JezeBelle Bordeaux wrote:
I'm rather new on here and waiting on edits to add to my portfolio, but I'd love to know if you think I'm traveling in the right direction.

Well, you have a decent start.  Right now I would only do trade work with you.  You don't have anything in your port that jumps out at me, and it is not overly professional looking.  But I know you can get there.  Keep it up.

Kellynn P wrote:
I'd love to know.

Absolutely I would hire you.  You have a great look.  A great shape.  Nice smile.  Your images really stand out.  I would love to work with you!

Tori Morrison wrote:
I'd appreciate your honesty! Thanks!

Your images are dark and not a whole lot of variety. I would not hire you at this time. Nothing stands out to me to set you above the rest.

Jessie Talulah wrote:

Everything seems dark and depressing. Not something I would pay for.

Poulsons Photography wrote:
Well, you have a decent start.  Right now I would only do trade work with you.  You don't have anything in your port that jumps out at me, and it is not overly professional looking.  But I know you can get there.  Keep it up.

Thank you for your critique! I'm just getting started and doing mostly trade work right now. I know I have a lot of port building to do.

Russell S wrote:
why, please?

You need to prove yourself before I would hire you. I want to see what you have to offer, and there is not enough in your port for me to go on.

A M Y - B E T H  -- wrote:
Ya know what, criticism breeds improvement so I'm in

I would not hire you. I don't se anything in your port that puts you above all the models that shoot TFP. So why would I pay for something I can get free somewhere else? Just that simple.

M O R G A N wrote:

Your look is fine, but again, nothing jumps out at me. Something has to make you stand out among all the other models if you want hired by me. And I don't see that.

Avery Mann wrote:
Is this critique just for gals?

Dont see anything in your port I would want to shoot

AmandaDMF wrote:
Please offer your words of wisdom.

I like your look. But you are a TFP level model in my mind. Too much of the same shoot. Not much variety. And there is an Amature look to a lot of your images.

Love_mya wrote:
Yes please do and thank you in advance!

Nope, I would not hire you.  I look for people who stand out.  People whose images make me want to shoot them, and yours do not.  Maybe a tfp, but no hire.  Models at your level are a dime a dozen.  Easy to get them to work for free.

Poulsons Photography wrote:

Dont see anything in your port I would want to shoot

Okay so you wouldn't hire me. Thank you. could I get the why part?

Raina Noel wrote:
Sure, why not.

I would not. To be honest, I would never get past your avatar. I think the deer in the headlight look is kinda .

Tiffiney C wrote:
I'll play

You have a great shape. So I would hire you, with long hair. But short hair , no. Just a personal preference. But overall, you pull off some great looks and have an impressive port.

Sami Sue wrote:
Id love your opinion

I would not. To many dark and unprofessional images in your port. Not something I would pay for.

A Autumn Rose wrote:
I know it will be a no, but do you at least see potential for in the future (with better photos)

Sure, there is potential. Get better pictures and try something different and fun, and maybe it could be a yes.

Poulsons Photography wrote:

Sure, there is potential. Get better pictures and try something different and fun, and maybe it could be a yes.

Any suggestions?

Natalie Swift wrote:
im in

Somehow you intrigue me. I love your images. They stand out. Hired!

A Autumn Rose wrote:

Any suggestions?

Shoot what interests you. Something you have a passion for, and let your emotions show.

Poulsons Photography wrote:
This is for models only. Are you wondering why, or why not you are booking jobs. I will tell you why I would hire you, or why I wouldn't. But I will be honest and to the point. [/quote

I always appreciate my fellow effective honest communicators. I fell into this almost a year ago, snowballed savant style and starting to see some returns. New to the site and by golly, if I'm going to do something I should do it right! Aside from my techtarded port in progress, lay some knowledge on me ma'am! Cheers!

Sammie Marino wrote:
I'm curious. Constructive criticism is always good.

A lot of your images are dark.  Just not an overly professional looking port.  And that is what I want to see if I am going to pay.  So no, I would not, but I can see a great look, and would trade at first.  Then possible pay depending on how it went.

Lethal Leta wrote:

Poulsons Photography wrote:
This is for models only. Are you wondering why, or why not you are booking jobs. I will tell you why I would hire you, or why I wouldn't. But I will be honest and to the point. [/quote

I always appreciate my fellow effective honest communicators. I fell into this almost a year ago, snowballed savant style and starting to see some returns. New to the site and by golly, if I'm going to do something I should do it right! Aside from my techtarded port in progress, lay some knowledge on me ma'am! Cheers!

As soon as I see the Tatoos, I move on.  That reason alone would stop me from hiring you.  I cannot have them in my photos.  So sorry!