Vivid Impressions wrote:

Thanks for the feedback.

Joe

varton wrote:

Jaqueline, you are pretty but there is nothing in your port that shows your potential.
The easy thing to do is to get some beach shots with colorful hot swim suits. Do couple of high heel shots in a pretty dress.
this one is for now the best you have got
but if you don't house clean soon and shoot with a decent photographer no one will ring your bell
good luck to you and all my best.

Thank you!

Al Campos wrote:
I'll play

Love this one listed
and this is my fav listed
The rest is nice especially some outdoor beauty shoots but did not captivate me. There is not much plot there especially the nudes are a bit boring except the
naughty housewive style https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17195216 +18,

Good luck, all my best.

Keenen Jones wrote:
What about me

I like your cool dude looks, but you may want to add some other looks like suit and tie (just in case )
This is my fav listed

varton wrote:

I like your cool dude looks, but you may want to add some other looks like suit and tie (just in case )
This is my fav listed

hey thanks and im definitely doing a smart wear shoot next!
Thanks for the feedback!

varton wrote:

Hello there,
you have some really beautiful shots in your port
my fav: listed

I love your bubbly personality too
and this one is well posed and love the dress and nylons listed
and "Les chute de reins" I wish this was sharper

love your look, you may want to add more lingerie glamor and beauty shots and portraits done with the right photographer. Good luck to you.

Thanks so much for the feedback. I am looking forward to doing more shoots and add to my port

Ethan Swistak wrote:
I'd appreciate some input, since I just posted some new pics and I have been kind of on and off about how they came out. I'd like to know if its just me...

Thanks!

You look great in this one this must be your Tom Cruise angle
remove this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22095145 you look boring
it would help if you hold yourself straight when you wear tie and suit https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22031427

keep shooting themes, you would do great in boy girl duo fashions

varton wrote:
this must be your Tom Cruise angle

Lol, I'm a little taller than Tom Cruise...

varton wrote:

Yep, you shoot mostly indoors, and I can see you have worked with many beautiful starter models. 2 immediate reactions; 1-try to coach them better on their poses and better yet put a full height mirror behind you so they can see their expression and posture. 2- Try to improve lighting.
I like this one I feel it was posed great with wonderful wardrobebut I don't like the flat lighting and low contrast.
I like your creative vibes in this one great expression and mua job. Not strong enough for me to list either of them.

You need to perfect your lighting to create drama on beauty boudoir shots, having gorgeous creatures posing in nylons and lace will not be enough if you can not master the light. Your work will come out lifeless and will be pretty much difficult to correct by photoshop. just my 2 cent.
Take care and wish you the best.

Thank you for your advice It is much appreciated.
I am trying to work out the lighting problem.

Cheers
Colin

varton wrote:

Zoey, you are gorgeous and you pose well.
this one probably describes the best what I mean
I love your generous feminine curves, poses reflect personality and flexibility.

I love this look, it may not be the best in your port
bot love the teasey smile a lot
You would make a gorgeous pinup. and a lingerie diva.
my best to you.

Thank you for your feedback and lists xx

Jennifer Barker wrote:
Please do so  ... 

Jennifer, You look stunning and do not understand why you are saying in your profile you are not actively looking to shoot.
You pose very well, have camera presence, eye contact and really gorgeous. Love all your expressions, from nice, to naughty
This is my fav
gorgeous boudoir, here simple and elegant
all listed.
I love your look and if you were close by I would make you change your mind not to shoot.

Jazmine Salgado wrote:
Me me me. Please!

You look stunning in this
you have some awesome poses, you probably are freezing here, nice outfit.
but this one is my fav love your profile and you have got here a nice mua and hair job
listed

RTE Photography wrote:
I'm in.
Tommy

you say " I am a PHOTOGRAPHER. That means that I am interested in many forms of expression as a photographer, not just shooting pretty girls. " but you shot some very pretty girls so is this a bait and switch?

well well
it is amazing what a feather will do.

we have some awesome outdoor babe shoots and dramatic bw landscapes I love a lot
My fav and
this one listed.
I like the Divine Artemis album as well. I would remove certain redundant shots from some models, and definitely those 2 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22149792
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22149709
+18 as they weaken your port a bit.

