varton wrote:

Jennifer, You look stunning and do not understand why you are saying in your profile you are not actively looking to shoot.
You pose very well, have camera presence, eye contact and really gorgeous. Love all your expressions, from nice, to naughty
This is my fav
gorgeous boudoir, here simple and elegant
all listed.
I love your look and if you were close by I would make you change your mind not to shoot.

Thank You 

Francis G Photography wrote:
me pls. thanks.

Francis
you have some very strong photos in your port likelisted
and weak ones like , sweater on the beach? hmm
I am not crazy about your beach shots, they come out flat and lifeless, colors come out pale.
keep this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22110284 pose and angle is great
delete this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22110363 bad angle and pose=she looks chubby.
my fav and your best she saves the day.
You need to work more on you outdoor compositions and lighting, do not rely on models to get the right poses. studio shots are good as far as lighting.

cydneyr wrote:
I would love to know! hahah thank you!

New model who want's to know
There is only one photo out of 4 I like, so too early to laugh.
you look cute in all of them but you need to get serious and find the right photographer/mua to come up with a good port if you are interested to be hired.
if not facebook is better place to hang those.

Nudes by Lisa wrote:
If you're still going, I would love to know as well!

I am not so crazy about photo quality, but poses captured are really good but does not strike a chord with me.
you may want to post more high contrast bw or sepia tones in your work because color nudes are often perceived as just naked photos if the lighting is flat and low contrast.
I hope this helps.

AidenSomerville wrote:
Go for it!

I recognize you from that shirt, LOL
I already did look at your port many moons ago but you are too lazy to search for my reply I understand the topic is 18 page long but if you care enough there is an easy way of searching and finding it.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15239654

varton wrote:

I recognize you from that shirt, LOL
I already did look at your port many moons ago but you are too lazy to search for my reply I understand the topic is 18 page long but if you care enough there is an easy way of searching and finding it.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15239654

Hahaha, wow it was many moons ago. Sorry about that!

Thanks for the critique. I will defiantly work on my confidence!

varton wrote:

New model who want's to know
There is only one photo out of 4 I like, so too early to laugh.
you look cute in all of them but you need to get serious and find the right photographer/mua to come up with a good port if you are interested to be hired.
if not facebook is better place to hang those.

Alright! Thanks so much

David S April wrote:
if you are still going..., hit me

David, you are excellent in both concepts and lighting and created beautiful pics.
In this one if the umbrella was a bit tilted she would have appeared cuter
you have captured here expertly her bad ass attitude, it is cropped a bit too tightly. listed
This is amazing and my fav listed
keep it up you are amazing.

varton wrote:
Francis
you have some very strong photos in your port likelisted
and weak ones like , sweater on the beach? hmm
I am not crazy about your beach shots, they come out flat and lifeless, colors come out pale.
keep this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22110284 pose and angle is great
delete this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22110363 bad angle and pose=she looks chubby.
my fav and your best she saves the day.
You need to work more on you outdoor compositions and lighting, do not rely on models to get the right poses. studio shots are good as far as lighting.

Cynthia Serrano  wrote:
Curious

Your pictures lean more to alt modeling and give an impression of a dancer rather then a model. I like this one but too dark to list.
Also this one is my fav
came out good and like the make up.
Remove the group pics, as it is not adding anything and weakening your port. All my best to you. Find good  photographers and do some cleaning.

xxSmiley wrote:
Bump

I really like your look and smile.
Your port is full of great poses and wardrobe but they are very average or even some below average in quality.
I love your eyes in this too much brushing and flat light
this is a great pose https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22662227 +18 but whale nets makes you look cheap.
This is your best modeling port pose/picture listed
The feet fetish album is a kind of missing in action to me, because feet fetishism is not just pictures of body parts, you or the photographer do not have enough know how  in order to strike a chord with this niche market.
You are beautiful, you will do well in alt markets but you really need a great photographer mua and stylists to fix up your port.

H Jules wrote:
I really like your attention detail . cool Try me

Hello, I love what I see in your port, I like your urban style creations but the photos do not show well the details. You are right, anyone can take pictures, I love to spend time on details. For instance I love the picture of colored fishnets on the roof top https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19470916 +18 but If my goal was to model the shoes with hosiery then I would not do it this way. I would pick colorful sheer shiny pantyhose instead.
Playful attitude of models, touching each other and spike bracelets with neon color fishnets makes this photo more erotic then to illustrate style or fashion.
Glamor with an "edge" is not an excuse to get away with "cheap" . Always remember who your audience is. I love this photo and fashion statement a lot but photo quality is weak.
My fav and your best photo in the bunch listed.
You have great inspirations, but inexperienced photographers can break your fashion consultant stylist image in no time.
all my best.

varton wrote:

You have a terrific black and white shooting style
and this illustrate it very well

my favorite, listed
keep clicking super job!

Thank you ...

SeaJae - Cirque Studios wrote:
Do Tell!

Overall excellent job
few problems on your anglesin this one the gap in teeth is not flattering, I also do not like the bulge in tummy, compared to this it can be deleted as it is not adding anything to your port.
the latter is your best and listed. I also love this one
lovely work, keep clicking. watch your concepts, do not shoot without a goal.

Brandon Sky Porter wrote:
I'm game.

you have some good work in your port
This one is a eye catcher and the best because there are here lovely contrasting colors and a gorgeous model. I prefer this and find it a very strong one due to high contrast and tough expression, listed.
Be careful with model poses like in this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21155642 (looking wrong direction)

AlyssaMichelle Photo wrote:
Me please )

Great shoot style and interesting concepts in your port.
I love this a lot
but this one is
the best in your port, and my fav, nice editorial feel.

TheBGPicture wrote:
Yes please. Still learning so constructive advice welcome.

you are doing very well
listed, great style and make up
avoid this kind of perspectiveand
you may want to add more studio pics and I like this
be careful how you work your sweet spots, some photos of the same model and same outfits are redundant, try to lose some

varton wrote:
Bring it on everyone.

edit:
I will be working on your port in the order of entry, and will be processing ALL requests ASAP, please be patient and give me some time to look around your port. I don't want to rush to judgment and rubber stamp my replies with one size fits all approach.
Thank you for the opportunity given and check back here once in a while for latest topic status

Now at  page 18
keep them coming as my time permits will honor all requests.

Ooo, I'd love to know! Have a look-see.

RDPhoto - Ric wrote:
please - I need to know what to drop - thanks!

I love your editorial style, stylish fashion captures as well
This is your best and my fav Great capture
this is your second best, I find the light a bit too strong at chest neck area.Great location and wardrobe.
On indoor glamour, watch your softbox/strobe orientation to eliminate shadows
in this the left top side strobe gives a bad hand shadow on face.
You have overall eye for beauty and love your perspectives and concepts like this
keep it up you're doing a great job.

BossyB wrote:
me please

You are doing great in fashion and beauty work. Your photos are very good and framed perfect.
Love thislisted
I find this one being the best and listed, great style and gorgeous model.
a bit dark for my taste, but your work shows that you are in control and getting the right poses.
Excellent work overall. You need to work a bit more on outdoor lighting.
this is a bit flat, , I am not crazy about the shoot angle and it does not show model well.

Shauni Mulder wrote:
[Ooo, I'd love to know! Have a look-see.

I only found one great picture gives me film noir feel. listed.
I am not crazy about the others especially face paints
In any case you need  quality photos to better show off your features and clean up some photos from your port. I am not sure if you posted  this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19647254 up side down on purpose.
Some of your photos could be perceived more artistic if their exposure wasn't so flat and colors pale. You need a good thog like yesterday.