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Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

Hi, I adore the looks and concepts of a lot of different models and photographers I have seen here on MM. I'm awake, and have some time on my hands, and will look for what I see in you, and your work, what is beautiful there. No need for tissues, and if I miss anyone, you can send me a PM and I will send one back to you after looking at your profile.

Any takers?

Jan 16 10 05:24 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Hit me Jen and good morning !

Jan 16 10 05:27 am Link

Model

myrasegal

Posts: 868

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Sure, I'll go for it!

Jan 16 10 05:29 am Link

Photographer

The Infinite Curves

Posts: 64

Dorking, England, United Kingdom

go for it...

Jan 16 10 05:38 am Link

Photographer

Twisted Images

Posts: 96

Paterson, New Jersey, US

ready...

Jan 16 10 05:42 am Link

Photographer

Paul Tirado Photography

Posts: 4363

New York, New York, US

Take a look. Thanks.

Jan 16 10 05:42 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

JeanD wrote:
Hit me Jen and good morning !

Good Morning!

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091222/12/4b312fb20c61a_m.jpg

This image is amazing. I love your work, the way you captured her face, it has an emotional feel to is and is beautiful. I would like to see you branch out (lol, no pun intended) and do work with some different styles, again, this is only based on the 20 photos you have up..keep going, I think you have a lot to offer the models that work with you, and pat yourself on the back for taking nature and creativity and making art!

Jan 16 10 05:43 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

myrasegal wrote:
Sure, I'll go for it!

https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100102/09/4b3f803560405_m.jpg

I love this image...though I can't see your eyes, which are beautiful. I'm partial to Egpytian themes though, but you do this justice, it doesn't look like a goofy costume, this is very well put together. I'd love to see some more photos of you as far as emotions you can show the camera, you have expressive eyes, and a very pretty face, I'd also like to see you in the pin up style you mentioned as I think that would fit you well, AND it's very fun! You go girl!

Jan 16 10 05:49 am Link

Photographer

Jeff Fiore

Posts: 9225

Brooklyn, New York, US

Go for it!

Jan 16 10 05:49 am Link

Model

Ania N

Posts: 358

please

Jan 16 10 05:50 am Link

Model

myrasegal

Posts: 868

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Jenn aka Miss Rayne wrote:

https://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100102/09/4b3f803560405_m.jpg

I love this image...though I can't see your eyes, which are beautiful. I'm partial to Egpytian themes though, but you do this justice, it doesn't look like a goofy costume, this is very well put together. I'd love to see some more photos of you as far as emotions you can show the camera, you have expressive eyes, and a very pretty face, I'd also like to see you in the pin up style you mentioned as I think that would fit you well, AND it's very fun! You go girl!

Thank you soo much! I will be adding more soon:) Have an awesome day!

Jan 16 10 05:51 am Link

Photographer

JeanDphoto

Posts: 1346

Knowlton, Quebec, Canada

Jenn aka Miss Rayne wrote:
This image is amazing. I love your work, the way you captured her face, it has an emotional feel to is and is beautiful. I would like to see you branch out (lol, no pun intended) and do work with some different styles, again, this is only based on the 20 photos you have up..keep going, I think you have a lot to offer the models that work with you, and pat yourself on the back for taking nature and creativity and making art!

Thank you Jenn, Yes I can branch out LOL this port is dedicated to this specific project so Next project will bring some more stuff !

Thank you for taking the time !

Regards

Jean

Jan 16 10 05:53 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

andygreen wrote:
go for it...

https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090905/07/4aa2736967126_m.jpg

I love this image for two reasons, it is very sexy, and very fun! She is smiling and seems completely comfortable. Besides the array of beautiful images in your portfolio, I LOVE your sense of humor. It attracts me to your work even more, and makes me feel comfortable just reading it. Laughing is wonderful, and I really can't see anything in your port that needs improving. And I definately would work for chocolate...LOL...Maybe a chocolate themed shoot! Models and chocolate! There ya go...that can be done beautifully with the 18+ pics, or even just close ups in series like, making brownies or something. You have a great imagination and sense of humor, keep using that. Best to you in 2010!

Jan 16 10 05:55 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

Twisted Images wrote:
ready...

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081024/22/49028076435df_m.jpg

I absolutely love the model and the bit of humor in this picture, and of course, the stance and lighting. It stood out because it is much more natural looking than some others in the port. I would LOVE to see you do more along the lines of this photo, with less photoshop wizardry, because you have the talent. Either way, the photos are very striking. On your profile I am immdiately drawn to the camera with wings, which is a bit distracting since I do want to know about you, but then again, its 6am my time and every now and then I suffer from ADOS...Attention Deficit OOOH SHINY!!!! LOL. Your name also draws me in, Twisted Images, and to want to work with you between your work, name, and awesome camera with wings. I love your sense of imagination...run with that!

