Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Just had shoulder surgery this morning. Meaning I am bored. I will critique you based on items you pick below.
Salty Spitoon Critique- I'll be rough and tough. I'll give you a bad critique. Ill give you a bad critique on top of a bad critique.
Weenie hut critique- This is a nice critique that will be helpful. Some good, some bad, weenie.
Weenie Hut Jr Critique- Ill just tell you the pictures I like, and enough nice brown nosing I can stomach.
...or otherwise state a critique/question you want. Would I work with you? What industry you should do? ETC.
GO now!
Model
Nicole Nu
Posts: 3981
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
The Salty Spitoon Critique sounds delicious 
Photographer
Steve Wall
Posts: 644
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia
Hi Samantha, could you let me know what impression you get from my profile text & photos? How do I come across? Who do you think I should be pitching to for paid work? Likewise for trade?
hard to get any distance on your own work when you're looking at it all the time
...steve
Photographer
Art Silva
Posts: 10064
Santa Barbara, California, US
It's been a long tiring day so I'll go for the Weenie Hut critique... Hope you have a speedy recovery 
Model
julia00
Posts: 57
Rochester, New York, US
wishing you a fast recovery, please feel free to critique however you feel like!
Photographer
juliarabkin
Posts: 782
Rochester, New York, US
oh and this account as well thank you xo
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 4005
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Weenie hut critique- This is a nice critique that will be helpful. Some good, some bad, weenie. If its not pushing the friendship too much, which field can you see me entering... If any lol Thank you, I hope you feel better soon, shoulders are tricky things.
Photographer
Joseph William
Posts: 2039
Chicago, Illinois, US
Can I get a salty spittoon, but with a couple sprinkles of weenie to help the medicine go down?
Photographer
JAE
Posts: 2207
West Chester, Pennsylvania, US
I am in the mood for a Weenie hut critique
Model
Boston Artist Model
Posts: 1159
Boston, Massachusetts, US
I'll be brave and go with Salty Spitoon Critique please
Photographer
Fotografica Gregor
Posts: 4126
Alexandria, Virginia, US
I wish you thorough healing and recovery
meanwhile give me whatever makes you happy by way of critique
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1786
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada
I'll take the salty one please! Hope you have a speedy recovery!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
NicoleNudes wrote:
The Salty Spitoon Critique sounds delicious You wanted salty...
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28829660
Why is this image here? Your port has such good imagOtes, then this, where a table crops off your foot, you're centered, and the giant flare from the wood paneling loses the image. Plus the fireplace should be on! Maybe I'm crazy because it's so listed, but to me there's others, yes, even the beardy one, that deserve that attention more so.
Otherwise that's all I got. Your port is salty and rough enough for the salty spitoon. You may enter.
Photographer
Bernadette Newberry
Posts: 156
Cincinnati, Ohio, US
Weenie Hut for me, please! Haha.
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Steve Wall wrote:
Hi Samantha, could you let me know what impression you get from my profile text & photos? How do I come across? Who do you think I should be pitching to for paid work? Likewise for trade?
hard to get any distance on your own work when you're looking at it all the time
...steve Profile text is professional, yet relaxed. I like that you have an open mind on TF. I like that you listed rates in your portfolio. While some don't, as a model it can save some of us who don't have that money some time. Rates aren't bad either honestly. But as for the rates, keep them consistent with your website, or make a reason for the discount on your page.
Also, I don't like how so many photos are in your profile. My computer is a garbage machine, and many others are like me, and it will slow down loading of your page, and could lose potential clients. I'd cut it down. Plus its too much scrolling!
As for your photos, you are good enough to where I'd pay your rates. I think your best work is your editorial work, and that story telling ability could help. On Modelmayhem pitching to models is smart, but also consider pitching to make up artists/hair stylists, and designers. Never limit rates to just one party.
Model
Maria Susanti
Posts: 546
Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia
Weenie hut critique pleasee
Model
Nicole Nu
Posts: 3981
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
Samantha Emme wrote:
You wanted salty...
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28829660
Why is this image here? Your port has such good imagOtes, then this, where a table crops off your foot, you're centered, and the giant flare from the wood paneling loses the image. Plus the fireplace should be on! Maybe I'm crazy because it's so listed, but to me there's others, yes, even the beardy one, that deserve that attention more so.
Otherwise that's all I got. Your port is salty and rough enough for the salty spitoon. You may enter. Thanks! And I totally agree with you.
