Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Photographer

Mystery Man Photography

Posts: 28

London, Ontario, Canada

do me next! smile

Jun 28 13 08:58 pm Link

Retoucher

White Lotus Design

Posts: 25

Miami Beach, Florida, US

Shoot!

Jun 29 13 02:42 am Link

Photographer

Anvanya Photography

Posts: 26

Breda, Noord-Brabant, Netherlands

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. I like the light color tones and the clarity/smoothness of the image. The furry white surrounding the model looks great against her pale skin and the light blond hair with blue-ish eyes go together well. Great capture of features and nice expression as well.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130626/15/51cb69ff96e7e_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130514/08/51925b6bafb97_m.jpg

Thank you very much for taking the time to take a look!!

Jun 29 13 07:58 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Gabrielle Ann  wrote:
New avatar! Would love feedback.

No. The image is just okay- hair is messy, expression is blank and the posing is not great- looks like you have no neck. Also the shirt on you looks quite big on you and it makes it appear you are thicker than you are. The tattoo is pretty (though looks a bit digitally enhanced) and I like the color of the background.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130619/18/51c25aa95dc24_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33007276 18+

Jun 29 13 10:01 pm Link

Model

Jamina Wittke

Posts: 54

Manchester, England, United Kingdom

Would like your opinion!

Jun 30 13 07:20 pm Link

Model

E L I N

Posts: 199

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

winking_wonder wrote:

No. The image is just okay- hair is messy, expression is blank and the posing is not great- looks like you have no neck. Also the shirt on you looks quite big on you and it makes it appear you are thicker than you are. The tattoo is pretty (though looks a bit digitally enhanced) and I like the color of the background.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130619/18/51c25aa95dc24_m.jpg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/33007276 18+

Changed! Thanks.

Jun 30 13 08:17 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

WithAmour  wrote:
I'll give it a go!

No. Image is just not really my style- A bit too dark for me.. I dislike black backgrounds and the dark shadows. Also can't really see your face too well but looks like your expression is quite blank. Pose is interesting though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100610/13/4c114e94cd622_m.jpg

Jul 01 13 10:24 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

April Dorothea wrote:
May I play?   I'm game!

Yes. I love the pretty lighting and color scheme. Very lovely, soft capture of you - I enjoy the styling and your wavy light blond hair, paired with your delicate features. Nice makeup from what I can tell and decent expression.

Also nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130610/20/51b69386d1b5b_m.jpg

Jul 01 13 07:53 pm Link

Photographer

Mountain Image

Posts: 1184

Morgantown, West Virginia, US

Take a look.

Jul 01 13 08:03 pm Link

Model

JonBeneteau

Posts: 38

Delta, Colorado, US

here!

Jul 01 13 08:17 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Raven Blake wrote:
Would love to hear from you

Maybe. Image is quite dark- I'm not fond of dark backgrounds but your hair/makeup looks pretty good and you have an emotive expression.

Jul 01 13 09:27 pm Link

Model

Empress Sweetcheeksz

Posts: 4

Brooklyn, New York, US

im game

Jul 01 13 09:30 pm Link

Photographer

Shwizz

Posts: 9

Madison, Wisconsin, US

sounds like  fun

Jul 01 13 09:35 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Bold Sheep Photography wrote:
😳

Yes. Nice lighting and color scheme- I really like the clarity and smoothness of the image. Model's look is great- I love the shiny blue hair and the colorful peacock feather covering her left eye. Expression is a bit blank though. And would've liked smoother/shinier application of lipstick to go with the shininess of the rest of the image.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130513/18/51918cffe2166_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120901/08/50422cee6e0c5_m.jpg

Jul 02 13 09:47 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Paige Alison wrote:
any advice?

Yes. You have a nice look and figure and I love the white blazer on you. The fact that you have noting on underneath adds sex appeal to the image without being overly sexy. Also nice jewelry. I like your hair and facial features but expression is a little just there- not much connection. I also don't like that part of your hair/head is cut off at the top of the image.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130628/06/51cd965a7afb4_m.jpg

Jul 02 13 12:31 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Mystery Man Photography wrote:
do me next! smile

Probably. Not sure I like the model's outfit and the grittiness of the image, especially her skin but I do like the background and her curly red hair. Expression looks a bit blank/bored though and pose could be more dynamic- instead she's just sitting there.

Jul 02 13 06:55 pm Link

Photographer

Quentin Skyking

Posts: 296

Lancaster, Massachusetts, US

Try me.

Jul 02 13 07:05 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Rock Victorian

Posts: 142

Norfolk, Virginia, US

Okay, I'll play!

Jul 02 13 07:06 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

White Lotus Design wrote:
Shoot!

Yes. I really like the color scheme in this image - especially the vibrant colors of the dress/model's hair. Nice posing and background.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130630/05/51d020e56af4b_m.jpg

Jul 03 13 10:40 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Jamina Wittke wrote:
Would like your opinion!

