varton wrote:
You seem to be a very serious  "hobby" photographer.
I saw some very nice natural light captures but most appear as snapshots.
to make your work perceive as "art" several ingredients are missing.
No story, no visual impact, no emotional trigger to name a few.
my fav in the bunch is => 
she would make anyone look good.
In this she is awesome and a photo with a nice bouquet behind but I feel that she is wearing the wrong outfit to enhance her mischief.

Jeffry Pittman wrote:
I would appreciate your feedback. I also enjoyed reading the comments you left for others. Very thoughtful and I learned a lot. Cheers, Jeff

You're welcome. Unfortunately Past few months I didn't get a chance To continue This thread.
I will resume my reviews as soon as  possible.

Emilyjane  wrote:
New here, would love your opinion.  Thanks.

First impressions: It appears as if you worked with only one photographer
Your Skill level: beginner
Your creativity:  photographer driven
Specific  style: Fashion
Your Work focus: Commercial and fashion
Your challenges: The fashion gaze is OK but You can do better to emote in other genres
Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point and might get you hired
Paid assignments: Possible
Your money shot:
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Pass with flying colors
Do you make my list?: No

Isriah wrote:
Oh god...Be nice! Lol! <3

First impressions: A girl next door who can pull off number of niche markets without doing nudity.
Your Skill level: Enough to pull off from morbid dark to art, beauty ,glamor, pinups and more
Your creativity:  Photographer driven
Specific  style: A mishmash of everything in the domain of incertitude. Great fit for gothic and horror vampirella styles. Halloween shivers.
Your Work focus: Should be what you are comfy with because you do this I quote from profile as a hobby
Your challenges: you make sure photographer knows your best angles shooting portraits   <- best angle and great vintage pinup look
Your MM Profile usefulness: Very useful
Paid assignments: Yes
Your money shot: Cropped wrong but i like it
What I like: 
What to delete: 
  <-- expression is not quite there, a missed opportunity to shoot a beauty with the beast style or make this look more like humorous girly funny pinup
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Pass with flying colors, keep it up
Do you make my list?: No

Imaginem Productions wrote:
My body is ready! Let's see what you think.

First impressions: Facebook style home photography
Your Skill level: basic
Your creativity:  nothing suggest a calculated planned or scripted path from concept to execution
Specific  style: random
Your Work focus: I am not sure
Your challenges: Mostly technical, lacking technique and inspiration
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Paid assignments: no
Your money shot:
What I like:  motion picture style crops don't work well for photography
What to delete:    <-- I am not sure I understand the concept but if you didn't zoom this close the picture had a chance to show some drama.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Whatever makes you happy, style and inspirations can not be thought it is very individual. My perception is you are not working hard enough to improve in technical and conceptual levels.
Do you make my list?: No

Roselyn Catts wrote:
Do me, do me!

First impressions: Fine looking young lady
Your Skill level: Beginner
Your creativity:  The expression, camera connection positive energy projection are all  present
Specific  style: Any can work
Your Work focus: Probably no risque, commercial and catalog prints
Your challenges: Work on your expressions when doing nudes and boudoirs, some come out as more dopy or clueless gazes. Be assertive, back  it up with your body language.
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Paid assignments: Maybe for nudes
Your money shot: None, find better photographers.
What I like:    <-- tongue sticking out licking would be better then biting on it
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Shoot more to improve, work on your expressions
Do you make my list?: No

phantom of the light wrote:
I checked the directory and I'm not there, so if you're up to it, I would like your input.

First impressions: Some nice few photos but nothing will make me go back and look at it again
Your Skill level: hobbyist prosumer
Your creativity:  still soul searching
Specific  style: exploratory artistic
Your Work focus: Nude art ,environmental and fantasy portraiture with some shortfalls
Your challenges: Technical and conceptual, framing , lighting
Your MM Profile usefulness: After reading it we expect more from you
Paid assignments: no
Your money shot: nice character shot
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Your work is mostly model driven, take charge of your concepts, and improve model posing and work better emotional projections from your subjects.
Do you make my list?: No

Unseelie Allure wrote:
I recently completely purged my ENTIRE portfolio. Just trashed everything that was in there and put brand new imgs up. Id love the feedback!

