeling a men's suit with slicked back hair, something that is different from your femine, soft style wink

Apr 11 09 08:33 am Link

Model

gabriell_a

Posts: 1616

Manaus, Amazonas, Brazil

Yes please :]

Apr 11 09 08:35 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

Meichelle Johnson wrote:
I would love to know!

Beautiful port!! One suggestion: Remove the gun photo, it brings down your port, which other than that photo is excellent! You know what you're doing!! Only other thing I might say is to be more creaive with your posing, try interesting angles with your body smile

Apr 11 09 08:36 am Link

Model

Meichelle Johnson

Posts: 1183

Clovis, New Mexico, US

Kat Livingston wrote:

Beautiful port!! One suggestion: Remove the gun photo, it brings down your port, which other than that photo is excellent! You know what you're doing!! Only other thing I might say is to be more creaive with your posing, try interesting angles with your body smile

Wow, thank you so much! I will remove that photo next. Thanks again!

Apr 11 09 08:38 am Link

Model

Kat Livingston

Posts: 1645

Brooklyn, New York, US

kali hyde wrote:
Yes please :]

All of your photos are very distracting. The backgrounds, the bright colors, the make-up and such. You should have a few clear photos of your self, headshot and full length so that people know what their getting. You're lovely though! smile

Apr 11 09 08:38 am Link

Model

Kaylin Omo

Posts: 852

Huntington Beach, California, US

What do you think?

Apr 11 09 08:43 am Link

Photographer

Sendu

Posts: 3530

Cambridge, England, United Kingdom

Kat Livingston wrote:

I love your outdoor work! I think in-studio, you could work on your lighting by trying new techniques and placement of your light sources. Nice work!

Thanks smile It's going to be hard moving those light sources though, since they're windows. Pesky things! wink

Apr 11 09 08:46 am Link

Photographer

MtL Productions

Posts: 85

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

Ok, I'm game to find out how I can appove smile

Apr 11 09 08:47 am Link

Model

KimberLeigh

Posts: 1384

Howell, Michigan, US

Kat Livingston wrote:

Be creative with your angles. You can try looking away from the camera, tilting your body, hips, shoulder, chin, etc. Take chances smile

Thank you very much! Will definitely work on this!

Apr 11 09 09:01 am Link

Model

Victoria Julison

Posts: 1466

Atlanta, Georgia, US

me?>

Apr 11 09 09:02 am Link

Photographer

Anna Inez

Posts: 2072

Columbus, Ohio, US

Me..and Thank you!

Hope you feel better

Apr 11 09 09:06 am Link