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Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Miss Bond wrote:
oki:)

smile

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You are beautiful and we love your look. Your port is not bad. We look at you as a commercial/beauty/catalog model. We feel that a little improvement in your portfolio would go a long way....smile

Jan 18 14 07:42 pm Link

Model

Moira Zhou

Posts: 380

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

sure, I'll bite

Jan 19 14 01:46 am Link

Model

Toxxsynn

Posts: 23

Yonkers, New York, US

Definitely curious..

Jan 19 14 06:45 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Carmen Zhou wrote:
sure, I'll bite

smile

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In our opinion, the first thing you have to do is change your Avi. It does not do you justice. We also feel that your port is all over the place, which is not necessarily bad. But there are some photos in your port that just don't make sense to us.

Jan 19 14 07:23 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Well, We just finished watching the niners loose to Seattle!!! That sucks. The only good thing was all the beer!!!

We are still looking for the perfect "10". I know you are out there.....

Jan 19 14 07:27 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Toxxsynn wrote:
Definitely curious..

smile

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Your portfolio does not match what we see in you as a model and your potential. smile

Jan 19 14 07:32 pm Link

Model

Veronika Vitkina

Posts: 257

Brooklyn, New York, US

RenatoJr - RJ wrote:
smile

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With you height and your stats, I think we expected your port to be much more high fashion then it is. The composite image you have is really nice, but we feel that some of those images in your port as a single image would really improve your port.

I personally love your look(Renato)

Thanks for the feedback smile I considered using a runway photo for my portfolio but was discouraged to do so by various suggestions. Is there one in particular that you feel would make a difference?

Jan 19 14 07:44 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Veronika Vitkina  wrote:

Thanks for the feedback smile I considered using a runway photo for my portfolio but was discouraged to do so by various suggestions. Is there one in particular that you feel would make a difference?

Our favorites are either the first one, or the one in the bottom right...smile

Jan 19 14 08:08 pm Link

Model

Pauline Yee

Posts: 406

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

I hope you are very drunk as I am very new to the modelling game and have a somewhat limited portfolio. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated

Jan 19 14 09:42 pm Link

Photographer

Evergreen Photography

Posts: 26

Tacoma, Washington, US

Ooo, me too, hoping for lots of beer goggling, but still, please let me know what you think.

Jan 19 14 10:08 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Pauline Yee wrote:
I hope you are very drunk as I am very new to the modelling game and have a somewhat limited portfolio. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated

smile

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Keep shooting!!!!!

Jan 19 14 10:33 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Evergreen  Photography wrote:
Ooo, me too, hoping for lots of beer goggling, but still, please let me know what you think.

wink

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Except for Paul who seems to be drunker(is this a word?) then the rest of us and you put together, Both Stevie and I can still tell the difference between a model and a photographer! smile All Paul saw was the pictures of the girls in your port or maybe was your Avi that made him give you the 10!!!!! Keep drinking!!!!!

Jan 19 14 10:41 pm Link

Model

Pauline Yee

Posts: 406

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Thanks for looking at my photos! Any other specific feedback?

Jan 19 14 11:13 pm Link

Model

Beck-ray

Posts: 7

Great Bend, Kansas, US

I'm game down for fun things!!

Jan 19 14 11:17 pm Link

Model

Katie Mundinger

Posts: 121

Grand Rapids, Michigan, US

I'm in smile

Jan 19 14 11:20 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Pauline Yee wrote:
Thanks for looking at my photos! Any other specific feedback?

We like your look. We feel that your port is a little below par for what we feel you can do with the right photographer. There are some photos in your port that just don't do you justice. For example the last image on the top row. But you are new, and as you improve and work with experienced photographers that also can help you with posing, your port will improve dramatically.

Jan 19 14 11:20 pm Link

Model

Pauline Yee

Posts: 406

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Thanks guys!

Jan 19 14 11:25 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Beck-ray wrote:
I'm game down for fun things!!

smile

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After reading your port, I(Renato) expected to see some pinup work! Although you have some nice images in your port, we feel they just does not stand out! And why do you have the same picture twice in your port?

