Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Liberate Me wrote:
Go easy. 
Model Portfolio
R 8 7
S 8 6
P 7 7
Avg: 7.6 6.6
You have an amazing look. We see you an amazing glamour and artistic model. You should be able to develop and amazing portfolio with the right photographers.
Keep shooting, we want to see a lot more from you.
Model
Mikka
Posts: 113
Riverside, California, US
Renato Alberto wrote:
Model Portfolio
R 7 6
S 6 6
P 8 6
Avg: 7 6
We feel that your potential is much higher then your portfolio shows, especially in glamour and lifestyle. Find great photographers to help you develop your portfolio. Thank you very much! I appreciate the feedback! (:
Model
Mary Zdo
Posts: 176
San Ramon, California, US
Model
Anita1993
Posts: 316
Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands
Go ahead
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Anita1993 wrote:
Go ahead
Model Portfolio
R 7 6
S 7 7
P 6 7
Avg: 6.6 6.6
You have a great look. We feel that you would do great for beauty, hair and catalog style images including swim ware. Your portfolio should reflect that.
Model
Zaryana Milan
Posts: 278
Moscow, Moscow, Russia
I am sure you will do it well 
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Jason Grubbs wrote:
Me please?
Model Portfolio
R 7 5
S 7 6
P 7 5
Avg: 7 5.3
We we you for Lifestyle and commercial, with the possibility of some catalog, but your portfolio needs a lot of development. In our opinion that is your biggest area of improvement.
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Zaryana Milan wrote:
I am sure you will do it well
Model Portfolio
R 10 8
S 8 8
P 9 7
Avg: 9 7.6
There was an Italian painter Elio Carletti that defined "Beauty" as the summation of the parts where nothing is needed to be altered, added, or taken away.
and thats you, you're beautiful!
Beauty, Lifestyle and Fashion Catalog is your calling. We would like to see some more of those images in your portfolio.
Model
skyler_blue
Posts: 7
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US
go ahead!
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
skyler_blue wrote:
go ahead!
Model Portfolio
R 7 4
S 6 4
P 7 4
Avg: 6.6 4
It goes without saying that you need to develop your portfolio. You are new, so that should be your highest priority. Work with good photographers that can help you develop a good solid portfolio. We see a lot of potential for you in glamour, lingerie and commercial. Keep shooting and getting out there and good luck to you.
Model
skyler_blue
Posts: 7
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US
Renato Alberto wrote:
Model Portfolio
R 7 4
S 6 4
P 7 4
Avg: 6.6 4
It goes without saying that you need to develop your portfolio. You are new, so that should be your highest priority. Work with good photographers that can help you develop a good solid portfolio. We see a lot of potential for you in glamour, lingerie and commercial. Keep shooting and getting out there and good luck to you. why thank you i just started a few weeks ago and have a few more shoots coming up.!
Model
GowreeH
Posts: 5
Bolton, England, United Kingdom
Do me please!
Model
sillykitty
Posts: 37
London, England, United Kingdom
Model
Pauline Yee
Posts: 406
Calgary, Alberta, Canada
Hi guys,
You have reviewed me before and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind taking a look at my port again. I will buy you all beers!
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
GowreeH wrote:
Do me please! Well, we are back together again, so here we go to catch up.
And yes we have been drinking, We just not sure what the beer count is, but we are sure that Stevie has had the most..
Model Portfolio
R 6 4
S 5 3
P 6 3
Avg 5.6 3.3
Well, we realize that you are new. With only 5 photos in your portfolio, it is really hard to tell what you can do. And the 5 images that you have in your portfolio are not really that great. You need to shoot a lot more, with good photographers that can help you develop a solid portfolio. Then we will be able to tell a lot more what your capabilities are.
Now with your height, your genres are limited, and we are sure you know all that. but does not mean you can not successful at modeling.
KEEP SHOOTING!!!
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
sillykitty wrote:
I'd like to play please!
Model Portfolio
R 6 6
S 5 5
P 8 6
Avg: 6.3 5.6
Hi, this is Paul, Renato usually writes this, but I decided to do this one. As you can tell we were a little divided on you. I personally think that you are very good looking, and you have a great figure for artistic nude work. Knowing that you are willing to do nude work will work in your favor, and make you getting work a lot easier, although we all feel that you can do much more the nude work, we can see you all doing well in lifestyle. We all feel that the main thing you need is a much better portfolio that can show you at your best. I encourage you to do that, I think you will be amazing!
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Maria Susanti wrote:
I'll play
Model Portfolio
R 7 5
S 6 5
P 7 4
Avg 6.6 4.6
Ok, we are at a lost for what the modeling industry is like in Indonesia, but here's our opinion.
Due you your height and that you don't do nudes, we can see concentrating on beauty and lifestyle, You have a gorgeous face, that we feel can do well in beauty work. We also can see you doing some non nude glamour work. Main thing again for you, is what we say to most of the models here is to concentrate on developing a solid portfolio. You have a lot of cute images, but they are all over the place, and except for a couple of them it does not really do you justice and show your capabilities. Keep shooting, and all the best to you.
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Pauline Yee wrote:
Hi guys,
You have reviewed me before and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind taking a look at my port again. I will buy you all beers!
Model Portfolio
R 8 7
S 9 6
P 8 6
Avg: 8.3 6.3
Hi Pauline, this is Stevie. Since I was the most vocal during the discussion on you, I was told to write this...
First the good news. Your portfolio has really improved since the last time we looked at it.
You have 19 images in your portfolio. I would say 10 of them are solid images, they are great and just the type of images you want in a portfolio. I think about 5 of them are good. and 4 of them should probably be replaced. For example, and again this is mainly my opinion. Your current avatar, looks like an ad for an headache medication, because your face also looks like you are in pain. So, we all think you have an amazing look, here's what I see your portfolio needs. A couple good head shots. You say in your portfolio that you do Glamour and lingerie, but you have none of that in your portfolio, and I think you should. I think you could do very well with those genres. There is an image that was in your portfolio last time that you got rid of it, and I thought it was one of your best images.
