J0 J0 wrote:
OK.

You have too many similar headshots, and some of your pics look amature- like they were shot with a throw-away camera.
Okay, you have some height -which is great, show it! Get some full length fashion shots

Renee-R wrote:
any words of wisdom Ms. Kat?

Other than your avi, your photos don't pop for me. Which is sad becuase you're beautiful! Work with as many photographers tf* and build your port with photos that show YOU in your best light, not the photographer/mua/hairstylist..that's what they have their own ports for. Good luck

Kat Livingston wrote:

You have too many similar headshots, and some of your pics look amature- like they were shot with a throw-away camera.
Okay, you have some height -which is great, show it! Get some full length fashion shots

I know i know, im doing a shoot this may so i will be able to work on some actually full length photos! but thanks for the crit. Your BEAUTIFUll. just thought id let you know. have a good one

Ginny McQueen wrote:
Me!

You have such a beautiful face, as with the clean headshot in your port. The other stuff, (while maybe creative) just doesn't flatter you. I would suggest trying some commercial style modeling, or some beauty shots of that face!!

J0 J0 wrote:

I know i know, im doing a shoot this may so i will be able to work on some actually full length photos! but thanks for the crit. Your BEAUTIFUll. just thought id let you know. have a good one

Thank you, and good luck!

Kat Livingston wrote:

Other than your avi, your photos don't pop for me. Which is sad becuase you're beautiful! Work with as many photographers tf* and build your port with photos that show YOU in your best light, not the photographer/mua/hairstylist..that's what they have their own ports for. Good luck

aww your so sweet!  I've got more tfp offers than I have time...hopefully I'll get what I need eventually!!  Thanks!!

Photons 2 Pixels Images wrote:

I find myself more attracted to the surroundings in your photos than the models...what does that say? You're good at photographing nature Hahah. I don't know...shoot better models?

Photography by Obi  wrote:
Mine please?

Hmmm, the best photos are the ones without the white backgrounds. They look blown-out and hollow. I would get different studio backgrounds to shoot on.

L Rae wrote:
oh me!  I wanna know!

Your face looks best at an angle, rather than straight on, also I would toss some of the duplicates in your port. 1-2 per shoot is enough

Stacie Elaine wrote:
Would love any advice.. working on getting different variety of pics up

You are beautiful and have great commercial/lifestyle modeling appeal! You look best when dressed for your age, the last pic I would toss. It doesn't flatter you what-so-ever!
Great start!!

Jasmine-- wrote:
i'm just starting out so i would LOVe that:)

When shooting, take a few wardrobe changes that way you get the most from your shoots. Also try funky poses and new facial expressions to keep your port interesting.

Jesse Jerome Smith-PDX wrote:
I wanna know!!  Thx

Your best shots are where you're DOING something, or acting With the tennis racket, and the wrapped tie...those are great! Many of the others are too amateur and bring down your port. You have a great look, and the acting skills to make some fantastic shots

First Point Visual Arts wrote:
Would love to hear your opinion of my humble offering.  I'm a bit new to this all, but loving every minute.  Thank you.

I think your portrait and swimsuit work greatly outweighs the nudes. Your models look too uncomfortable and the shots are, well, a little boring. You have potential- keep at it!! Good luck!

Shaolin Photo wrote:
If you're still here, I'm game. Thanks in advance.

You're good. Really good! You have a great eye for what looks good, and you know how to light your subjects all while getting interesting shots. I'd like to see you do more beauty type shots. There isn't much I can say!

Tara Burton wrote:
Would appreciate your thoughts?

For some reason you photograph much shorter than you are.... ? Okay- the new photos are stunning. You should try more beauty work! You have amazing cheekbones!

Nicholas Creevy wrote:
me me!

WOW you're talented! I usually HATE series, but you know how to do them right! Every photo is as good as the next and they all tell a story. I love the vintage feel that you add to them, I don't know the technical word, but that grey haze that makes them so moody looking. LOVE IT Keep on keepin on!

-Ada- wrote:
Ouch! Still? Did you have to get them pulled at different times? I hope you feel better soon!

Yes, ouch! Left side, then a week later my right side. It's been a nightmare...

So, for you~ You obviously have a face meant for beauty work! I would love to see you in wild make-up and hairstyles Gorgeous!

Brian Burk wrote:
Hope you are feeling better today So what about my port, what can I do better?

Well, my face is frozen...(ice pack) and I have to go to the dentist at 3pm, so my day can't get much worse after that, I hope.

And as for you... the ONLY thing that could make your port any better than it ALREADY is....is to add me to it Yay! WIN!!

Kat Livingston wrote:
Yes, ouch! Left side, then a week later my right side. It's been a nightmare...

So, for you~ You obviously have a face meant for beauty work! I would love to see you in wild make-up and hairstyles Gorgeous!

Aww...Poor girlie! Get better soon! I ate baby food for like a week when I had my wisdom teeth out, lol.

Thanks for the critique. I just realized that I don't have any of my crazy make-up and hair shots in my port. Must get on that when MM allows us to upload again!

Kat Livingston wrote:

Well, my face is frozen...(ice pack) and I have to go to the dentist at 3pm, so my day can't get much worse after that, I hope.

And as for you... the ONLY thing that could make your port any better than it ALREADY is....is to add me to it Yay! WIN!!

And we already have plans to do exactly that (Soon as you feel better)

-Ada- wrote:

Aww...Poor girlie! Get better soon! I ate baby food for like a week when I had my wisdom teeth out, lol.

Thanks for the critique. I just realized that I don't have any of my crazy make-up and hair shots in my port. Must get on that when MM allows us to upload again!

You know, my pride kept me from eating baby food, but I would likely be much better off if I had!! Damned babies and their mushy food!

I mentioned that to you about beauty because I saw the collage of your work on your profile, and holy cow you have some great shots there

Kita St Cyr wrote:
Hey pretty lady!

Do you kow how beautiful you are? I have no critique for you. None.

Brian Burk wrote:

And we already have plans to do exactly that (Soon as you feel better)

And that's why I adore you
Hey MM- Brian Burk is THE kindest person ever! Just a little "FYI"....