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Model

Stephanie Ezekiel

Posts: 53

Miami Beach, Florida, US

Me please smile

Jan 03 15 09:10 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Tanja Van Deer wrote:
Do me!

smile

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Avg:           6.3                         5.3

We love your look. We do feel that your portfolio could be improved with some great glamour,editorial and artistic images.
With that said, we really enjoyed looking at the image on your portfolio. One of the few portfolios on MM that just looking at it gives the viewer a little clue of who you are. We like it...smile

Jan 03 15 09:17 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Whitley Thompson wrote:
If you're still up? I've just started modeling - would love to know your thoughts! Thanks!!

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Two words: Portfolio Development.
We see the possibilities, and we understand that you are new, so you need to dedicate your efforts to working with good photographers that will help you develop your portfolio. Your portfolio should include images in the genres that you are interested in doing.
Be like Nike! "Just do it!"

Jan 03 15 09:30 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Carlo de Chavez wrote:
New here, would love to know your insights smile

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What we said above is almost the same thing we have to say for you "Portfolio Development"
We can see you doing well in Lifestyle, but you need to work with better photographers that will help you
develop a above average portfolio.
Good Luck

Jan 03 15 09:36 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Anita1993 wrote:
Tell me again smile

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WOW!! I know that we had done you before, but you have really upped your portfolio, You had me(Renato speaking) with the first 2 new images on your portfolio They are:
https://renatojr.com/wine_bottle_small.jpg

You are a beautiful model with a great look and figure.
I would go to the Netherlands to shoot with you! smile
Keep it up.

Jan 03 15 09:53 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

We are done for today. Paul had to leave (you know HOT date)
We will continue tomorrow and promise to catch up.

Jan 03 15 11:35 pm Link

Model

Shirin Brigitte

Posts: 379

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

I would be in, if you start a new round wink

Jan 10 15 07:17 am Link

Model

_eMMe_

Posts: 866

Florence, Toscana, Italy

Sure!

Jan 10 15 08:34 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Jan 10 15 11:25 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

This is rather nerve racking smile

Jan 10 15 11:26 am Link

Model

Elesha Eden

Posts: 588

London, England, United Kingdom

port updated ..I nearly made it last time tongue xx

Jan 28 15 04:03 pm Link

Model

Jeia Scott

Posts: 16

Everett, Washington, US

Is the game over? New model here smile

Jan 29 15 01:33 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Andie08 wrote:
I'm interested!

We are back all together for the SuperBowl....We will catch up today! we hope. Of course this all depends on how much to drink we will have. But for now, Beer is cold, Pizza and wings are here, so here we go!

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Avg:             5.6                              5

You have a nice look, We feel the first priority for you right now is to work on your portfolio. We feel that it can be a lot better with the right photographers, and pick your niche of what you want to do with modeling.

Feb 01 15 01:27 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Cassie Weinick wrote:
me smile

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Avg:             7.6                             5.3

Ok. The good news. You are young, have a great look, have the height and we can see you doing extremely well with swim ware and glamour. You could also probably handle some fashion if you work at it.
What we feel that you need is a better portfolio. You need to learn to pose better and work on your facial expressions. Working with photographers that have lots of experience in posing models and can pose you will go a long way to help your portfolio.
Although we know that Charlotte is not the modeling hub of the world, have you tried going to some agency casting calls? and we are talking about real modeling agencies. In our opinion, just as a rule of thumb, if they ask you for any form of payment RUN!!!! smile

Feb 01 15 01:41 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

steph000 wrote:
Me please smile

smile

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We feel that your calling is for Editorial, Glamour, Lingerie and Swimwear. We would like to see a lot more of that in your portfolio. We think you are ready to start to work with a little better photographers then you have been working with. Also there are quite a few images in your portfolio then in our opinion does not do much for you. We actually think it brings your portfolio down. You are young, and we see a lot of potential on what you can accomplish. GO FOR IT!!!

Feb 01 15 03:32 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Shirin McBennett-Sheen wrote:
I would be in, if you start a new round wink

smile

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Avg:           7.6                         5.3

For what we can tell you have been modeling for over 1 1/2 years now, and we feel that you have am amazing look. We also feel that your portfolio in no way reflects what you can be capable of doing. In our opinion you have about 3 great images on your port, and another 3 or 4 good images, the rest do not help you. Work with above average photographers, and bing your portfolio up to par of what you are capable of doing.

Feb 01 15 03:49 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

_eMMe_ wrote:
Sure!

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Avg:           7.3                         5.6

Great figure, love your red hair and your look. Would love to see more classy glamour and lingerie images in your portfolio, along with some top notch artistic images.
Italian models ROCK, and you are no different.....smile Keep  on doing it!

Feb 01 15 04:02 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Elena Antonia Pappas wrote:
This is rather nerve racking smile

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I personally have looked at your portfolio quite often. We are gorgeous, and have an amazing look. What else can we say that you don't already know. smile
Keep it up, we will be checking back and looking forward to seeing a lot more of your new work.

Feb 01 15 04:10 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Elesha Eden wrote:
port updated ..I nearly made it last time tongue xx

smile
https://renatojr.com/number10.jpg

You were almost our first "10" , and you are even better now.
You are absolutely awesome in all you do and it shows.
What else can we say!
smile

Feb 01 15 04:16 pm Link

Model

Sammie Cartwright

Posts: 665

New York, New York, US

Hit me 😘😘

Feb 01 15 05:51 pm Link

Model

Pauline Yee

Posts: 406

Calgary, Alberta, Canada

You guys evaluated me in Sept, but can I double dip? As well, can you tell me what you think should be removed from my port. I would really appreciate it!

