miky2rude wrote:
Good honest feedback is hard to comeby and very much appreciated. If you have the time i would love to get your feedback and any direction you feel could help me. thanking you in advance

I prefer looking at your outdoor photography more because it has impact and colors are outstanding.

I Like this one. my fav, listed. This is your best listed as well.

Your indoor pictures are a bit flat and I have seen average lighting on some just like this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19191505 also your model's expression do not captivate me.

this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19206028 too yellow.
This would have been a lot better without the dead space, which is too bright white.
this one is too light and a lost opportunity for a nice highlight and shadow cast on the model if she was sitting instead of standing. In general your pictures communicate well and nicely framed and exposed.
Keep clicking

JamesD wrote:
Yo Varton im ready for round 2 got a decent batch of new shots, and would love to hear your thoughts.

I like the new stuff.
listed. Nice colors and great pose. You don't look static and it is very important.
In this one you should have a red bow tie
Yellow colors are easily faded away against gray white backgrounds.
Port looks great.

Images by MR wrote:
Yes plz....

Great job in general, some are edgy some are nice. Overall great job.
This is your best expression listed.
In this one note that her head is not proportional to her body. She looks like short lady with a big head. When you shoot from this perspective, stay away from the subject and zoom in around 80 ies. On a variable zoom lens like 18-xxx do not shoot head and feet at 18-30mm.
Excellent pose and capture on this nice fashion look, killer heels.
This one is a bit dark I see clearly color banding on her pantyhosed legs. Do not use slightly imperfect marked pantyhose for your shoots, in the darker hues. The camera captures everything and when you reduce photos to a smaller size, moiré effects accentuate flaws and color shifts.

Avoid taking pictures of void expressions like this no good. The light spot is also a distraction.
This picture is too cold, looks like an overcast weather. Mount skylight filters (pink 1B or rotary style polarizing filter) to show at least some cloud contrast, and photo shop a bit to shift the hue and saturation into a warmer colors.
You are doing well on most others. Keep it up.

Megan K wrote:
Me please!

You look great and this one is interesting love the sepia and surroundings.
In this one you look scary serious https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11078125 and you don't look good (delete)

location is a bit incompatible for this kind of poses https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11127774 which is a bit better then  this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11044972
this one is a great shot
You posing is OK but I have noticed that your jaws are too tight on some pics, relax when you pose. You may want to cut down a bit on couple and romantic shots, as your port grows. Currently it gives more like the facebook feel. Shoot some boudoir and fashion to beef it up. Good luck and all my best to you.

Winnie L wrote:
Here please

Hello, you have beautiful looking great port.
You have good angles and bad angles that need to be watched.
Like in this on top photo, the light angle cast a shadow that make your eyebrows look long and left eye look smaller then the right one.

I love this composite where I see great poses and expressions.

Incendia Photography wrote:
Let me know what you think

Kevin, your port shows some experimentation and good concept ideas but I would suggest you focus on lighting more as a priority in your work before refining style and concepts.
This is your best good bw, well styled and posed. Love the authentic garters. Listed
Those are either miss or need a lot of work:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8644874 bad light
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22631122 flat light
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8645488 flawed cropping
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8645344 too dark

these give good vibes
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17033952
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/14476202

Mike E Photography wrote:
alright I'm in

You have some nice photos, and variety in your port.
I like this listed
hard shadow cast on this
in this one the subject is well lit but the burn on each side look a bit awkward.
I would suggest you focus more on lighting techniques.

I J Geddes wrote:
Not much to pick from my profile i know but would love to know what you think?

Hi, I am not a retoucher, I barely survive so I don't have much to say or advise about your work other then telling you what I like and what I don't.
So here we go. I usually don't like heavily doped photos, super airbrushed till the cows head for home.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21983005 (can be deleted)

You have only 2 eye catchers in your port
listed and listed, great manipulation.
good job, put more of those in your port.

The 4th Sin wrote:
Hit me...feedback is always appreciated.

