Forums > Critique > Based on your Avatar... Would I work with you?

Model

Vic-Rose

Posts: 31

London, England, United Kingdom

Have a look?

Nov 19 13 02:41 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

kristen boyer wrote:
I wanna know!

No. This looks like a snap shot. While I like the dress on you, the coloring especially on your skin is off/two-toned and your pose does show off your legs but it looks forced. And the arm against the wall looks really awkward. Plus your other arm is invisible... I also don't like the crop at the bottom (not your fault though) and expression is very forced. I do think your dark hair and light blue eyes are really pretty though.

Nov 19 13 08:31 am Link

Model

Cameron Hair

Posts: 4

Fairfax, Virginia, US

how about me? smile

Nov 19 13 05:31 pm Link

Photographer

Mearle

Posts: 916

Olympia, Washington, US

Would you dare?

Nov 19 13 05:39 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Pat Wilson Photography wrote:
I'm interested!!

No. This is not a great or flattering angle - The pose is awkward, the crop isn't the best and you can't really see how the model's figure is. I will say that I like the jewelry and what I can see of the lingerie but that's about it. Also the expression - puckered lips, etc is not good.

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130520/13/519a8da3dfe14_m.jpg

Nov 19 13 09:19 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Wanda Lechene wrote:
would you??? smile

I would say yes. It's unique but I like it. I also like the clarity/smoothness of the image. The model looks lovely, especially the flawless makeup, nice red hair and facial features. Expression is decent as well.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120725/09/50101fadea072_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120123/17/4f1e06d53e8ad_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120725/10/501027508a310_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120725/10/50103043e570f_m.jpg

Nov 20 13 12:20 pm Link

Model

David E Simmons

Posts: 133

New York, New York, US

Would you?

Nov 20 13 01:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Benge Photography wrote:
I would love for you to look at mine.

No. The image is okay but I think the black background is too stark and the posing is not great- It would look better if the model showed off her neck. Nice hair and makeup though. The expression looks a little blank, kind of like the model is just staring into the camera.

I like (but would've looked better if face was in focus):
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110515/09/4dcff96b0dcfb_m.jpg

Maybe:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/110515/09/4dcffbf7c4779_m.jpg

Nov 21 13 01:35 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Bre Beauty Services

Posts: 3

Corona, New York, US

Interested in your input.

Nov 21 13 02:43 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Zuri D wrote:
These threads are always so interesting and lengthy. Haha.

I would say yes. You have a lovely way of posing and showing off your face/figure. Nice emotive expression as well.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100719/19/4c450fb154f52_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120921/21/505d43c9095b9_m.jpg

Nov 21 13 07:27 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Justin Adam K wrote:
Let me know:)

A little tough to make out the details of the shot because it's so small but after taking closer look, I would probably work with you. I like your look and your physique though I think the posing could be better- and more flattering/showing your figure off more. Also the expression needs improvement- connection to the camera.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131103/20/527729c8dfa1d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131031/18/5272fe34a913d_m.jpg

Nov 21 13 09:43 pm Link

Model

Emily H- west coast

Posts: 9

Seattle, Washington, US

winking_wonder wrote:
Simply what the subject states. If no, I might let you know which photo I like better (if any).

Open to everyone: Photographers, models, MUA, retouchers etc


Note: It may take a few days, but I *will* get to you.

Nov 21 13 10:36 pm Link

Makeup Artist

Ashley Murray

Posts: 50

Ocala, Florida, US

I would like an opinion

Nov 23 13 03:22 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Rich Suit wrote:

How about now (updated) Rich

No. Again, it's not my style. I don't like the colors especially in the background and you can tell that the background is placed there. The model looks like she has a decent figure but her posing is not that good/flattering. Also the expression is quite strange.. Not sure how it fits in.

Maybe this for an avatar until you get newer photos up:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/101225/12/4d16524b45faf_m.jpg

Nov 23 13 08:37 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

HV images wrote:
would you?

Probably. I like the smooth quality and clarity of the image. The slightly blue tinge of the black and white is also nice. Also the model looks lovely, with a beautiful expression. I just don't like the arm that is in front- Would look better if the arm wasn't in the way and the viewer could see more of the model's outfit.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131119/06/528b76e348c8d_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131115/14/528699d02d8e8_m.jpg

Nov 23 13 08:46 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Cynthia Demers wrote:
I'm new to MM and photography in general. What do you think?

Yes. I like the color scheme and the model- She's gorgeous in a very natural way. I like her style and you've captured it well, as well as her slender figure. The pose is pretty good except for the right arm- elbow facing camera is rarely a good idea. But almost everything else, including composition, I like. Model's hair/part looks great, though expression is a little sleepy/bored but kind of works for the model.

Nov 24 13 10:37 pm Link

Photographer

Forty-Six and 2

Posts: 124

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

I'm new to MM, interested to see your response smile

Nov 25 13 03:54 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

EAS PHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
Yes please smile

Yes. I like the color scheme and the lighting- Love the icy blue theme. Nice pose, outfit (especially the tiara), makeup and hair on the model. Lovely serene expression.

