Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
I am back
Model
Dae Daniels
Posts: 401
Los Angeles, California, US
ikonas wrote: It is rather a challenging task to identify your "weakest" image as your port is diverse, the photography is good and ALL your images are sensuously captivating with creative element to back them up. Of the 7 rules I posted on page 1 of this thread you are not violating any except part of rule [5] "Open crotch photos". My opinion is that these devalue one's port. I prefer images that leave some to the imagination. Specifically about your butt shot, I don’t think this seems to be your strongest asset (pun intended), or maybe the photographer has not taken the best angle. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/11209287 Here I see some creativity but again think whether you want your port to head in this direction. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30007788 If your main goal is to get lots of comments, you are going to get plenty of them, albeit low quality one-liners from aroused males. I value comments coming from females (who are apt to weigh art and beauty above eroticism) or if the photographer commenting is a competent one. As hard as it is to choose your worst it is difficult to choose the favorite as there are plenty. Here I love your face, expression, amazing curves and the latex https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22718327 Doll-like pose https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20189864 Great light and captivating beauty Please feel free to comment on what I just said as I would love to hear your feedback. I thank you very much for not only the kind words on my work, but also the time and effort put forth in evaluating it. it's much appreciated! I agree with the rules which you had posted on your introductory page, and give them as advice to others when seeking my opinion, which is why I violate few of them . It is one of my biggest pet peves when i'm looking at someones port and they have 4 photos in a row of the same set/wardrobe/pose, etc. It makes me leave their portfolio... I would rather look at a port with 10 varrying shots in it than 30 shots of sequences of the same damn thing. Thus ends my rant! Ha! In saying that, I have considered taking the "butt shot" down, which others have suggested as well... so now my thoughts on it are pretty concrete. Thank you for that. As for the other one (the first shot) i just put that up two days ago, though, have always been on the fence about it as it is quite revealing. I finally broke down, and put it up to see what others thought on the subject, and my instincts were confirmed. I like it because its a creative angle, but alas, i would like it a whole lot more had i been wearing panties, haha! The photographer was beside himself with joy that i put it up. I may actually break his heart when i take it down. I'm sure he'll understand... eventually. lol. On the photos you like. I have quite a lot of photos, and each is different from the next, so i'm always interested to hear which are people's favorites. The "Doll-like pose" is very interesting because a few people have said that they don't like this one, and i should remove it. of course they dont give a reason which is frustrating. Perhaps its because its one of the less "professional" looking shots compared to my others? who knows! the last one picked is a little headshot with alot of photoshop done to it. very sci-fi. most people brush right by it... its cool that you listed it. i'm curious what you think of the "organization" of my portfolio. Someone I respect from the business told me i should organize my portfolio into "photos that look like how I look right now, how i look in wigs, how i look when i do themes (like pinup, etc)". I'm curious what you think of this? I'm not sure what I think of it. thanks again! ~Dae~
Photographer
RistPhoto
Posts: 391
Telluride, Colorado, US
Wow, up to 17 pages. After weeding out a number of photos, I'm curious to get the opinion of someone else about what just doesn't work.
Photographer
ZEPhoto
Posts: 191
Los Angeles, California, US
I'l play. Disclaimer: I took my first DSLR picture in August so don't go too hard on me.
Photographer
Ocidem Graphix
Posts: 2
Cavite, Southern Tagalog, Philippines
Model
Elena Antonia Pappas
Posts: 946
Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa
Elena Antonia Pappas wrote:
Thank you so much for your advice/critique ..done:)
Model
Tima_M
Posts: 12
Budapest, Budapest, Hungary
Please?
Model
Heajee Leah Kim
Posts: 1
Braintree, Massachusetts, US
I have yet to receive constructive criticism on my port. Would value your opinion. Thank you.
Model
C A T H Y
Posts: 5464
Anaheim, California, US
Model
Drew Batchelor
Posts: 11
Orlando, Florida, US
whats my best and worst image? i would love to get ur opinion, thankyou
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
C A T H Y wrote: Go for it.. Hello again C A T H Y I already made recommendations for you on page 2 of this forum https://www.modelmayhem.com/po.php?thre … 362&page=2 You may not have seen my previous replay to you as the proposed image to delete is still up. Or perhaps you have seen my reply in that case would you like another recommendation?
Photographer
RachelReilly
Posts: 1748
Washington, District of Columbia, US
Model
Axioma
Posts: 6822
Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium
Model
Charlotte S
Posts: 99
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Oh this is exactly what I need! My port is in need of a huge clean up and update. Your help is appreciated.
