L2Photography net wrote:
I would love to be a part of this list just because its so long. Thanks
L2

Great variety in your port and great technical skills.
However in some photos models connect with the camera poorly.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16292238 +18
in this cropping is bad https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/12212800
and I know sexy, this one is not.
I like your portraiture.
The rest is not much appealing to me.
this one is a sure eye catcher, nothing strong enough to list in any of my available categories.

Bertoldo Photography wrote:
I would love to hear some feedback I have done nature wildlife photography for the past 3-4 years.  and only recently decided to expand to models.    I have a couple shoots under my belt.  I personally feel they are really novice photos.  but I expected that from my first 2 shoots.  so feedback   positives/negatives, what to look for could really help me develop my skill in this field.

If you want my opinion, start shooting models as subjects not objects of nature. Make your photos more interesting by better styling, backgrounds and be resourceful.
Currently they come across as a bit dull.

TarynEmilia wrote:
I'm interested

You make a great fashion runway model.
I found few eye catchers in your port.

excellent hair modeling here
your best for fashion is probably this one but in general I don't like high key images, your demenor and look works in that but the lighting and cropping  could be better IMHO
When you pose antyhing other then fashion watch your posing and face expressions.
This is my fav in the bunch

Gloria Budiman wrote:
Please rip my portfolio... Would love to hear your thought. I want to see how far I've self-taught myself within 2 months

I looked your work so far and here are some reccommendations.
watch your framing/cropping
in this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23662155
avoid always cropping limbs arms and waist down because looks awkward.
watch your exposure, in this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/23903240
you are losing contrast and dynamic range.
this one is nicely posed but you can still create subtle shadows by uneven lighting.
you do sexy well
this is my favbut prefer a bit lower key.
It's better to develop your own style.
work on your light and exposure.

Rick Owens Photography wrote:
Me please

I like your pinups
this is your best


and I already listed in my hand picked pinups list few months ago.
Your erotic pictures can be perceived as creative for some but it's not much appealing to me personally.
Lighting in your photos varies a lot, the style as well therefore it gives the a mixed bag impression.
your high key is good but you must control better flat light in some of other erotic pictures.
I am not going to comment much on art nudes
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26288848 +18
but I can only say the light is meh and this genre is not your forte.
if you rigged the bondage shibari you are good, but I like higher contrast BWs in general and looser cropping.
Overall you have an average port, great pinup ideas are noted. But pink erotic spreads in your port are diminishing your port in MM and they are certainly better suited for adult web site use.

Pink_caz wrote:
wow popular thread!!

you don't look good in this one
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 8#24671818
and can lose it.
I find this to be best even if I don't like high key.
Nice colors.
work with more photographers and work well on your posing.
current port pictures are not that exciting for not to say boring. Particularly black and white shots.

Sammi Barton wrote:
I would love for you to look at mine
Although, my work is amateur compared to a lot of the others here

you need variety in your port.
I like https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17756213 +18
you also need to work on your poses,
you look the same in many photos.
cropping of pictures could be better
work with good photographers.

Alepoi wrote:
I would love to hear your opinions, thanks!

avoid poses like this https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 5#23673165
where your body looks short and crooked.
Most poses in your port are similar, you need variety.
too many beach shots.
Unable to pick a best.

Evaldas Burba wrote:
Do me please

great port

One of best ports I came accross among male models so far
your best , listed.

ikonas wrote:
Hello David,
Please take a stab at my port. Many thanks!
Ikonas

from landscapes to bodyscapes your work has variety.
I found several eye catchers Great control over light   and obviously creative talent I see in your port.
Compliments
Your best https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22579249 Listed.

varton wrote:

OK so you have a small port but quite a bit of talent.
If you are rigging the shibari yourself it is really great however on those rope bondage the light scheme could have been better.
Few I catchers I am impressed with, (listed)
you need to work a bit on your indoor lighting, on those
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16622216
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19161274

you are creative and you seem like you plan ahead and try to convey a message.

thanks so much