Jan 16 10 06:02 am Link

Photographer

Jonexpo

Posts: 2114

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Sure...smile

Jan 16 10 06:04 am Link

Model

DonnaToni

Posts: 210

Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US

Why not?

Jan 16 10 06:06 am Link

Photographer

jimmy o

Posts: 26

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

ok smile

Jan 16 10 06:07 am Link

Photographer

Lakeside Art Photos

Posts: 571

Beaver Dam, Wisconsin, US

I'll take a shot ... thanks for your time.

Jan 16 10 06:08 am Link

Retoucher

High Def Retouching

Posts: 126

London, England, United Kingdom

I'm in smile

Jan 16 10 06:08 am Link

Model

Annie RS

Posts: 5699

Baltimore, Maryland, US

Me please?

Jan 16 10 06:08 am Link

Photographer

Dan Richards

Posts: 1488

Fort Worth, Texas, US

Sure why not.

Jan 16 10 06:10 am Link

Photographer

A Picture of Matthew

Posts: 452

Cluj-Napoca, Cluj, Romania

Please!

Jan 16 10 06:11 am Link

Photographer

David Kirk

Posts: 4852

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Yes please.

Jan 16 10 06:12 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

Paul Tirado Photography wrote:
Take a look. Thanks.

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090607/23/4a2cac32be795_m.jpg

This image is very captivating. I love it because it is beautiful, the lines are clean, sharp, but also natural at the same time. The power of what the females models eyes are capable of emoting here is amazing. When I read your profile, about looking more for agency models, I thought, huh. Cause looking at your photos, you do have a huge array of different looks, styles, and lighting. You are a true master of your craft. One thing I am curious about, is that I noticed in more than one pic, the models foreheads were cut off, or the hair was. (LOL..not literally.) I don't know if it's something you noticed, or did on purpose. From what little I know about photography, YET depending on the shot and what the purpose is, is to leave a bit of headroom or 'hair room' So youre not cutting off things, which doesnt change my opinion of what wonderful work you have here, from goth type looks, to high fashion, and humorous images too...I just wanted you to be aware of it in the case you may not be. You work with a lot of beauty, and I feel like I got a lil jipped cause I couldnt see what I felt like wasnt the whole image! wink Keep shooting. You're utterly mind blowing.

Jan 16 10 06:15 am Link

Photographer

Emilia Ray Creative

Posts: 173

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Please?

Jan 16 10 06:17 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

Jeff Fiore wrote:
Go for it!

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091229/04/4b39f714b1282_m.jpg

BAM. That image hits like a ton of bricks. It speaks, it brings out emotions, it makes me feel. A lot of your images I appreciate for the aesthetic beauty of the femals form. I would love for you to do more themed shoots, Especially ESPECIALLY with the images that slap me upside the head and make me think, or cry, or laugh. (I noticed the legs from the oven, that was really funny, and ow that must have hurt holding that pose!) Keep pushing the boundries of your imagination, and your creative self, and keep working with models that scream through your pictures, because with this image alone, you bring up so many things in society, and so many things that remain hidden, HUG yourself for me, because you did something much different, and taken what is generally thought as ugly, and brought it to a face, making it impossible to ignore. Thank you.

Jan 16 10 06:22 am Link

Photographer

Twisted Images

Posts: 96

Paterson, New Jersey, US

Jenn aka Miss Rayne wrote:

https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/081024/22/49028076435df_m.jpg

I absolutely love the model and the bit of humor in this picture, and of course, the stance and lighting. It stood out because it is much more natural looking than some others in the port. I would LOVE to see you do more along the lines of this photo, with less photoshop wizardry, because you have the talent. Either way, the photos are very striking. On your profile I am immdiately drawn to the camera with wings, which is a bit distracting since I do want to know about you, but then again, its 6am my time and every now and then I suffer from ADOS...Attention Deficit OOOH SHINY!!!! LOL. Your name also draws me in, Twisted Images, and to want to work with you between your work, name, and awesome camera with wings. I love your sense of imagination...run with that!

thanks so much! this is one of my favorites too!

Jan 16 10 06:22 am Link

Photographer

Flint Imagery

Posts: 28

Manchester, New Hampshire, US

Sure lets havea a go....

Jan 16 10 06:22 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

Ania N wrote:
please

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/23/4a6166f1412f4_m.jpg

This image is just POW in your face beautiful, but still leaves a bit of mystery as far as what is going on behind your eyes. I love eyes that tell stories, and I love ones that keep secrets and are mysterious as well. I think you are gorgeous, and you seem very new to MM. I'd like to know a little more about you, on your actual profile page, what do you want to do? Whats your favorite pose, what types of themes do you like? Thats all really. You have natural beauty, and when adding makeup, and wardrobe to that, you become more and more striking. Bring in some new pictures, and network with some other people. It has helped me, and I hope in turn it will help you! Keep it up, you have a wonderful look!

