Funck Photography wrote:
yes please!

OK so you have a small port but quite a bit of talent.
If you are rigging the shibari yourself it is really great however on those rope bondage the light scheme could have been better.
Few I catchers I am impressed with, (listed)
you need to work a bit on your indoor lighting, on those
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16622216
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19161274

you are creative and you seem like you plan ahead and try to convey a message.

Brian Kurtz wrote:
Hit me!

Brian your work is striking good
especially the sunset shots at the beach. I love the saturated colors.

However you seem to be a stuck with similar outdoor concepts. Avoid also more then 2 pics per model per look on your portfolio.
You should add more  indoor/studio photos to your port.
this shows your craft better and my fav.
It looks like you connect well with your models as they all seem enjoy shooting with you which is a good thing
keep clicking, and be original.

Erin Chaney wrote:
Alright, shoot. Please from an aesthetic/ makeup perspective, as I have nothing to do with the cropping or lighting or what is going on with a model besides their makeup or sometimes hair.

Erin
I can only give an opinion on what visually appeals to me in your work. Yes I am always impressed with MHUAS and wardrobe artists stylists.
You guys make us always look good. But I am not qualified to critique your work in general.
but I will do my best

k e v i n  wrote:
Me me!

hello Kevin
small port but I found at least 1 picture that impresses me
great concep and framing. The model is really giving her 100%. Saying that there was nothing else more in your port that grabbed my attention.
You may want to remove this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24160107 becausethe light just doesn't work there and there is a slight out of focus problem as well.
keep it up you may want to add more pics soon, experiment with original concept and connect well with your models. Avoid the "she is just standing there " feel in your work.

PennsylvaniaSande wrote:
me to please

I like your port and those 2 eye catchers a lot great styling, lovely model and pose Great use of set but be careful on your light. The white dress reflects light and the glare is too much and distracting.
your portrait work is nice when you do it  like this
but in those below pics  light is so so.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21826763
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21827415


excellent landscape concept and owerall good work

Kait ann wrote:

Annemiek Schout wrote:
Please

Nice photoshop skills and few head turners like princess and the frog your best
Great few shots
Nothing to list but I like your concepts and I wished to see more weight on photography aspect then post work after.
Model expressions are a bit meh below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23591610
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23591593
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23816443
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23591635

This would be nice if it wasn't for very busy background distracting and taking the focus away from the model, cropping is also appear to be a bit flawed.
your work quality varies and it would be a good idea to keep only the strong ones in your port.
no point to keep those below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23591340
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23591386

Adonis T wrote:
Thanks for checking things out for me and I appreciate the feedback.  It is funny about the smoking pic, because that was the worst headache I've ever had after that shoot.  Mad props to you!!!

again you have a pleasant port with variety.
your poses are great and it is obvious you can act.

I usually don't like low key images  unless they are done with female models doing nudes.
Noting to list but very cool look, keep it up. Focus on fashion more
and stay away from chained fetish genre.

Tatiana Mango wrote:
I'd love to know!

you have a very busy port, I like your look and you do a great job from nice to naughty.
You have a very busy ink.
Your best pic is this, real head turner

the rest did not do much for me.
Great athletic skills and gorgeous look, you will do great in everything except fashion because of the height.
I don't like much your bangs in this picture https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22336052
being the weakest.

Maddison G wrote:
I am interested in your critique. Thanks M

You are 16 year old 5' 10" you are beautiful and you will do well
and for a quite a while
This is my pick and it is a gorgeous  natural look
I would have list this but it is post processed till the cows went home and your eyes out of focus.

You look stunning in all your pics, and some are great fashion shots and you should focus on fashion primarily.