P.S. At first I thought it was just me and I had too much to drink and was seeing double!

Jan 19 14 11:45 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Katie Mundinger wrote:
I'm in smile

smile

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I think our rating says it all. smile

Jan 20 14 12:03 am Link

Model

Katie Mundinger

Posts: 121

Grand Rapids, Michigan, US

RenatoJr - RJ wrote:

smile

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Placeholder: We are not skipping or forgetting you! You are just having a long discussion.

Uh oh!

Jan 20 14 12:16 am Link

Model

Celine Sophia

Posts: 503

Santa Barbara, California, US

Me?

Jan 20 14 12:42 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Celine Sophia wrote:
Me?

smile

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Love your very unique look. Also I(Renato) love Flamenco dancing!!!

Jan 20 14 12:48 am Link

Model

Katie Mundinger

Posts: 121

Grand Rapids, Michigan, US

RenatoJr - RJ wrote:

smile

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I think our rating says it all. smile

Whoa.. thank you so much!

Jan 20 14 11:24 am Link

Model

Sogi the Model

Posts: 569

San Diego, California, US

If you're still drinking, I think you guys should call AA.

But before you do that, please critique me big_smile

Jan 20 14 03:17 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Sogi the Model wrote:
If you're still drinking, I think you guys should call AA.

But before you do that, please critique me big_smile

We do take breaks from drinking. It's not continuous. At least not yet! Yesterday was probably our biggest drinking day. First we were drinking watching the 49ers, then to forget the 49ers! we did try to call AA, but we so out of it that we called AAA. But now to the task at hand!
smile

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Jan 20 14 05:37 pm Link

Model

Ann77

Posts: 175

Atlanta, Georgia, US

Me!  smile

Jan 21 14 02:21 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Ann77 wrote:
Me!  smile

https://renatojr.com/number10.jpg

Jan 21 14 08:37 pm Link

Model

Ann77

Posts: 175

Atlanta, Georgia, US

RenatoJr - RJ wrote:

https://renatojr.com/number10.jpg

Haha!  Thank you so much!!  (How many beers have you had now?!!)  wink

Jan 22 14 02:24 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Ann77 wrote:

Haha!  Thank you so much!!  (How many beers have you had now?!!)  wink

Actually when we did yours was the only time we were not drinking! smile
You have a great look, and great port, and a beautiful model.

Jan 22 14 06:09 pm Link

Model

Pauline Yee

Posts: 406

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

Now that you have reached the perfect 10. Will you continue to rate models and their portfolios?

          Pauline

Jan 22 14 09:28 pm Link

Model

Sarah Saturn

Posts: 38

Fayetteville, Georgia, US

I'd like to play!smile

Jan 22 14 09:36 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Pauline Yee wrote:
Now that you have reached the perfect 10. Will you continue to rate models and their portfolios?

          Pauline

Of course. If people ask we are more then happy to give our opinions.

Jan 22 14 09:38 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Sarah Stone wrote:
I'd like to play!smile

smile

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With lots of potential!!!!!

Jan 23 14 07:01 pm Link

Model

Marla Pandora

Posts: 2815

Glasgow, Scotland, United Kingdom

Go ahead!
https://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-eatdrink004.gif

Jan 24 14 01:02 am Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

Still going?

Jan 24 14 01:09 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

We are still going with this. We will not be doing any tonight as both Stevie and Paul are not here tonight.
We will be working together tomorrow, and will catch up.
So, Keep it going!!!!

Jan 24 14 01:30 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Extremely long day today! But here we go!!!! smile

Jan 24 14 10:33 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Marlene Potfer wrote:
Go ahead!
https://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-eatdrink004.gif

smile

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Jan 24 14 10:36 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Danielle Reid wrote:
Still going?

smile


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Jan 24 14 10:40 pm Link

Model

D A N I

Posts: 4627

Little Rock, Arkansas, US

RenatoJr - RJ wrote:

smile


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Well that put the last nail in the coffin hmm

Jan 24 14 10:41 pm Link