Yes. You've got a dynamic pose going on and a lovely, shapely figure. I like the black bodysuit on you, paired with your awesome American-flag inspired heels. I also like the color of your hair and the pale background color. Expression looks a bit sleepy/blank though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130630/14/51d0a738cff43_m.jpg

Jul 03 13 09:19 pm Link

Retoucher

White Lotus Design

Posts: 25

Miami Beach, Florida, US

winking_wonder wrote:

Yes. I really like the color scheme in this image - especially the vibrant colors of the dress/model's hair. Nice posing and background.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130630/05/51d020e56af4b_m.jpg

thank you!!! I appreciate the positive feedback big_smile

Jul 03 13 11:16 pm Link

Model

ARTaylor1

Posts: 6

Santa Barbara, California, US

Hello, would you be willing to take a look at my photos and tell me what you think?
thank you!

Jul 04 13 12:59 am Link

Makeup Artist

Caitlin Birchett

Posts: 2

Jacksonville, Florida, US

I'm curious smile

Jul 04 13 05:24 am Link

Model

Jhomel

Posts: 180

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Looking forward to your critiques.

Jul 04 13 06:24 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Mountain Image wrote:
Take a look.

No. I don't like the outfit or the hat. The pose is kind of boring and the left arm is awkward. Expression on the model is okay but background is a bit shadowed/dark.

Nice:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/6169572

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28944533

Jul 04 13 08:11 am Link

Photographer

Mark Callen Photography

Posts: 260

Buffalo, New York, US

*New Avatar!  What do you think?

Jul 04 13 08:21 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

JonBeneteau wrote:
here!

Yes. Nice black and white tones, handsome face and decent figure. The pants with a peek of Hanes underwear is quite sexy. However, expression is a bit blank..

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130616/06/51bdbe3d3eaa4_m.jpg

Jul 05 13 07:57 am Link

Makeup Artist

Denise Hutter MUAH

Posts: 119

Cary, North Carolina, US

What do you think?

Jul 05 13 08:54 am Link

Model

Aftannoon

Posts: 17

Maryland Heights, Missouri, US

New avatar today.

Jul 06 13 04:06 pm Link

Photographer

Schlake

Posts: 2877

Socorro, New Mexico, US

Now that I have a new avatar, I need to speak up in this thread!

Jul 06 13 07:07 pm Link

Model

Ruth Gray

Posts: 57

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Moi?

Jul 07 13 10:08 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Empress Sweetcheeksz wrote:
im game

No. The image is blurred, the pose is strange as is the mustache attached to your face and the expression is not very good. I don't understand the styling of mustache, glasses, belt etc.

First 4 photos in this set are okay:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110301/20/4d6dc2a193825_m.jpg

Jul 08 13 11:16 am Link

Photographer

DRaskin Photography

Posts: 164

Sacramento, California, US

I'll play along. So would you?

Jul 08 13 05:19 pm Link

Photographer

Sara Perreira

Posts: 51

Acushnet, Massachusetts, US

winking_wonder wrote:
Simply what the subject states. If no, I might let you know which photo I like better (if any).

Open to everyone: Photographers, models, MUA, retouchers etc


Note: It may take a few days, but I *will* get to you.

I'm curious! smile

Jul 08 13 09:03 pm Link

Model

Nakkiah Stampfli

Posts: 2

Freeport, Illinois, US

Oh! I'm interested! This could be fun!

Jul 08 13 09:07 pm Link

Photographer

Corey N Woolsey

Posts: 5

Evansville, Indiana, US

Hello, hope to hear your opinion!

Jul 08 13 09:12 pm Link

Photographer

Mike Meadows

Posts: 55

Tempe, Arizona, US

If you base it just on the avatar, don't you think you do a dis-service to you and the the other person. Maybe it's worth taking an hour to surf profiles and ports, I know as photog I do. Many time the avatar doesn't match the rest of the port.

I asked myself, would I work with you based on your avatar, jury is still out. But then again a model with just over 2 years experience, I just have to hear the honest assessment.

It must be a slow night for me if I'm doing this.

Can't wait.

Jul 08 13 09:15 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Shwizz wrote:
sounds like  fun

Probably not. The background and model's hair is a little too blurred and makes the image look a bit distorted. I do like that the model's body is clear... The green top looks good on her. However, the expression of looking away is not great and there's no emotion/connection there. Also, I don't think the hat matches well with the outfit and think that some nice makeup would add to the overall image.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130701/20/51d24fc4b751a_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130126/21/5104bd901270f_m.jpg

Jul 09 13 11:33 am Link

Model

WithAmour

Posts: 219

Orlando, Florida, US

winking_wonder wrote:

No. Image is just not really my style- A bit too dark for me.. I dislike black backgrounds and the dark shadows. Also can't really see your face too well but looks like your expression is quite blank. Pose is interesting though.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100610/13/4c114e94cd622_m.jpg

Thank you!

Jul 09 13 11:42 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5713

New York, New York, US

Quentin Skyking wrote:
Try me.

Yes. I really like the clear smooth quality of this image. The model's face looks amazing- Nice makeup and lovely features. Pretty light blond hair as well. Expression is okay but could be better- it's a little blank. The black dress looks good (nice showing of model's bare shoulder) and I like the pose, especially the curve of the model's back.. Sexy look! Though placement of left arm/hand straight to camera is a little awkward. Cool silvery background.

Nice:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130324/17/514f9680a6639_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130626/04/51caccc2c838c_m.jpg

Jul 09 13 12:11 pm Link