Got some more images back from working with Billy Monday #7980. I was wondering if I should add any. I already have a couple, but I am actually quite fond of these as well. Let me know what you think, I will give your port a glance and comment on my favorite image. http://imgur.com/R9fbT 18+ http://imgur.com/plalN 18+ http://imgur.com/jDZi3 18+ Nov 04 12 06:03 am Link I prefer #1.. Love the colors and your figure in with all the natural features.. Not keen on #2 and #3.. #2 your thigh looks distorted where you are against the rock.. #3 the pose looks 'stiff' and un natural Nov 04 12 06:26 am Link The first shot is the best one. The colors and the mystical nature of the water work great with your pose. It is really beautiful. I would like the third one more if your shoulders were slightly down and your hair was not covering your neck - other then that they are really well done. Nov 04 12 06:29 am Link #1 is your best shot. As much as I love B&W I think your pose just misses it, perhaps your shoulders as someone else said Keep up the good work, you look is evolving and you are going some great work. Nov 04 12 06:31 am Link 1st one please:) Nov 04 12 06:47 am Link I am liking #1 and #2... Add both! Nov 04 12 06:48 am Link #1 Nov 04 12 07:01 am Link #1 Nov 04 12 07:10 am Link The first is best and most interesting. Love the movement and the fact that the models nudity is not "in your face", but rather arty and appealing. No 2 does not have the same punch, No 3 (sorry) the model looks as is she is freezing. Nov 04 12 07:18 am Link They are all nice but number one is the best by far Nov 04 12 07:30 am Link I like #1 first, #2 second !! Nov 04 12 07:37 am Link Yes to 1 Nov 04 12 07:40 am Link #1 absolutely Nov 04 12 07:44 am Link Seems MM has spoken ..and one more vote for #1 Nov 04 12 08:04 am Link seems you've already decided on #1 but it gets my vote also. Nov 04 12 08:06 am Link #1 Nov 04 12 08:07 am Link I like #1 the best. Very nicely done! Nov 04 12 08:18 am Link I freaking love number 1!!! Nov 04 12 08:27 am Link OK, I'm going against the grain here, not because it is my nature, (which it is), but because #1 displays one of my pet peeves - running water that is blurred because of a slow shutter speed. I also think the colors are a bit too saturated and unnatural, and the composition is not to my liking, (I haven't exactly figured that one out yet). I favor #2. I like the position of the subject crossing what would otherwise be a boring, horizontal composition. I also like the light on the subject, just the right amount, in my opinion. -Don Nov 04 12 08:28 am Link I really love #1, and I really like #3. So I would add both! Great job, nicely done, kudos to all involved! Wished you lived closer, I have been dying to paint an outdoor nude, either in a stream or in a pond! Nov 04 12 08:29 am Link #1 and #3 Nov 04 12 08:30 am Link Personally, I think #2 is over-processed and not flattering to your hips. #3 is also not a flattering pose. And while #1 is the most sound image overall, it's more about the technique of the photographer than it is any representation of you as a model. We see the slow shutter speed technique on the water and highly saturated colors and it would make a good image for a photographer's portfolio. But it isn't an upgrade to a model's portfolio where the images should be about you. So, for different reasons, I wouldn't add any of them. Nov 04 12 08:41 am Link Number 1. Much more vibrant. More art than the other two. Thanks for sharing. Nov 04 12 08:43 am Link Michael Pandolfo wrote: +1 Nov 04 12 08:52 am Link # 1 for sure. Nov 04 12 08:58 am Link toesup wrote: +1 Nov 04 12 08:58 am Link I prefer #1 as well, but I would consider cropping a bit off the top and maybe a bit of the right side too. Nov 04 12 09:19 am Link 1 or 2.. both are very nicely done. Nov 04 12 11:31 am Link Don Garrett wrote: I have to agree with Don,,, and blows my mind why so many photographers voted 1. Nov 04 12 12:25 pm Link I'd choose number 1. You are sort of blending with the leaves on the rock. The pose is lovely and sweet. Nov 04 12 12:35 pm Link Yes. #1 is definitely the most interesting and balanced. Thanks for sharing. Nov 04 12 12:37 pm Link I agree with the masses 1 Nov 04 12 12:53 pm Link The first photo is OK- but wouldn;t use it as an avatar 2nd photo- dont like how your right leg looks and the exposure is off 3rd odd pose looks like you aren't relaxed- shoulders hunched Nov 04 12 07:48 pm Link Thank you all for the feedback. I really appreciate your time, and the thought you put into your replies. I chose to put the first image into my portfolio. Some have replied that the image is not beneficial for me because it does not show me off as a model. I am an art model, so this does not concern me. I am in it for the art, and occasionally make good money posing nude. I won't be successful in any other genre due to my stats and look. Bill and I collaborated and made artwork that I am very, very happy with, not just meaningless images that "show me off" as a model. It is in no way his fault for not making me the "main subject", or "showing me of", this was a mutual agreement to create wonderful artwork. Sometimes MM really confuses and disappoints me. Isn't a model there to help complete the image, bring it together, and make it work? I don't see why I shouldn't use an image that would be beneficial to a photographers portfolio as well? Wouldn't that show that I work and take direction well, and can mold into what the photographer has in mind? Sorry for the rant, but I felt the need to get this out of the way and feel better for getting it out. Nov 04 12 09:23 pm Link Merry Jane wrote: +1 Nov 04 12 09:40 pm Link I really like #1 Nov 04 12 09:42 pm Link Merry Jane wrote: If you both are happy with the work then I am happy for you,,, you aked if you should add these I was just giving my 2 cents,,, that's all. As for the benefical??? You are the model trying to work so you need images that show you as a model,,, to inspire more and other photographer to use you not someone else. It is like sending your model friend's port to a job you want...We don't go to Moxie's and ordering a Big Mac, kinda thing. Why can't the photographer use an image that benefits you and him in, his or her port. Makes a win win that's all I was saying. Nov 05 12 04:51 pm Link toesup wrote: Same here. Nov 05 12 04:57 pm Link toesup wrote: pretty much my thoughts but I like 3 too Nov 05 12 04:59 pm Link +1 for #1 Nov 05 12 05:03 pm Link |