Feb 01 15 07:22 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

antemortem wrote:
Is the game over? New model here smile

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We are trying to keep Stevie awake so we can be all caught up before they leave tonight. The way it's going, they will probably crash here for the night. We are HAPPY THE PATRIOTS WON!!!
Now back to the important stuff.

We see you doing extremely well in Glamour, Lingerie and Swimwear. You need to work on your portfolio. Remember it's not the quantity of images but the quality. you have over 30+ images in your port, but it looks like they are from only 6 or so shoots. I know you are new at this, but there is nothing wrong with having only 6 to 8 great images. Just keep shooting and updating your portfolio.

Feb 01 15 08:04 pm Link

Model

Syrena Fury

Posts: 177

Palm Bay, Florida, US

Please rate me when you can. I think my first request was missed. smile

Feb 01 15 08:18 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Syrena Fury wrote:
Please rate me when you can. I think my first request was missed. smile

smile

We apologize that we skipped over you. This is what beers do to you! So we will do you next! We also have to do this before Stevie and Paul pass out.
smile

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Avg:          7.6                          7.3

You get an extra point for your gorgeous red hair. smile We want to see a lot more swimwear images from you. We all feel that you will do very well as a swimwear model. Also some lingerie shots will be great, and with your beautiful hair and facial structure, I would try a beauty shoot with some good beauty photographer. Overall we feel that you have great potential in those genres. We will keep coming back and checking in on your portfolio. smile If there is one thing that we all felt you could work on is your facial expression in shots. Not bad, but not too much variety. Of course on this we are never sure it it's you or what the photographer is directing you to do. Keep it up.

Feb 01 15 08:35 pm Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Sammie Cartwright wrote:
Hit me 😘😘

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Avg:         7.6                            6.6

We think you have a great look and figure. Would love to see some more artistic black and white from you.
Also I look at this image:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110808/09/4e40110f7a937.jpg
and it screams editorial to me.
Personally I would love to do a "film noir" type shoot with you. I think you have the perfect look for it.
There are a couple of images on your portfolio that we feel does not do you justice. for example the second picture in the second row, does not do much for you in our opinion.
Overall we liked you a lot.

Feb 01 15 08:44 pm Link

Model

Syrena Fury

Posts: 177

Palm Bay, Florida, US

Thank you so much for your critique. And yes you are right, facial expressions are something I am working on. I hope to have an updated profile with a lot more variety before the end of February. smile

Cheers!

Feb 01 15 10:15 pm Link

Model

Andiel

Posts: 122

Reading, England, United Kingdom

Renato Alberto wrote:

We are back all together for the SuperBowl....We will catch up today! we hope. Of course this all depends on how much to drink we will have. But for now, Beer is cold, Pizza and wings are here, so here we go!

smile

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You have a nice look, We feel the first priority for you right now is to work on your portfolio. We feel that it can be a lot better with the right photographers, and pick your niche of what you want to do with modeling.

Thanks. Is the model rating based on just looks or potential? Interesting to know.

Feb 03 15 06:14 am Link

Photographer

Renato Alberto

Posts: 1052

San Francisco, California, US

Andie08 wrote:
Thanks. Is the model rating based on just looks or potential? Interesting to know.

This is only based on current look and current portfolio. Also the right portfolio in our opinion goes a long way to how we rate you as a model. smile

Feb 03 15 06:28 am Link

Model

angie marie w

Posts: 23

Bridgeville, Delaware, US

im game

Mar 10 15 08:40 pm Link

Model

LauraLuna

Posts: 261

Madrid, Madrid, Spain

I'd appreciate some feedback, thanks

Mar 11 15 07:28 am Link

Model

Elesha Eden

Posts: 588

London, England, United Kingdom

Renato Alberto wrote:

smile
https://renatojr.com/number10.jpg

You were almost our first "10" , and you are even better now.
You are absolutely awesome in all you do and it shows.
What else can we say!
smile

so so happy Thankyou guys smile
xx

May 01 15 03:51 pm Link

Model

Elesha Eden

Posts: 588

London, England, United Kingdom

Renato Alberto wrote:

smile
https://renatojr.com/number10.jpg

You were almost our first "10" , and you are even better now.
You are absolutely awesome in all you do and it shows.
What else can we say!
smile

so so happy Thankyou guys smile
xx

May 01 15 03:53 pm Link

Model

Figures Jen B

Posts: 790

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Oh my goodness, I do not think I've visited "Fun and Games" and if I had it was brief.

I'm sure the beers are long gone but hope you are having some more. smile

I'll bite, in fun and games!
Jen

May 03 15 06:46 pm Link

Model

mariapantellismodel

Posts: 80

Derby, England, United Kingdom

Me please smile

May 03 15 08:51 pm Link

Model

Angellica Deranged

Posts: 4

Morristown, Tennessee, US

Still drinking? Me please smile

May 08 15 11:23 am Link

Model

Leonie Scott-Boras

Posts: 24

London, England, United Kingdom

Hope you guys are still on the "lash" as we Brits might say. Would love critique!

May 09 15 09:41 am Link

Model

Maddy

Posts: 10

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Sure!

May 10 15 12:25 pm Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Can I make the 2nd 10 smile smile smile

May 11 15 02:14 pm Link

Model

TYLER HILL

Posts: 6

Charleston, South Carolina, US

sure

trying to get back into the business but may be too old, posted some recent pics, sorry these ones are not professional

Sep 24 15 04:04 pm Link

Model

simplyposh

Posts: 29

Los Angeles, California, US

Me, please!

Sep 30 15 02:45 am Link