Kat Livingston wrote:
Okay, once again, I'm nursing my jaw after the last of my wisom teeth were finally pulled....
SO! I will tell you ONE thing, in my honest opinion, that you could do to make yourself/ or your port better!

*EDIT* I am taking a break for a bit, I'll be back a little later. Feel free to post and I WILL get to you!

Ok - do me...

Kat Livingston wrote:

You take lovely and creative photos,well done Maybe try working on your lighting to help your photos stand out. Great job!

Thanks for your time, working on that

Kat Livingston wrote:

Get some variety, do some swimsuit, dresses, etc. We've seen you in jeans, let's see what else you can do Also, get a good clear headshot from the neck up!

I'm either waiting to get pictures back or already have shoots set up to do allll of those

Kaylin Omo wrote:
What do you think?

I think you should try to more things with your hair. Straighten it, wear it back,or  up, slicked, whatever. It is lovely, but try some different things with it.

MTL Productions wrote:
Ok, I'm game to find out how I can appove

Your photos feel candid. As though they (people) were there, and you just shot them. Kinda like paparazzi. You know what I mean? I think you could do quite well at that, and selling your pics to the celebrity dish-mags. If you want to do photos more around models, work more with your lighting to create light and shadows.

Victoria Julison wrote:
me?>

You have a tendency to look angry in all of your photos. Try to relax your face a little. Try different expressions, give the photographer something to choose from in the end.

AnnaInez Photography wrote:
Me..and Thank you!

Hope you feel better

You know that I adore your work. You are so creative. I have to say that I love the new direction with the outdoor almost poloroid looking work! It feels nostalgic and makes me wanna be there. Kudos

Kat Livingston wrote:

I think you should try to more things with your hair. Straighten it, wear it back,or  up, slicked, whatever. It is lovely, but try some different things with it.

You're right- just trying to convince photographers- I offer to do something different with my hair & they all want it curly!

Stacey Robyn wrote:
meee

Whew sweetie! You were meant for pin-up! I think you should get a few really great pin-up shoots in You really pop in those corset photos!

GKF Photography wrote:
Oh oh me please.  Please critique my work.

You  make the beach and the outdoors look so good! Sadly, the people don't look so great. The sun seems to totally white-out their faces. But keep at it, you could be the next Swimsuit Illustrated Photog

Bettina Ray wrote:
Please reply to my post -- right  now I need all the critism I can get since I am a NEW model, haha. Thx

Sweetheart, toss the first 3 photos of you where you're photoshopped horribly over bad backgrounds. They hurt your port! Also, you have a beautiful face, you don't need to try so hard to look sexy. You already are

ashdof wrote:

Ok - do me...

I really like some of your photos, they seem very soulfull. Some of the others could use some work. The lighting seems dull on some making the images seem flat.

Maeve L wrote:
hey, I'd like the advice please!

I think you have great potential. Try something with your hair maybe. I'd say go darker. It seems too mousey for you. Also, work your body and pose more

Harley Hunter wrote:
yes please
i've only had one shoot but i'd like to know how i'm doing so far
x

Was that your first shoot? Impressive:) You also have great potential! Work on facial expressions, and as you do more shoots, start to replace some of the duplicates in your port from your first shoot.Well done!

Mario Graphics  wrote:
can you do it with mines?

I personally don't care for loud graphics, so I may not be able to help much. I can say- that I like the top row as the colors are more muted than the rows below.

Kat Livingston wrote:

I think you have great potential. Try something with your hair maybe. I'd say go darker. It seems too mousey for you. Also, work your body and pose more

Thank you!!
I have been contemplating going darker but no-one ever agreed with me! I'll work on the posing

Frances Jewel wrote:
me

I can't see you! You're always either looking away, or hidden in shadow! Let's see some clear photos of that lovely face! I do enjoy the bottom pics in the old 20's style

MissIz wrote:
me please!!

There's no reason to have 5 shots of the same look.
I would narrow it to 2 per look, since you only have 3 looks in your whole port.
It's more important to have quality photos over quantity. Best of luck - you're gorgeous!

David Sheldrick wrote:
me please

You're 6'1"!!!?? And asian??? WHAT? You need to get yourself to the nearest agency. You have a great look, obviously the height too! Good luck!

Faith EnFire wrote:
oh me!

I would work on your facial expressions, you have a lovely face, let's see some range with it Nice creative work though!

Patrick Shipstad wrote:
I'd love to hear your opinions.. thanks for your time :-)

I love your photos with the blue tonal quality! Wow do they look good! You are very talented, I'd love to see you shoot more beauty. The one on the first page is stunning!

Shannon_Nicole wrote:
Me, please?

I like the pics with the men's wear look. Very sexy! I would try to do some beauty work, or at least get a good clear headshot for your port

Sophie Darling wrote:
Sure, let me know please.

I've been waiting for you to do a stylized beauty shoot. Hair, make-up ...good clear shot from the neck up. Not like your avi You are so beautiful!!

Mizz CeCe wrote:
Meee next! =]

Do you only want to model lingerie? I'd love to see you try some pin-up work!