Lovely:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130501/19/5181ced678359_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130328/10/51548125b19fc_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130702/15/51d34f819107f_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130417/10/516ed83b8cddc_m.jpg

Nov 25 13 09:33 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

kristen boyer wrote:
Would like to know!

Already got to you: https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … st18608936

Nov 25 13 11:20 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

LadyBritt wrote:
Hi!

Yes. I like your look, especially your dark hair (nice style/cut) and blue eyes. You also have really gorgeous facial features, good posing and lovely expression. Nice makeup as well.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130924/14/5241ff9344579_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/34512232 18+

Nov 25 13 11:52 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

fotoretusz wrote:
smile

Yes. I do think the flower over the model's face is a bit strange but it's beautifully done. I like the smooth quality of the image, the way you've captured the model's face/features and hair/style. The posing is good and I like the colors/look of the flower and that it appears flawlessly painted on. The expression could be a bit more emotive though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130909/08/522dec4539427_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130909/08/522dec6e5db9f_m.jpg

Nov 25 13 06:32 pm Link

Retoucher

mcar

Posts: 86

Manchester, England, United Kingdom

New avatar, could you say a few words?

Nov 26 13 08:35 am Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Siddy Pain wrote:
Not sure if you shoot maternity or not but me please smile

Well I don't shoot maternity or any models because I'm a model myself (not a photographer). But as a model, yes I would work with you- I like the lighting, colors, scenery/setting, the flowing dress/material, graceful posing and your features- Nice expression as well.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/131114/23/5285cf31de128_m.jpg

Nov 26 13 12:37 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Vic-Rose wrote:
Have a look?

No. I don't really like the hair, but your facial features and makeup is nice. The leopard print coat looks good on you though hand is sort of awkwardly placed (doesn't really belong) and your expression appears quite blank.

Love:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130807/06/5202516346ba9_m.jpg

Nov 26 13 01:47 pm Link

Photographer

marcovalle

Posts: 42

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

867-5309

Nov 26 13 01:57 pm Link

Model

Angel in Training

Posts: 107

Macon, Georgia, US

Let me know! smile

Nov 26 13 04:46 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Cameron Hair wrote:
how about me? smile

Yes. Lovely facial features and I like the color/style of your hair and the way it frames your face. Expression could be more engaged though

Nov 27 13 08:59 am Link

Model

on hiatus m

Posts: 6505

London, England, United Kingdom

Shoot! smile

Nov 27 13 09:22 am Link

Photographer

San Coctales

Posts: 18

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

Ok ... What do you say

Nov 28 13 12:31 pm Link

Photographer

AshThom

Posts: 45

Melbourne, Victoria, Australia

please?

Nov 28 13 10:42 pm Link

Model

JustinSteven

Posts: 34

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Just updated my port. Feedback would be great! THX

Nov 29 13 01:27 pm Link

Model

Rayne Beaux

Posts: 16

San Diego, California, US

Me?

Nov 30 13 04:13 pm Link

Photographer

The Hologram Kid

Posts: 1218

Southampton, England, United Kingdom

bunny

Nov 30 13 05:24 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Mearle wrote:
Would you dare?

No. It's definitely too erotic for me and a bit too grotesque for me as well... Just too weird for my style. The black and white tones/lighting is nice though.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/081218/20/494b1fda713ff_m.jpg

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31602022 18+

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31587183 18+

Dec 01 13 04:12 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

David E Simmons wrote:
Would you?

I would say yes. I like your overall look- quite handsome, but the angle of your head is maybe not the the most flattering especially the way your gaze is looking. Looking more directly to the camera would be better. Nice bokeh in the background though.

This:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130616/21/51be8f45160c2_m.jpg

Dec 01 13 04:54 pm Link

Photographer

PicturePerfectImage

Posts: 81

Edmonton, Alberta, Canada

Would you?

Dec 01 13 05:02 pm Link

Photographer

Personal Photograph

Posts: 245

Davenport, Iowa, US

I'd be interested to know.

Dec 01 13 05:07 pm Link

Model

Billy Thompson III

Posts: 14

Upper Marlboro, Maryland, US

Sounds good, Let me know what you think!

Dec 01 13 05:33 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Bre Beauty Services wrote:
Interested in your input.

Yes. Lovely soft look - Love the long eyelashes and shape/curve of eyebrows. The lipstick color is also nice.

Nice:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130901/16/5223d39c49954_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130925/14/52435a0489310_m.jpg

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130924/10/5241c7cd466a0_m.jpg

Dec 01 13 05:55 pm Link

Model

winking_wonder

Posts: 5907

New York, New York, US

Em H- Bay Area wrote:

Yes, you have a beautiful look. I like the style and color of your hair, as well as your very clear and blue eyes. Decent posing, nice red nails and lovely makeup. However, expression should be more engaged.

Dec 01 13 06:15 pm Link