You have some good photos and like your erotic shoot style even though at times I notice minor shortcomings that can be fixed easily. Like this one is excellent https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22744023 +18 but never cut off shoes.
On this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22744023 the cropping is too tight.
I saw you worked with Nikki Delano, she is hot.
This is great
You have very good control on your light schemes https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23024178 gorgeous listed.
Overall great pro quality shots and puts you in a good position to get hired by  internet models to supply quality volume photos for their pay web sites.
keep clicking, great erotic work and boudoir work like this

Olivia  Leigh wrote:
Can you critique my port. I know what I need, but I would appreciate your opinion

You are very beautiful and you have a classy look like this
Most pictures in your port are either weak or shot recklessly and does not help you.
You have a lot of potential but you need to be coached on your poses and composure. From the several hand bra poses it is not hard to understand you don't want to reveal much. But on the other hand in some photos you look cheap and can come across worst then nudity like those below https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23059367
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22890074
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22890117

There are other ways of being sexy and classy without showing much.
your best
The worst should be deleted, red eye, not flattering when inspected closely.
Hire or TF with a hair artist, mua and thog, dump everything and start new, to reflect style, and sophistication in your look if you are serious in modeling.
Good luck and wish you all my best.

Marie Curie  wrote:
wow - intense

Drop dead gorgeous port, I love your pinups and boudoir shots, wardrobe levels are strong with impact, You know what you are doing.
Your best too small to list
excellent headshot
doesn't add much
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22664773 (light is poor)
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22664853 (bad location)
My fav love the vintage fetish girdle listed

this one sexy and great light but don't like the angle and bad crop.
Overall you are doing good, but it doesn't hurt to add fashion or urban looks.

Angel LL Marie wrote:
Would love to hear what you have to say

I love your freckles
You have cute look, you can be also hot if you want to.
You will do well with experienced photographers.
pose with more passion.
not your best https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22896978
this is more likely gorgeous perspective that sales your assets.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22897018 (makes you look pear shape)

I also noticed that your pics are over saturated in yellow range and grainy, emphasizing your freckles a lot more on all your body.
Keep it up, best of luck to you;)

LunarDivine wrote:
Shoot:)

You are drop dead gorgeous with beautiful eyes.

looks super
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/12648776 not your best
I find those montages a bit tacky
great location and pose
my fav listed
add some lingerie and make things more interesting, show your teaser side.

varton wrote:

Hello there
this one is the eye catcher very well posed and interesting because your hands are busy 
often male models just stand and stare at the camera, you are not one of them. Good for you.
I love this also but your shirt is too busy and taking attention away from you

OK I see a lot of potential. Add some more different looks especially fashion and delete the similar photos.

Ashlyn T wrote:
Would love to hear about me .. most pages in a forum i've seen so far!

Ashlyn, young and beautiful
my fav and your best
I love the sophisticated look here as well nice curves.
You may want to add some lingerie boudoirs if interested in shooting them. In any case you would make a cute pinup.
keep shooting, you have nice port.

varton wrote:

with this review I am finishing requests on page 4

I can see you have some athletic skills
in the pic below I don't like how your nose cast a bad shadow below, to see you need to check the bigger image carefully...

love this one better

but prefer to list this one

it is well contrasted, colorful and you do not look bored

Thank you so much! I updated my port too, let me know what you think! I appreciate it so much

Clarence Zimmerman wrote:
If your still going, I'm game.

Great port, I see variety and beautiful frames shot with skill.
Crazy about this colors are gorgeous but the model did not give you the "look". This should have been a fun pic if she held a wrench and a dirty rug giving you "sorry I broke it" kinda embarrassed look.
Love this one as well but the expressions are perceived fake.
Great shot
Excellent shotI love this but the car looks a lot better, model's face expression lacks passion and excitement.
In general you picked excellent places to shoot but your models let you down.
You have superb image quality and eye for beauty. You need to cheer up those models. Their poses are lifeless and lack personality.
This is your best bride
My personal favorite because I love the style and hair job cropping is a bit tight.
Keep it up, demand more from your models.

elisabetea wrote:
List and critique me please!

You look like a doll, absolutely gorgeous.
Listed in my cuties list
Your port reflects your personality and you look like fun to work with, with great camera presence and eye contact.
I hate the cropping on this flattens your head, what a shame, one of your best pics.
love your retro hair here and you missed the opportunity to flash those gorgeous legs in sheer nylons that would match this classic pose.
Keep it up, super job. You would look great in retro pinups and boudoir/burlesque as well.

Jae Gould wrote:
In your opinion, which one is my best?

I love your hourglass shape and beautiful face.
Not too many to choose from, looks like you uploaded only 1 shoot.
I like your toned thighs and legs in this
My personal fav a real doll.
Keep it up, and add more looks soon. You look gorgeous.

Dan Richards wrote:
I'd love to know.

