Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

Pink_caz

Posts: 126

Daventry, England, United Kingdom

how bout a newbie like me?? tongue lol

Aug 23 11 11:03 am Link

Photographer

The House of Velvet

Posts: 1429

Cumming, Georgia, US

How about me?

Aug 23 11 11:04 am Link

Photographer

Terrell Gates

Posts: 1042

Santa Fe, New Mexico, US

Would you work with me?

Aug 23 11 11:05 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Alabaster True wrote:
Curious smile

Possibly. I like the mirror effect and that you can see the model so clearly in the mirror. Also like the styling, makeup and color scheme. The pose is quite sexy as well. Dislike: Model's expression- she looks a bit bored.

Aug 23 11 11:18 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

NickBernstein wrote:
I'd love feedback

Yes. Beautiful and smooth head shot of model- love the model's understated but lovely makeup and her expression. And she has wonderful featured- You've captured this well.

Aug 23 11 11:33 am Link

Photographer

Carleton Rainey

Posts: 191

Dayton, Ohio, US

how about me??

Aug 23 11 11:35 am Link

Model

BP Taylor

Posts: 5

Santa Monica, California, US

This game sounds fun. smile

Aug 23 11 11:40 am Link

Photographer

NickBernstein

Posts: 16

Los Angeles, California, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. Beautiful and smooth head shot of model- love the model's understated but lovely makeup and her expression. And she has wonderful featured- You've captured this well.

Thanks!

Aug 23 11 12:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Angels Syn photography wrote:
Shoot!

No. In the small view, it's tough to make out the details of the shot. I like the green nature-y background path and while the hand holding is cute... really would like to see the model's better and seems umbrellas aren't really needed- Doesn't look like it's actually raining.

Aug 23 11 12:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Teri Joy Photography wrote:
Love your comments...

Yes. Hm, normally I dislike back shots. I also dislike that the white dress is soo long but I do like the model's pose and her back does look lovely. I like that I can see the happy expression she has, and the background is beautiful- love the color of the sky and that the model is on a balcony (great location) overlooking the city.

Also nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110821/16/4e51945362327_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110821/15/4e51831423bc4_m.jpg

Aug 23 11 12:52 pm Link

Photographer

Angels Deadly Syn

Posts: 311

Irvington, New Jersey, US

winking_wonder wrote:
No. In the small view, it's tough to make out the details of the shot. I like the green nature-y background path and while the hand holding is cute... really would like to see the model's better and seems umbrellas aren't really needed- Doesn't look like it's actually raining.

thanks actually it was raining and it was engagement shots the female model wanted umbrellas in it but thanks

Aug 23 11 01:01 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Pink_caz wrote:
how bout a newbie like me?? tongue lol

No. The dress is okay but your pose is uninteresting, and I don't like the front arm- It looks bigger than it is and very blurry. Also your expression isn't that great- looks a little forced, especially around the lips/eyes.

Aug 23 11 01:11 pm Link

Model

Sarah_

Posts: 1487

Los Angeles, California, US

Would you?

Aug 23 11 01:12 pm Link

Photographer

Steven David

Posts: 7381

Houston, Texas, US

Me???

Aug 23 11 01:15 pm Link

Photographer

Pics

Posts: 649

Salisbury, Maryland, US

Shoot?

Aug 23 11 01:15 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

The House of Velvet wrote:
How about me?

Yes. Pretty good photo - Great styling and interesting theme. I like how you've captured the model it's a perfect cut off for 3/4 shot.

I love these:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110224/17/4d6707d37fd3b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100914/10/4c8fb7146b0c3_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110808/10/4e40172de605b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110802/16/4e388ed71dba3_m.jpg

Aug 23 11 01:31 pm Link

Model

Sam Schmiedeskamp

Posts: 8

Portland, Oregon, US

I'd love to hear the answer to this. smile

Aug 23 11 01:36 pm Link

Photographer

Aatoli Joseph

Posts: 4

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Me, Me , Me!!! I am in search of external validation.

Aug 23 11 01:37 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Terrell Gates wrote:
Would you work with me?

No. I like the model's eyes, but his expression looks surprised which doesn't go with the image and one of his arms looks disfigured. Also, I dislike the plain black background (not interesting) and the shadowy lighting on the model's body.

I like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090810/08/4a8042fc72537_m.jpg

And you have some nice nudes.

Aug 23 11 01:40 pm Link

Model

Michaela Crossy

Posts: 61

Wayne, New Jersey, US

Curious. Please let me know what you think smile

Aug 23 11 01:42 pm Link

Photographer

INKEDividuals

Posts: 4023

Seattle, Washington, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Definitely an interesting photo- I kind of like the dark background with model's back turned. Like the capture of muscles and tattoo, black leather pants, plus the red string adds a pop of color (also like the red Chinese character) - Creates an overall mood that I find intriguing. I would say probably.

