L Raye wrote:
4 please.

You have some great concepts that you carry out well. Your lighting is off in some of the photos however. You tend to get some hot spots on the face and arms. Be careful of that. Also, a little photoshop to cover blemishes and bags would be ideal.

Tatiana Lyadochkina wrote:
Is it possible to get all 4?

My dear....your work is ASTOUNDING. You have amazing cheekbones, eyes and well everything. You're gorgeous. I can't pick just one photo as your best and you do not have a worst in my opinion. If anything you should be handing out critiques instead of asking for them because you clearly know what you're doing.

Nicole M Berg wrote:
My dear....your work is ASTOUNDING. You have amazing cheekbones, eyes and well everything. You're gorgeous. I can't pick just one photo as your best and you do not have a worst in my opinion. If anything you should be handing out critiques instead of asking for them because you clearly know what you're doing.

Aw, this made me smile. Thank you so very much!

Jennifer Susan wrote:
no 4 please

You have the "edgy" type of look, and from what I read on your page that's the kind of style you want to go with. So, I suggest you get out there and find some killer local photographers to help you get those images. Make sure they have good editing skills, and know how to use light. You don't want "GWC" types of photos.

H B P wrote:
I take 4 also please.

You have some great work, but I can't really find your main focus. What do you love to shoot the most? I really think you'd be great for editorial and/or fashion. Your nude work isn't bad, but they are not your strongest. So basically, I challenge you to pick one and get some great shoots from it in the next couple months. Whether it be nude, fashion, editorial, or even just portraiture. But pick one and set up some killer shoots with some awesome local models.

TrackBelle wrote:
no 1 please

I just love this! It shows your gorgeous face naturally and displays your fun personality!

ciara caneega wrote:
2

Shawn Feile wrote:
I'll take a number 4 please.

Your concepts are interesting. The "All Tied Up" aren't your best work at all. Also, try to shoot from different angles. You have quite a few shots of models looking over their shoulders back at you.

April Marie x wrote:
1 please!

For the love of everything...STOP CLOSING YOUR EYES! haha. You are doing that way way too much. People want to see those beautiful eyes. Anyway, this is one of your best head shots. Tell your photographers to stop over editing your face, though.

Senna Photography wrote:
2 please

I'll be honest. There's a few that I just don't think are very good. You have way better work than any of these.

1. http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … d0f53c.jpg
- distorted and doesn't have a real meaning...what is the purpose of this shot?
2. http://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 4870a6.jpg (18+)
- awful angle and she looks bored

areno wrote:
Number 4?

It's all very...portrait and candid. You need to pick a focus and go with it (fashion, editorial, print, beauty, etc). Also work on lighting and editing. If you aren't good with photoshop then send the photos out to a wizard. When a model pays you, part of that money should go to making those photos look the very best they can.

Elyse Jankowski wrote:
4 please!

You're beautiful and have a solid portfolio. I however see you more as a print/editorial model. You have the perfect look for that. Not so much fashion/runway. I think you should try and get some work for magazine ads and such. Just an honest opinion.

Holly Frost wrote:
Oooh please!

Edit: Aww hell I meant to respond to this as a critique for my other port, #631870. Didn't realize I was signed into this one. Also, 4 please.

You have a very diverse portfolio; just like me! I know it's hard to settle somewhere, trust me. But since I've made it a resolution to try to pick one area, I think maybe you should as well. I think you should try some fun makeup/beauty shots.

Nicole M Berg wrote:

You're beautiful and have a solid portfolio. I however see you more as a print/editorial model. You have the perfect look for that. Not so much fashion/runway. I think you should try and get some work for magazine ads and such. Just an honest opinion.

Thank you & agreed! Now how would I go about doing so WITHOUT an agency? haha

(though I will be submitting to some soon...)

Nicole M Berg wrote:

You have a very diverse portfolio; just like me! I know it's hard to settle somewhere, trust me. But since I've made it a resolution to try to pick one area, I think maybe you should as well. I think you should try some fun makeup/beauty shots.

Well thank you so very much! I will keep that in mind and would love some make up and beauty shots. That's a niche I haven't quite tried. Thanks again!

Nicole M Berg wrote:

I just love this! It shows your gorgeous face naturally and displays your fun personality!

Thank you

Joshua Mercurio Drapehs wrote:
Did I make it?
I'll have a number 2 with fries and a Dr Pepper please

It's a toss up. I don't like either of these.


- Her eyes are so dead...unemotional...and the concept is eh.


- Shadows and angle just make me not like it. Does not benefit your port.

Avicdar - Toronto wrote:
2 Please!

Oh please. Do you even have a bad photo? But if I have to pick one, I like this the least (even though I still like it). It's a little too dark. I would have liked to see her whole face and body.

Nicole M Berg wrote:

It's a toss up. I don't like either of these.


- Her eyes are so dead...unemotional...and the concept is eh.


- Shadows and angle just make me not like it. Does not benefit your port.

Thanks