Dan you are a little diamond hidden in the rocks.
You have gorgeous pictures.
I love this super job https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22095845 as the outfit strikes a chord. From her casual pose I can not tell if she is excited in looking drop dead gorgeous in nylons and vintage girdle.
You are perfect doing this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19717410 the way you did it. Awesome light, pose and drama here. A+ job.
Your lighting is always amazing https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19242664 and consistent with concepts except here it is a bit flat.
Great nudes and portraits.
My fav https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16070758 listed.
Terrific job, keep clicking.

Susan Davis wrote:
I would love to hear your opinions!

Lovely port and the first eye catcher for me is this very lovely.
In this shots and I am not so crazy about shoot angle. The cropping on the first one is too tight. I would never let the shadows to leave awkward casts on darker parts of stocking welts and the photo is losing a lot because of that. On the second one I wished to see more of the model=subject then props=recliner chair therefore those 2 shots otherwise great failed for me.
This is a such a great pose but it loses impact due to busy background and tight cropping as well. The lighter color building and electric transformers at far end is a distraction as a dead space.
This is my fav in the bunch
You may want to control your backgrounds better so dead spaces do not become a distraction or overpowering factor in your images.

v i k t o r wrote:
helloo!

Hello Viktor
You are an expert retoucher and your work speaks by itself
this one is listed.
Great color saturation and contrast in most photos. In this cutting off the toes is a crime.
I would prefer this one a bit darker.
Keep it up, stellar port.

Scarlet Shaylen wrote:
I would love to hear what you think of a few of my shots Love all the time your taking....

Hello Scarlet. You have many beautiful shots. In general you pose well and have good deal of camera presence.
Love this a lot classy and sassy look.
this can be deleted https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20631195 weakens your port
This is my fav and shows the very best of you https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18189326 +18 You have the most beautiful nipples. Love the artistic expression and sensuality A+ in all levels also the awesome crop. The flesh tones and the glitter on your lips make this photo much sexier then the single nipple showing. Listed
in this I notice some minor wrinkles but it is a great shot. listed
Your bw photos are excellent and you are not affraid of nudity. I see confidence in all frames and it is a good thing.
You have great curves in the right places, and totally drop dead gorgeous.
Keep doing what you are doing. Super job overall. You would make any photographer look great.

photomiz wrote:
Appreciate the commitment to this thread.

Please sign me up.. I'd love to know as well.

Kind regards from Boston.

well well. Gorgeous port, full of vibrant colorful headshots.
Nice post work as well.
this is my fav listed
You master your lights very well
Your post work is inspiring and meaningful.
This is another example
Super job, you are an excellent photographer.
your stuff is not the run of the mill.

XenaDyne Photography wrote:
sure thing

Very nice port full of some lovely headshots, outdoor full moon figure nudes and swimsuits.
Nice color saturation and contrast.
this one is an eye catcher.
Cool port with truly gorgeous models and I am sure they had great time shooting.
You may want to add more indoor boudoir and fashion to your port.
Keep clicking

Christie Gabriel wrote:
what about me?

You are gorgeous high fashion model. You worked with creme de la creme and your port shows evidence of some amazing work.
I love this
This is one of your best listed
Your wet look is amazing
Excellent head shot
But your best and my fav is this one

keep it up, I love your port and proven skills.

Ashley Carnegie wrote:
Me please

Absolutely gorgeous port, I see experience beauty and talent.
This is your best look  listed
This is my fav listed
This one looks like very much my shoot style with sheer garments
This one is just amazing a great photographer's unique vision. You just happen to be there
Love it.
Keep it up. I love your accomplishments.

Mrs Foxy wrote:
let me know

Hello Kristen,
you have a unique look with gorgeous features.
You have some truly beautiful work in your port as well.
You are comfortable with your body and nudity.
This is my fav listed.
You are at ease with looks and modeling
This is such a sexy photo you can be a total turn on even fully clothed. Love the glasses and face expression. The book you are holding in this photo tells a lot about it.
Your best look is this listed.
keep up the good work. A lot of potential.
Lovely port

varton wrote:

Hello Viktor
You are an expert retoucher and your work speaks by itself
this one is listed.
Great color saturation and contrast in most photos. In this cutting off the toes is a crime.
I would prefer this one a bit darker.
Keep it up, stellar port.

thanks the one that you listed will always be dear to me... it was the first ever fashion shoot/editorial that i art directed and retouched.