Kitty SixtyFour wrote:
I hope I have a best!

you have a cute witty sassy look, and you would be perfect for pinups.You need to work with some good photographers to take you to the next level. Your port is weak because the pictures seem to be taken at hobbyist level, cropping is improperly done and they show you mostly in casual style. You should add more make up and hair styles and some exciting wardrobe.
All my best to you, you look beautiful.

Evelyn Veesovata wrote:
me too?

You look gorgeous and hot,
this one is a sure eye catcher. Love the pose and eye contact.
here your make up and hair is really stands out but I am not crazy about the posing in the bottom pic. Perhaps the cropping to tight and gives the impression you are bending forward too much. but I doubt because in this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22884082 you are doing the same. No good.
I love your hair and pose here not strong for a list though.
the light and your lips are no good on this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22883938
this is your best posed with attitude and style. Feels very pro, compared to others.
I like your eye contact on this one
keep it up, you can do better and watch your poses, be bold and pose with confidence. Confidence in your beauty and attitude is a bit lacking in your photos.
all my best

Lauren Eckkey wrote:
Id love to know

You are tall and have gorgeous legs. Your look would be a match most modeling  genres.
Don't let your hair get in your eyes all the time when you pose. like this , very bad pose. Especially the position of arms and hands, not to mention the bad crop, anyway, I saw that happening in several pictures. What's the point? Those  eyes are too gorgeous to be hidden. LOL.
those below pics are not adding anything to your port.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22816641
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22816681

in this one you as a model must constantly pay attention where your hands and feet are. If you turned a bit more towards the camera it would show better your hourglass figure and add so much to this killer pose. Your ankle and calf the way is pushing against the steps is not sexy at all and almost an eye sore.

this is your best look but don't like the cropping. Otherwise the lighting was perfect.
This is my fav listed

Loose the last 2 photos in the port

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22613306
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22613279
keep it up.

nigel kent wrote:
please

OK Nigel
You say in profile you are new,and I see some good stuff in your port.
this is your best
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22780086 listed
excellent location and sweet spot well populated.
In general your topless nudes are good.
work a bit on your studio lighting to avoid uniform light.
pay attention to your crops.
in a nylons and heels shoot like this one
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22339495
you should never crop on shoes, and better yet you should shoot this angle without shoes and just show nyloned soles and heels for a better impact.

in this kind of streaking shadow nudes https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22339534 +18
high contrast bw or sepia photoshop job would give out her emotions and curves better.
You're doing good. When you add more photos get rid of the same series pictures (same model, with same look and same location)

Austin Galantography wrote:
I'll play!

Hello Austin,

you seem to enjoy your work very much as  this pic suggests 18+ https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22880526
your style is bold and your concepts are exciting.
Like this one a lot.
Great capture.
excellent body paint on this one
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22893279 +18
this one is great and my fav listed.
You need to master your indoor and studio level lightning
I was not impressed with those below.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20747977
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22026793
never crop at shoes either
also left side is badly burned.

If you really want to go out of your way and do this right and shoot amazing smooth legs, then the best way is to shoot models wearing sheer to waist sheerest tan pantyhose. Provided that there is the right amount of light, the smooth glow and shimmer you will get can not be beaten by any retouch job.

artlitsol wrote:
ok

see page 19
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15303850

raychel wrote:
Yes, please and thank you.

diverse and artistic port, love your artistic nudes.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15190383 +18
love this a lot
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/12216590 my fav +18 listed
you may want to add some dressed up studio shots
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15264230 too light
keep it up. your are very gorgeous.

JamesD wrote:
Im always down for some critique!

great port
this is your best and my fav listed.
overall stylish and handsome
keep up the good job.

Justin Bonaparte wrote:
I'm up for a little C&C!

Love your glamour style shooting
like this
you have an eye for beauty and frame them well.
outdoor shoots are spot on great backgrounds and you master your lighting.
love the fluid dynamics in your pics very colorful and fun job listed.
another example showing your attention to details.
this is your best and my fav, listed.

John Ogden Pyres wrote:
Perhaps me? Thank you.

I like your port, unusual concepts and very stylish
like this one spooky
this is a great look

keep it up.

varton wrote:

see page 19
https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15303850

Thank you!!!Thank you!!!

Dirk Linton wrote:
Tell me please!

I like your wedding work
this one has a nice color touch.
You have some very gorgeous portraits and outdoor beauty shots.
great job overall
this is your best

and my fav, listed

GDML77 wrote:
Im game!

I love your artistic nudes
this one is an eye catcher and your best

listed. she is amazing and you did a great job in capturing her lovely mood.
excellent work. You might want to work on other concepts as well.

varton wrote:

Love your glamour style shooting

Thanks very much for your thoughts, and my compliments as well on your uplifting thread.

Tyler Brad wrote:
Sure, i'd like to know

Hello Tyler,
this is the best listed, Keep it up, super style and awesome look.

Jessyka Ann Photography wrote:
me? ;D

Jessyka your vision of beauty is commendable although it might be seen as alt or marginally artistic and I am talking about body parts photography genre here.
In any case your style is bold and is the naked truth!
in your older work I love this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20056561 +18
I see very much myself taking a shot like this , you did it well but this style stockings are a bit boring.
no welts no glamour my dear
I wish this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22776726 +18  had a matching gorgeous head on it.
In addition to body art, I am sure you can add different genre photos to your port and that would be very beneficial.
You may work a bit more on your light schemes so that in your bw photos you can create additional suspens via high contrast highlights and shadows.
pm me when you add new images. Keep it up.
You are from Hyannis, I love there, and for sure,  there are excellent locations to shoot beautiful nudes.

HeartBreaker wrote:
You know you wanna

hi, you have some nice ink, and your port is of bold erotic style.
you have a lot to offer to alternative markets
As far as expression this is https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22567189 +18 my fav
this is probably your best pose and look
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22654752
you need to find a very good photographer to show better your features.

Ros Alainn Photography wrote:
just posted some new pictures. let me know

Hello Ros
Among the new pics you added this is an eye catcher but poorly cropped as it shows someone else in frame I doubt you wanted to show. Light in your beach shots in general are flat and there are no eye candy.
in this onethe light used (either reflected or artificial) looks random, and intended or not really is messing up otherwise gorgeous pose and legs.
here shoes are cropped and the reflection on left is no good.
My fav and your best are and other then some really nice landscapes.
I would suggest you work on your framing and lighting.

Magdalena Magi wrote:
Me please.

I like this a lot
you are very beautiful
here the photo quality is not earth shattering but love your doll look listed because of you. Love the styling shoes etc as well
no other photos impressed me
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21820736 shadows are bad on this
keep it up.