It's still up because I'm working on getting more glamour nude images before I can replace it with something else.
Model
Lela Jesse
Posts: 1148
Shasta Lake, California, US
I'll take salty spittoon Critique please!
( By the way, I love love love that you are doing Spongebob based critiques! "I slipped on an ice cube and got covered in boo boo's! " "Boo boo's eh? I think you want that hospital!")
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 3716
San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico
Model
Dominique Banner
Posts: 58
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
Weenie hut. New model so need something nice for a change
Model
Cole Morrison
Posts: 3958
Portland, Oregon, US
I need a Salty Spitoon Critique to go please.
Photographer
Art of the nude
Posts: 12067
Grand Rapids, Michigan, US
Samantha Emme wrote:
Just had shoulder surgery this morning. Meaning I am bored. I will critique you based on items you pick below.
Salty Spitoon Critique- I'll be rough and tough. I'll give you a bad critique. Ill give you a bad critique on top of a bad critique.
Weenie hut critique- This is a nice critique that will be helpful. Some good, some bad, weenie.
Weenie Hut Jr Critique- Ill just tell you the pictures I like, and enough nice brown nosing I can stomach.
...or otherwise state a critique/question you want. Would I work with you? What industry you should do? ETC.
GO now! Whatever you feel like.
Model
Miluna V
Posts: 14
Dayton, Ohio, US
Weenie hut critique, Plus what industry?
Photographer
Folly Photographe
Posts: 61
Montreal, Quebec, Canada
I already critique your port saying what was your best and worst on an other thread. Go as you feel, don't be afraid to hurt of to be kind, I can manage both.
Model
Miluna V
Posts: 14
Dayton, Ohio, US
Mistake Please delete this post
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 866
Florence, Toscana, Italy
Weenie hut wiil be great, I need to know my flawless, but what work too!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
Alixx Rose
Posts: 225
Atlanta, Georgia, US
Salty spitoon! Gimme your meanest..
well don't TRY to hurt my feelings..
=]
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
New Image Creations wrote:
Pass the salt!! Salt it is.
Your beauty album frustrates me. SO much potential. Such good make up work. And then there's no playup of the eyes, and the lighting is flat. Also no more cropping off tops of heads! ADD some drama! Its like almost there too.
but with that said, your nude album was lovely. bring everything else to that standard
Model
Vivant
Posts: 14
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Me, please! Whatever you're in the mood for!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
julia00 wrote:
wishing you a fast recovery, please feel free to critique however you feel like! Thank you!
You have a very lovely face and great eyes.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31401084
this picture needs to be uploaded a better quality. same with the others like this.
I'd love to see some high end beauty shots from you. Maybe with some bold red lipstick.
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 1017
Salt Lake City, Utah, US
Salty, spitoon sounds about right...
Model
julia00
Posts: 57
Rochester, New York, US
Samantha Emme wrote:
Thank you!
You have a very lovely face and great eyes.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31401084
this picture needs to be uploaded a better quality. same with the others like this.
I'd love to see some high end beauty shots from you. Maybe with some bold red lipstick. thank you!
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Model
Kess M
Posts: 8464
Brooklyn, New York, US
salty! 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1724
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Rik Image wrote:
Weenie hut critique- This is a nice critique that will be helpful. Some good, some bad, weenie.
If its not pushing the friendship too much, which field can you see me entering... If any lol
Thank you, I hope you feel better soon, shoulders are tricky things. Thank you!
Alright, Weenie hut it is.
Overall your port is very strong. I see good consistent lighting, good crops, good angles. It definitely shows you have a strong talent for this. I believe you could do well in multiple genres. You could do fashion or art nudes, or switch to a sole classy glamour, and be successful.
I can't say too much in the ways of bad, but delete these two shots:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30139540 (18+)
Because it just isn't as strong and seems a port filler.
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … aa45f2.jpg
I remember someone else mentioning the nose being washed out. I agree with it.
Model
narie
Posts: 102
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia
Weenie hut critique~
2months on MM...that being said... I have multiple images from the same shoot up right now because I can't tell which is the best, but I'd like to round it down to 1 pic per shoot... well I struggle to look at myself objectively, so feel free to axe most of my portfolio
Model
Evie Wolfe
Posts: 1201
Nottingham, England, United Kingdom
If you have the time and inclination, I would appreciate a salty critique I hope you recover soon, having had issues with a shoulder myself I know how frustrating it can be! I really hope you aren't in too much pain xx
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