ChrisFischerPhotography wrote:
Me too, please.

OK I am returning from a short break
I like your bw photographs especially this one with a vintage feel. this is the best in bw
This collage is great but the stockings are too short for the model, other then that minor detail for most people you have the correct ideas for this military pinup. Gorgeous model btw.
your lighting is great in both indoors and outdoors.
you have some nice concepts and beautiful pics in your port.
the only one I did not care much was this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19699851 because of the cropping.

Overall very Nice job

Amanda Keys wrote:
wanna do me please?

Hello Amanda, you look gorgeous
hmm what I dislike first is this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21440765 because your flesh tones are atrocious poor dynamic range your right  leg is burned, left leg has blemishes that need to be retouched.
One of your best is this great bw and the pose really enhance your legs
few eye catchers https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23557487
and in this the pose really reveals your lovely curves, but your connection with camea is a bit meh
I love your pose here but your VS bra is very boring.
this is your best and listed
In general I find that you act as if you are unaware of your gorgeous assets when you are posing. Some guidance from a pro thog will definitely take you to another level.
Work on your poses and do not look like the girl next door in all your photos.

Keep clicking and update your port and remove redundant shots like
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 1#23557501
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 0#23557490
improve your wardrobe and looks
add some hair styles and dare to be SEXY.

Mike Chaiken wrote:
sure

well hello Mike
lovely port
and the first artsy eye catcher is this
on this and in general the light is a bit harsh in your indoor art shoots , hues are natural yellow and although nice I have seen frankly better ones.
Some great portraits and lighting like in those my fav
none of the suicide series turns me on, and one sample would have been good enough for me to have in the port because I like happy thoughts and dislike depressing photo themes.

Girl girl posing does not express emotions I am accustomed to see, and therefore those takes lack soul and feelings.

here is a suggested a remove list below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23894887 subject is centered and posing is hesitant/meh
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23561718 better suited for face book
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22972086 light is great but model look meh and her abdomen area is an eye sore. Apple appears to be as an after thought.

Currently nothing to list from your port.

Dimitrio wrote:
sure.

Well you are really taking advantage of your nice location in the Bahamas as witnessed here and here
When I critique photographers in general I care about know how, and that should be location or model independent.
You pull off great in outdoor shots and you should show your talent for indoor shots as well.
You would make a great calendar photographer but that pays really poorly.
this is your best and my fav but must have been at least 800x600 for me to list.
keep shooting, you are doing a great job.

LauraPhotos Chicago wrote:
Let me know

You have beautiful on location shots and an eye for  beauty excellent angle and charming picture
great tonal range on this but the face expression leaves to be desired.
It is really great to see how much you are in tune with models in general.
great collage and poses.
despite the tight cropping and washed colors I love this listed
Most of your photos have gorgeous dynamic range and saturated colors that makes them very appealing. You have style and talent. Keep clicking.
Beautiful port and great skills.

fine art nudes by paul wrote:
list away!

OK I love your port and your vision as far as art nudes.
Composing a fine art nude is not easy, and I know it is not my cup of tea.

And the only picture I fancy the most in your port is this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14772522  listed.
I like to see bold voluptuous expression in female form.
For me using the genre or word “fine” art to disguise the sexuality in female form is totally dishonest and almost a crime.
I observed great techniques and style in your work.
I hope you love to be stuck with this genre, because I don’t

J Paul Photographer wrote:
I would truly appreciate and absorb a review.  Thanks for doing this!

Your port may be small but you have some great shots, suggesting you know what you are doing
your studio lighting is good
this is your best listed
she looks stunned. but a great shot.
keep clicking, nice port

Diana Duong wrote:
Me... again.. I remember posting in a critique forum of yours before.  :3

Yes right but you did not bother  to check my master alphabetic index of reviews on the first page and first post in this thread.

So are you ready for your punishement?

https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15248217

varton wrote:
Overall very Nice job

Why thank you, sir!

Kathleen1113 wrote:
Damn, you are awesome! Care to comment? BTW I'm trying to decide on these:

This one has been up for a while:

well I took a quick look at your port but you have better pictures in your port.
The top one looks decent but I prefer to see bigger pictures if I want to hire a model. Bottom thumbs have been deleted, I guess you did not like either.
In your port only 1 picture excites me and would make me want to work with you and it is this one.

you can delete everything else pretty much