But overall great work, and great improvement on your portfolio, which also shows what you are capable of. So, keep at it. I think you have an excellent chance of being our second perfect "10"!!!!
And yes, I will take the beers!!!!!
Model
Pauline Yee
Posts: 406
Calgary, Alberta, Canada
Thanks guys for all your efforts. Not only will I buy the beers but the buffalo chicken wings as well!
Pauline
Model
Jesslyn Kelly
Posts: 46
Calgary, Alberta, Canada
I would love your feedback!! This is awesome what you guys are doing J
Model
Jasmine Tooley
Posts: 60
London, England, United Kingdom
awww go on then - that's a lot of beer consumption gents
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Oliver Pras
Posts: 7
New York, New York, US
im assuming by now, you guys are on your third keg? Drink up, I may need your beer goggles for support! HAHA
Model
Tanya V
Posts: 2
San Francisco, California, US
Model
sillykitty
Posts: 37
London, England, United Kingdom
Renato Alberto wrote:
Model Portfolio
R 6 6
S 5 5
P 8 6
Avg: 6.3 5.6
Hi, this is Paul, Renato usually writes this, but I decided to do this one. As you can tell we were a little divided on you. I personally think that you are very good looking, and you have a great figure for artistic nude work. Knowing that you are willing to do nude work will work in your favor, and make you getting work a lot easier, although we all feel that you can do much more the nude work, we can see you all doing well in lifestyle. We all feel that the main thing you need is a much better portfolio that can show you at your best. I encourage you to do that, I think you will be amazing! Thanks for the critique! I've never considered doing any lifestyle modeling since I always figured I have the wrong shape/height. Maybe its something to re-think though
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
sillykitty wrote:
Thanks for the critique! I've never considered doing any lifestyle modeling since I always figured I have the wrong shape/height. Maybe its something to re-think though Hi, In our opinion, there is no right or wrong shape for lifestyle. Let's define what we feel lifestyle is in our opinion.
"Lifestyle photography is a style of portrait/people photography which aims to capture and document real-life events, situations, or milestones in an artistic manner and the everyday living"
The other thing that Paul failed to say was that you should also get some glamour and lingerie images in your portfolio.
Keep shooting and have fun!
Model
Whitley Thompson
Posts: 1
Greenville, South Carolina, US
If you're still up? I've just started modeling - would love to know your thoughts! Thanks!!
Model
Carlo de Chavez
Posts: 14
Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines
New here, would love to know your insights
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Anita1993
Posts: 316
Venlo, Limburg, Netherlands
Tell me again
Model
Andiel
Posts: 122
Reading, England, United Kingdom
Model
niquehaggs
Posts: 120
Los Angeles, California, US
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
We are back! I know it's been a long time since we have done anything on this thread, but it's been awhile since all 3 of us have gotten together. But we are together this weekend, watching some soccer, and of course the NFL playoffs. So we thought we would take a look at this thread again and see how behind we were, and try to catch up. So thanks for your patience, and we will catch up. We are not drinking beers today. We are having some wine instead. Not sure yet if it's going to be better or worst........
But here we go......
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Elyse Nicole Craft wrote:
Me?
Model Portfolio
R 6 5
S 6 4
P 6 4
Avg 6 4.3
OK, let's start with the good news We feel you have a great look, and should be very successful doing glamour, swimwear, etc. Your portfolio has 75 images, and we feel that many of them don't do you justice. Your Avatar is great. All of us feel that quality is more important then quantity. We feel that you have about 20 or so awesome images that should be your portfolio. We also feel that you should look to work with some photographers that would add some variety to your portfolio.
Good luck...
Model
Syrena Fury
Posts: 177
Palm Bay, Florida, US
Renato Alberto wrote:
We are back! I know it's been a long time since we have done anything on this thread, but it's been awhile since all 3 of us have gotten together. But we are together this weekend, watching some soccer, and of course the NFL playoffs. So we thought we would take a look at this thread again and see how behind we were, and try to catch up. So thanks for your patience, and we will catch up. We are not drinking beers today. We are having some wine instead. Not sure yet if it's going to be better or worst........
But here we go...... NFL is always a good reason...for anything.
Anyway, how about mine? Thanks!
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Jesslyn Kelly wrote:
I would love your feedback!! This is awesome what you guys are doing
J
Model Portfolio
R 7 7
S 8 6
P 7 7
Avg 7 6.6
Hi Jesslyn. Another beautiful model from Calgary. I wish I was allowed to get in Calgary(I know someone will understand this)
We like your look and your style. Your portfolio is good, but we feel you have the possibility for awesomeness.
What we mean is that we feel you need some more diversity to your portfolio. some of the genres that you state you do are not represented in your portfolio at all, and it should be. You have some really nice images in your port, but we feel they are all about the same and not very diverse.
Keep it up!!!!!!!!!
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Jasmine Tooley wrote:
awww go on then - that's a lot of beer consumption gents
Model Portfolio
R 9 8
S 9 8
P 8 8
Avg 8.6 8
What else can we say? Your scores says it all!
This is Renato, and I do have one other thing to say "When can we shoot?"
Photographer
Renato Alberto
Posts: 1052
San Francisco, California, US
Oliver Pras wrote:
im assuming by now, you guys are on your third keg? Drink up, I may need your beer goggles for support! HAHA
Model Portfolio
R 8 8
S 8 8
P 8 8
Avg 8 8
You have a great look and style for fashion and catalog work. We could see you quite a bit of catalog work.
Good luck.
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