Model
Tanya Trianta
Posts: 67
Limerick, Limerick, Ireland
Hiya, i really need to know opinions on which of mine to delete as im updating my portfolio soon and ive been told which ones to delete (posing/expression), would like to hear what others think, thanks
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Drew Batchelor wrote: whats my best and worst image? i would love to get ur opinion, thankyou I propose deleting the following two images: 1. Just a snapshot with lackluster expression 2. This image seems overphotoshopped plus you already posted a more captivating variation This one is my favorite. Confident expression with attitude, and the photography is superb.
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
GSG Photography Studio wrote: I open..please Hey pal I see some uniqe, captivating images however before I comment you need to help me by removing a bunch of images that violate rule [1] spelled out in my original post - variant images. For example there are several models where you posted their images a dozen of times. Once you reduce your port from your current 83 to less than 50 send me a note here and I will be glad to help.
Model
Drew Batchelor
Posts: 11
Orlando, Florida, US
thanks for ur input!
Retoucher
Mosst
Posts: 208
Miami, Florida, US
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Zombie Eye Photography wrote: I'l play. Disclaimer: I took my first DSLR picture in August so don't go too hard on me. Welcome to MM. You are on a great start with some captivating work. You should delete your first image as the wrinkled sheet in the background makes this captivating image look unprofessional. Or just edit it by blurring the background I love this image for its beauty, art and creativity. Great job!
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Ocidem Graphics wrote: me :-) You have done some great capture of Asian beauty, dude. Even though the model is gorgeous, delete your first picture as I am not a fan of subjects posing against white background which in my mind is quite unnatural. Seems like many photographers here are guilty of same. As a matter of fact, I will make white backgrounds a new rule in my original post. This one is superb. I find it interesting how an image can be this erotic while actually revealing nothing. This is the power of our imagination!
Model
Dae Daniels
Posts: 401
Los Angeles, California, US
Pierre Gussman wrote: Me please. Not doing too badly here as far as portfolios go! First, try to remember rule number 1) on variant images. It may be hard sometimes, but pick the strongest shot and put only that one up. It will make your portfolio look more diverse. This is especially important as your portfolio really begins to grow. For example, I would remove this one: It isnt as striking as your other, and her abdomen looks slightly bloated in this shot, which is a bit distracting. Also, as a general rule... try and keep collages to a minimum. Really try and pick one strong photo. There are exceptions to this rule... but they better all be damn strong shots because collages shrink the photos considerably and make them not as striking to look at in the port compared to the others. I would definitely keep the one like it though, its beautiful. I would also get rid of this shot: It just isnt as strong as your other photos. And perhaps not right now... but as your portfolio grows, this would be the next to go: She looks stiff and awkward, and there are photos with much better composition in your port. Your avatar is lovely, and I adore this shot: Hair, Makeup, composition, wardrobe, pose, the model herself. It all comes together nicely! All in all, not too shabby! ~Dae~
Model
Dae Daniels
Posts: 401
Los Angeles, California, US
_Mini wrote: ok Beautiful portfolio! Really lovely work! There are a handful I would let go of in order to make it look its best! These photos just aren't as strong as the rest and tend to pull it down a bit. This photo is vague... I know why you probably personally like it, however the lighting equipment in the background is a distraction, your face is overexposed compared to the rest of you, and its generally not a strong image compared to say your first row. This should not have been a collage. The photo on the right is stronger... your eye goes directly to it because of the lighting. and the poses are way to similar. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27661048 This does not do you justice. It is not flattering to either your figure or your face. You are a much more beautiful woman than this photo shows. its not incredibly interesting either, so it kind of creates a "lull" in your portfolio as your eye moves along your work. while this is a lovely shot, you do a bunch of figure work on similar sets, and this just isnt as strong or striking as the others. On the flip side, you have a ton of stuff that I simply LOVE. Most of them I can't post here cause of boobies haha! Your first row is stellar, and I think you know what your best shots are! this is an example of a fantastic collage (and others should take note) the variations in pose and setting make it work. The composition, wardobe, hair and MU make this a gorgeous set! just wonderful! sublime figure work! great shot!! pose, colors, composition, everything POPS! again, people should take note! You have a gorgeous set of work! I think if you just get rid of a few things (like i had to do) it would make it perfectly devine! thanks so much for visiting the forum, it was great fun to look through your images! hope this helped! ~Dae~
Model
Dae Daniels
Posts: 401
Los Angeles, California, US
Photographer
ikonas Boston
Posts: 736
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Many thanks to you Dae Daniels for helping out and kudos to you for providing such insightful critique. It's great having you onboard and welcome to the team !
Photographer
Pierre Gussman
Posts: 168
Los Angeles, California, US
Dae Daniels wrote:
Thank you for the critique. You're right. Less collages, more single strong shots. ~ciao!
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