First impressions: I agree Arch Mage of the Kinky,nerdy & otherwiseglamourous fashion photography
Your Skill level: Advanced to awesome
Your creativity:  Amazing, from concepts to executions
Specific  style: highly stylized fantasy fashion, glamour & beauty - uper jobS
Your Work focus: fantasy beauty sexy
Your challenges: Not to run out of ideas and styles.
Your MM Profile usefulness: Very useful
Paid assignments: Hell Yes
Your money shot: listed
What I like:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39412971 +18 ( BUT avoid into falling to "cheap" in bottom frame)
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: on some work photo shop is too obvious and intense in color saturation, sometime less is more. Passed with flying colors.
Do you make my list?: yes

KP Buczkowski wrote:
I'm new and don't have much but always looking for critique/insight and direction..... Me Please!

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First impressions: Lovely look, freckles and dimples, weak port, same looks, no variety in styles and poses
Your Skill level: absolute beginner
Your creativity:  photographer inspired
Specific  style: still searching
Your Work focus: should be commercials print catalog
Your challenges: standard model expressions lack
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Paid assignments: yes
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Work on your poses, focus on clothing catalog modeling find a good photographer well versed in fashion shoots
Do you make my list?: Nope

SHIRA wrote:
If you would be so kind.

First impressions: Top notch Port, that will get you hired
Your Skill level: Advanced
Your creativity:  Self + team player
Specific  style: Fashion, urban high , commercial , print
Your Work focus: Mostly fashion
Your challenges: Think out of the box
Your MM Profile usefulness: Useful and at times intimidating
Paid assignments: Yes
Your money shot:
What I like: 
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Keep it up, great potential and value in your work
Do you make my list?: This, if it wasn't cropped at the shoe
listed

Aseeyah Sun wrote:

First impressions: jack of all trades with emphasis on Erotic Modeling, nothing grabs me.
Your Skill level: over all experienced
Your creativity:  photographer driven
Specific  style: erotic
Your Work focus: beauty boudoir with missing soul
Your challenges: I have the impression it is hard keeping it classy
Your MM Profile usefulness: useful
Paid assignments: yes
What I like:  Nothing there that fits my vision
What to delete:  There are some bad and unflattering shots
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict:   You probably do well in niche adult markets, provided that in this competitive market segment quality work of great photographers are still needed.
Do you make my list?: No

M59 Photography wrote:
Just checked the list and I'm not on there. Please have a go.
Thanks!

First impressions: In my lifetime I have seen so many boobs that "boob art" no longer impresses me. I am painfully looking your port so I can find something else to talk about and bring you an unbiased photographer's view regardless of content and hopefully some food for thought you might find useful.
Your Skill level: Advanced technically, great control on natural and artificial light
Your creativity:  What they show you
Specific  style: Boobs
Your Work focus: Boobs erotic
Your challenges: limited shoot angles and range
Your MM Profile usefulness: Everyone gets the idea.
Paid assignments:   maybe
Your money shot: It was too long to look in 246 pictures
What I don't like:  adding fake noise via photo shop.
In 246 pics I like only this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23283633 +18
In color nudes, use of random color wigs on models look cheap.
Bathroom beauty nudes look tacky, I see some great poses on girl girl shoots https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 1838_m.jpg  +18 but they fall short on emotion
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Nudes on seamless are so boring, how many of those we need to shoot really, for art nudes use natural outdoor locations, make the girl a part of the nature, which she really is.
Do you make my list?: no

Matt like a Photo-Mat wrote:
I would love to be included

First impressions: I like your light plays as a great eye candy
Your Skill level: Advanced
Specific  style: Great fit for high Fashion
Your Work focus: Fashion high end
Your MM Profile usefulness: Very useful
Paid assignments: yes
What I like:  https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/39629529
I never liked low key work , I highly tolerate yours though
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You are very good and know what you are doing.
Do you make my list?: no

CambriaPlusModel wrote:
Would love your feedback

First impressions: Appear to be very serious in modeling and you will do fine
Your Skill level: Above average
Your creativity:  team player
Specific  style: fashion and also a good fit for pinups although you are not exploring that genre
Your Work focus: Plus size fashion
Your MM Profile usefulness: Very useful
Paid assignments: Yes
Your money shot:
What to delete:  You have multiple pics of that white dress, that makes you bigger then you are. Stick with dark colors and avoid patterns on fabrics.
Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You can do well in commercial plus size catalog work but need to find connections
Do you make my list?: no