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Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

EDIT: More critiques for the next 10

I'll give it to you - for the first 15. It might be short and sweet or a little longer if I have something more to say.

Jan 31 10 08:35 pm Link

Model

Donauta

Posts: 47

Brooklyn, New York, US

I would

Jan 31 10 08:40 pm Link

Model

Aly Gallagher

Posts: 811

Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada

Yes please smile

Jan 31 10 08:48 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Donauta wrote:
I would

You have a great figure and you're tall! I love this shot:

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090427/16/49f63a8b11c2e_m.jpg

Start working with some stronger photographers and go to agency open calls!

Jan 31 10 08:50 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Alycia Gallagher wrote:
Yes please smile

You're got a great look. I love your avatar and this one:

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091214/14/4b26b63fc4867_m.jpg

So bad ass and such a contrast with your avatar smile

Good luck in China!

Jan 31 10 08:53 pm Link

Model

JessieDee

Posts: 398

Orlando, Florida, US

Sounds good smile

Jan 31 10 08:55 pm Link

Photographer

Good Egg Productions

Posts: 16713

Orlando, Florida, US

Go for it.

Jan 31 10 08:56 pm Link

Model

Jacie Saltzman

Posts: 16

Provo, Utah, US

yeah lets hear it!

Jan 31 10 09:02 pm Link

Photographer

PhillipPhotography

Posts: 2490

San Leandro, California, US

Let's hear it smile

Jan 31 10 09:03 pm Link

Photographer

Franko Photo

Posts: 1622

San Jose, California, US

I'm in... #7

Jan 31 10 09:03 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

JessieDee wrote:
Sounds good smile

You've worked with some great photographers. I don't really feel like you have a strong fashion look, but you definitely know how to accentuate your best features.

I really like this:  https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090307/19/49b341c8a4cad_m.jpg

Now just get a good clean headshot!

Jan 31 10 09:04 pm Link

Photographer

Set222

Posts: 8900

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Me this time

Jan 31 10 09:05 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Good Egg Productions wrote:
Go for it.

https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090404/00/49d70842a3d68_m.jpg

You have some really great photos - totally not what a fashion/commercial model needs in her portfolio, but interesting and well-executed concepts nonetheless.

Jan 31 10 09:06 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Jacie Saltzman wrote:
yeah lets hear it!

The majority of your portfolio looks like senior portraits and your avatar looks like something exploded in your face....not flattering.

Jan 31 10 09:07 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

PhillipPhotography wrote:
Let's hear it smile

You do some great portrait work

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090930/10/4ac3919887756_m.jpg

Again, not what fashion/commercial models are most likely looking to test with - but you've got some quality images.

Jan 31 10 09:08 pm Link

Photographer

Don Anderson

Posts: 297

Salem, Oregon, US

I'll take your opinion. Go for it.

Jan 31 10 09:08 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Anzalone Photography wrote:
I'm in... #7

Your work is very glamour - not a genre that I am interested in. Get rid of some of the duplicates that you have from the same set.

This one is strong:

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100108/16/4b47c894e1aaa_m.jpg

Jan 31 10 09:10 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Set222 wrote:
Me this time

This caught my eye from your current set:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091203/15/4b184e88aa368_m.jpg

Jan 31 10 09:11 pm Link

Photographer

PIEntertainment

Posts: 1308

Tokyo, Tokyo, Japan

Do me miss belle?!!!?!

Jan 31 10 09:12 pm Link

Photographer

PhillipPhotography

Posts: 2490

San Leandro, California, US

TrackBelle wrote:

You do some great portrait work

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090930/10/4ac3919887756_m.jpg

Again, not what fashion/commercial models are most likely looking to test with - but you've got some quality images.

Totally hear you smile  Thanks for taking time.

Jan 31 10 09:13 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Don Anderson wrote:
I'll take your opinion. Go for it.

Get rid of all of the images on your profile page. They are unnecessary.

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090813/22/4a84fa975f2bc_m.jpg

Not a fan of this - the hair looks awful, the skin needs retouching and there are lots of shadows across her face that make her skin look sallow.

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100105/22/4b442e4a93090_m.jpg

This makeup does not work in this light at all. Her eyes look dirty, and the shadow across the left side of her face kills this image. Delete.

Jan 31 10 09:14 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

PIEntertainment wrote:
Do me miss belle?!!!?!

You need more variety in your portfolio.

Why is this in your portfolio?

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091212/11/4b23efeb0f334_m.jpg

It far too dark and not in an artistic way.

Jan 31 10 09:15 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

I've done 10, that means there is room for 5 more people.

I'm off to bed now but will finish tomorrow.

Jan 31 10 09:16 pm Link

Photographer

DELETED-ACCOUNT_

Posts: 10303

Los Angeles, California, US

Darn, guess I'll have to wait till tomorrow smile

Jan 31 10 09:27 pm Link

Model

John Ujjjjjjj Xghp

Posts: 2298

Ķızıltepa, Navoi, Uzbekistan

Made it in before the cut-off! *Yes!*

Jan 31 10 10:28 pm Link

Model

Teresa Lavina

Posts: 216

Portland, Oregon, US

I'm in! YES!

Jan 31 10 11:00 pm Link

Model

Victoria Dagger

Posts: 2051

San Francisco, California, US

Scrapin' in under the wire...

Feb 01 10 12:37 am Link

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Bekah Jenkins

Posts: 61

Nashville, Arkansas, US

Im number 15!

Feb 01 10 06:16 am Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Tyrone Lavigne wrote:
Darn, guess I'll have to wait till tomorrow smile

You've worked with Kelli so you are automatically awesome! I'm not such a big fan of your Year One work, maybe just scrap that folder completely. Your other work is stronger. I can see models going to you for potential ZED card shots.

Feb 01 10 06:17 am Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Lisa Levin wrote:
Made it in before the cut-off! *Yes!*

You have some really nice work and a very unique look. I would love to see a clean commercial headshot from you!

Feb 01 10 06:32 am Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Teresa Lavina wrote:
I'm in! YES!

Very strong avatar - definitely your best work. Some of your older stuff can go though:

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080602/17/4844651f9a997_m.jpg

Feb 01 10 06:33 am Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Victoria Dagger wrote:
Scrapin' in under the wire...

This image grabs me when I look at your portfolio:

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090907/22/4aa5efd4a576a_m.jpg

You look so pretty, delicate and vulnerable. I love it!

Feb 01 10 06:34 am Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Bekah Jenkins wrote:
Im number 15!

Talk about a strong portfolio! This is my favorite:

https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100130/19/4b64fc6e5230f_m.jpg

The dress is just so luxurious!

Feb 01 10 06:35 am Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

That's wrap. I may open this thread up in the future for more.

Feb 01 10 06:35 am Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

Opening this up for 10 more...

Feb 01 10 09:39 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

OK Belle your turn to hit me   :-)   or   8-[

Feb 01 10 10:49 am Link

Photographer

Rebecca Newman Photography

Posts: 1631

Tampa, Florida, US

Hey darlin...I'll have a go!

Feb 01 10 11:46 am Link

Model

Kaia

Posts: 1563

Dallas, Texas, US

I'm in!

Feb 01 10 12:39 pm Link

Model

Jade Brennan

Posts: 143

East Grinstead, England, United Kingdom

Would love your opinion

Feb 01 10 01:46 pm Link

Photographer

The Face Photography

Posts: 1549

Madrid, Madrid, Spain

Me too!

Feb 01 10 03:29 pm Link