Jan 16 10 06:28 am Link

Model

AndreasMb

Posts: 3088

Saint-Louis, Alsace, France

Hit me big_smile

Jan 16 10 06:31 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

I will be back momentarily, grabbing coffee and some toast or somethin...tummy growlin! JonExpo you're next, I'm coming down the list so I'm taking time to be sure I don't skip any of you, and also get a good look at your pics and profiles to give you a fair trial. I mean a fair critique. LOL. Be patient lovelies, I promise I will get to you.

Jan 16 10 06:33 am Link

Model

Lisa Andresen

Posts: 8664

Abingdon, Illinois, US

good morning me please !!!

Jan 16 10 06:41 am Link

Photographer

Jeff Fiore

Posts: 9225

Brooklyn, New York, US

Jenn aka Miss Rayne wrote:

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091229/04/4b39f714b1282_m.jpg

BAM. That image hits like a ton of bricks. It speaks, it brings out emotions, it makes me feel. A lot of your images I appreciate for the aesthetic beauty of the femals form. I would love for you to do more themed shoots, Especially ESPECIALLY with the images that slap me upside the head and make me think, or cry, or laugh. (I noticed the legs from the oven, that was really funny, and ow that must have hurt holding that pose!) Keep pushing the boundries of your imagination, and your creative self, and keep working with models that scream through your pictures, because with this image alone, you bring up so many things in society, and so many things that remain hidden, HUG yourself for me, because you did something much different, and taken what is generally thought as ugly, and brought it to a face, making it impossible to ignore. Thank you.

Damn! Thank you Jenn!

Jan 16 10 06:42 am Link

Model

B Paige

Posts: 390

Bristol, Virginia, US

me please! smile

Jan 16 10 06:43 am Link

Photographer

dr-photo

Posts: 1

Newcastle upon Tyne, England, United Kingdom

Good day from the UK!

If you find yourself with more time and a critical eye then feel free to offer me your insights - if you like I can reciprocate big_smile)

Jan 16 10 06:44 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

Jonexpo wrote:
Sure...smile

https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100115/05/4b506b9c5c123_m.jpg

This image is awesome. There is something to be said about mirrors, and the way you were able to capture the model a dozen times in one frame, I can see her basically from a 360 degree angle. That in itself, while still keeping any flash or yourself out of the picture, is amazing. I have a deep appreciation for black and whites, they seem to bring a classic beauty to most any shot. The one thing is, there are very few color images in your port, and they are beautiful as well. I'd only suggest you add some more color photos to your collection as you expand more. Or, like other models I have seen here, use one page strictly for your black and whites, and one for color. Just an idea for you to show more of who you are in the shots as well!

Jan 16 10 06:48 am Link

Photographer

DouglasRoberts

Posts: 39

Chester, Virginia, US

Yes please.  My port needs some love :-)

Jan 16 10 06:49 am Link

Photographer

Jonexpo

Posts: 2114

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

Jenn aka Miss Rayne wrote:

https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100115/05/4b506b9c5c123_m.jpg

This image is awesome. There is something to be said about mirrors, and the way you were able to capture the model a dozen times in one frame, I can see her basically from a 360 degree angle. That in itself, while still keeping any flash or yourself out of the picture, is amazing. I have a deep appreciation for black and whites, they seem to bring a classic beauty to most any shot. The one thing is, there are very few color images in your port, and they are beautiful as well. I'd only suggest you add some more color photos to your collection as you expand more. Or, like other models I have seen here, use one page strictly for your black and whites, and one for color. Just an idea for you to show more of who you are in the shots as well!

Thank you kindly for your observations Jenn smile

Jan 16 10 06:51 am Link

Model

Jenn aka Miss Rayne

Posts: 286

Broadmoor, California, US

DonnaToni wrote:
Why not?

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091129/22/4b1366cca5bd4_m.jpg

This is your most striking photo, and very beautiful. I love that in this particular picture your hair, your beautiful long hair, is something that draws me in to your face and eyes. You are very new, and still under 18, but you have a look. A great look. Be careful of the photos you post as I have made the mistake as well, something better fit for myspace being in a port just takes away from it. Bring your hair into your pictures, your eyes, practice and do it because you love it, because you have your own look, and bring out those gorgeous eyes, keep the hair mostly off your face, I want to see you too, and book with more photographers as you can. Keep going! Just keep swimming just keep swimming...LOL...I love that movie. OOOH! It gave me an idea too...with hair like yours, I would LOVE to see you do a mermaid type shoot. curl your hair in loose spirals, keep the makeup a bit neutral depending on who you're shooting with, and if you can't afford a top that seems "mermaidy" enough, you can always go to a craft store and attach shells, dried or fake flowers, and things like fishing net to a bra that is nude colored, but you are still covered. I would love to see you do that!

Jan 16 10 06:57 am Link

Photographer

Bible Bob

Posts: 10

Waterbury, Connecticut, US

I'd like your opinion.

Jan 16 10 06:58 am Link