KymberlyAnn wrote:
I don't THINK I have posted in here yet, so have at it

Looks like more is the merrier LOL
Hmm
very nice port and I must say love your ripped nylons pics a lot, very fetishy looking. listed
You are beautiful and I love the drama a lot in your pics. Great camera presence. You have great eye connection like this one
I really hate this one it looks like you live from paycheck to paycheck..
(kidding, the pose is not appealing to me, as you look like you hurt your back while heavy lifting )
the bottom pose with the hat below comp is the best and my favorite as well

T-Sun Photography wrote:
I'd appreciate your thoughts. 

OK no problem
your best in port is this one great pose and cute style, loved it. I don't care much about vampire or bloody stuff but you shoot those with great talent as well.
I love this in your "normal portrait category" LOL listed as well
great job, add more pics. I'd like to see more of your work

varton wrote:

OK no problem
your best in port is this one great pose and cute style, loved it. I don't care much about vampire or bloody stuff but you shoot those with great talent as well.
I love this in your "normal portrait category" LOL listed as well
great job, add more pics. I'd like to see more of your work

Thanks so much!  I appreciate the add to your lists. 
Personally, I'm not into the vampire and blood thing either, but some of the younger "goth" models really think it's cool, so at the end of a shoot I let them do a few...lol!  The whole vampire thing is so hot right now and for the life of me, I don't understand it...must be getting old...lol.  Thanks again

Deep Shadows Pictures wrote:
Always interested at what others think is my best. Bring it on.

You have some great shots in your port, some are doped great like this one like it
she is cute but I don't like the hard shadow on this
your best in your port is this one love the mua pose and model, , but I hate when feet are cut off. This is either bad framing or reckless cropping. listed anyway.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/13615682 is not adding much to your port and again a bad crop. It would have been better to reveal the whole graffiti filled wall behind her.
my .002
keep clicking and you will do well.

Scottsdale Images wrote:
I'll give it a shot.... please

Hi you have a large amount of indoor and outdoor bw nude shots.
Overall your models are pretty but with some you are unable to get out of them a meaningful pose, attitude and drama you need to qualify them as artistic nude rather then naked girl pictures.
One image grabbed my attention immediately that saves the day she is awesome. listed.
Your lighting is a bit off or missing the interesting parts of your subjects sometime like this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21880740 +18
I guess this picture  is more a lingerie shot then a pinup because there is no plot It is shot flat and it doesn't have a life of its own. The model seem to be bored already.
This one could have qualified as a pinup but looks like just a girl sticking her legs up. One should never forget that a pinup is a single frame of the whole story. If there is no plot there is no pinup.
I like your color photos, this one stands out gorgeous ink, listed.

Try to plan your shoots better and looks/poses you need ahead of time and ask your models exactly what you want not what they are willing to give you. This is your show , not theirs.
keep it up

Dan Lenick wrote:
If you're still going!! thanks...

You look great, and have the right look for a gumshoe.
This one grabbed my attention immediately
listed
this one looks cool
great port.

varton wrote:
You look great, and have the right look for a gumshoe.
This one grabbed my attention immediately
listed
this one looks cool
great port.

Aww man, thanks so much for the list and the positive words, I appreciate that!! Of 60+ pics to choose from in that particular shoot, that happened to be in my top 2!!! Again, thanks!

Boston Artist Model wrote:
Me Too please

I understand you specialize in male Figure Model, for  Life drawing, art classes etc,
and looks good.
I would advise to add clothing shots as well.

Hello Izzy B wrote:
Intrigued~

Isabelle
I am totally wowed by your beauty Sandra Bullock look alike here?

remove this one it is not a good idea to post a picture of you posing with someone else in your port. It might shift focus away from you, unless the person posing next to you has relevance (which is not the case here).

gorgeous smile.
your best
you look great, get a good photographer to work with you and add some pro level shots to your port. all my best to you

JKL Images II wrote:
I would like to know

Hello,
it looks like you are only interested in nude shoots
this one is really outstanding listed
Locations you have picked for your outdoor nudes are weakening your images because they are distracting. Poses are decent but nothing really earth shattering
keep it up.