I really like:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24366772 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23795355 18+

Thanks.  BTW, my avatar is a self portrait

Aug 23 11 03:51 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Carleton Rainey wrote:
how about me??

Yes. Lovely choice of model and like the lighting, as well as the black and white. I also love the windswept blown hair look - And it looks very natural. Great capture!

Also lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100816/04/4c69254ae2d78_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090919/05/4ab4cc9a0e4b0_m.jpg

Aug 23 11 04:53 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

BP Taylor wrote:
This game sounds fun. smile

Yes. Great photo- almost looks like it could be an ad. I like your pose a lot, as well as intense expression/gaze. Lovely eyes, and of course, physique- Nice showcase of muscles.

Also like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110721/23/4e291c8ba9d28_m.jpg

Aug 23 11 04:56 pm Link

Photographer

CandiceCampbellPhotog

Posts: 1302

Newcastle, New South Wales, Australia

please do tell :-) i'm a little curious

Aug 23 11 05:20 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Sarah_ wrote:
Would you?

Absolutely! I loove the pose- somehow you've made it look graceful and elegant and the movement of the dress is lovely. Also love the dress itself and the overall styling. And you have beautiful features with smooth, clear skin.

Also like:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110204/22/4d4ce9ed6721a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/090513/11/4a0b150fd69b4_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101219/19/4d0ecb44bb05b_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110205/09/4d4d83b2547cf_m.jpg

Aug 23 11 05:34 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Steven David wrote:
Me???

No. I don't like the black and white- looks extreme and not fond of the octopus wrapped around the model. Also dislike the model's look, though the expression is interesting.

Aug 23 11 05:37 pm Link

Model

Samanthax

Posts: 51

Ashton-in-Makerfield, England, United Kingdom

smile

Aug 23 11 05:55 pm Link

Photographer

Spider_Photos

Posts: 61

Oakland, California, US

I'm curiouse??

Aug 23 11 06:00 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Gpro wrote:
Shoot?

No. I think the angle is not too flattering- model's head and arms/upper body looks larger. Also, not too keen on model choice, expression and different colors of skin. Also, the bikini pieces are not matching in color..

I like these better (any of these and I would've said yes):
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110509/18/4dc89a56e1b7a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110620/13/4dffae0a8d3be_m.jpg

Aug 23 11 06:25 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Sam Schmiedeskamp wrote:
I'd love to hear the answer to this. smile

Yes. Though young, you have a fresh natural look and I really like that. Beautiful facial features, especially eyes and lips. Also great styling- Like your dress matched with the background color. And the jewelry works well with the outfit/image.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110823/13/4e540cd57751e_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110823/13/4e540d042e58d_m.jpg

Aug 23 11 06:29 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Aatoli Joseph wrote:
Me, Me , Me!!! I am in search of external validation.

I would say probably not. Just not really my style and I'm not impressed by the boobage though I do like the light, fire shards coming from the tool.

What I liked better:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110221/20/4d633f06a83af_m.jpg

Aug 23 11 06:48 pm Link

Photographer

Fred Blood Photography

Posts: 156

Riverside, California, US

Interested to know

Aug 23 11 06:57 pm Link

Makeup Artist

On Call Artistry

Posts: 67

Columbus, Ohio, US

Would love to know!

Aug 23 11 07:22 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

michaela crossy wrote:
Curious. Please let me know what you think smile

I think so. You have a great, sexy look. I love your outfit - it fits you very well and the pose is decent. Also like the green/walled background. Not a fan of your expression or shoes- the shoes seem too goody-goody and not high heeled enough.

I liked:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110713/13/4e1e017a154f9_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110625/00/4e0587f06af3a_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110608/07/4def865994d08_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110608/11/4defbc0d0f57a_m.jpg

Aug 23 11 07:48 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

CandiceCampbellPhotog  wrote:
please do tell :-) i'm a little curious

I did get to you here: https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st15901575

Aug 23 11 07:51 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Samantha Sudworth wrote:
smile

Possibly. Though I don't like the way your arms are placed, you have a great body shape and lovely facial look. The pose is decent, as well as the outfit though would work on expression.

Aug 23 11 09:58 pm Link

Photographer

Image Works Photography

Posts: 2890

Orlando, Florida, US

Cool, here

Aug 23 11 10:05 pm Link

Model

Tiare Niles

Posts: 79

Honolulu, Hawaii, US

would you work with me??? smile

Aug 23 11 10:18 pm Link

Model

RoseMour16

Posts: 28

Owego, New York, US

:3

Aug 23 11 10:21 pm Link

Photographer

DioBurto Photography

Posts: 14

Miami, Florida, US

what about me?

Aug 23 11 10:24 pm Link