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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
...thinks about your book and profile, that is!! Critique may be me listing your best shot or shot to delete; what may be a model/photographer turn off or on in your bio for readers; observations on other matters visible to the public; etc.
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TrackBelle
Posts: 4497
San Francisco, California, US
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Jay Suder
Posts: 325
Novato, California, US
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Jessica Fan
Posts: 125
Paris, Île-de-France, France
hey! i just had my first photoshoot ever last week and they're posted!! what do you think?
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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
TrackBelle wrote: thoughts on me? I probably have to NOT talk about your lips for paragraphs again this time... LOL You have such a beautiful face! I have a weakness for Asian girls, they're just the best!! I hope you pursue teen/junior catalog. You'd be just perfect for that market.
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John Ujjjjjjj Xghp
Posts: 2298
Ķızıltepa, Navoi, Uzbekistan
Jessica, you're amazing! What can I do to be awesome like you? I appreciate your honesty
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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
Natalie Swift wrote: oh ME Hi Natalie, Hope you're having a healthy pregnancy and that you bounce back from the birth swiftly and jump back into shooting. I think you have a lot to offer such a beautiful state that needs girls to shoot at the waters! Moisturize that belly!
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MVK Photo
Posts: 463
Augusta, Georgia, US
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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
Jay Suder-JSFOTO wrote: OK!!!! All you repeats! I have had you in a critique before.. think I said bleh to the body paint, and bleh to three boobs, But maybe I'm boring!! LOL good glam bud!!
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H B P
Posts: 3592
Las Vegas, Nevada, US
I want to know what you think. If you would be so kind.
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LEPHOTO
Posts: 419
Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates
Let delve into your mind them J Rgds L
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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
RMT Photography wrote: yes please I like this shot: For a more in focus shot, speed up the shutter speed or explore your sports settings to lock in and get the shot. I like the commercial stuff you do.
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Stacy Solar
Posts: 261
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
how bout me?
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amycore
Posts: 419
Los Angeles, California, US
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Annie RS
Posts: 5699
Baltimore, Maryland, US
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jennifer1502
Posts: 8
Adelaide, South Australia, Australia
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Kam Arose
Posts: 6014
Berkeley, California, US
I'd like to know what Jessica Vaugn thinks.
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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
MVK Photography wrote: me please! Hi Molly, Congrats for shooting at such a young age. You have so much time and opportunity to grow. This shot has the right spirit but I'm not sure the shots were the best choices of the series. The bottom shot, she looks rather pensive and overall unphotogenic. Maybe I'm missing the editorial aspect of what you were trying to express here, but chances are if I did, many viewers are also. Try selective liquify in PS to feminize her jaw. Most models have features you want to play down and that is hers.
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Lauren WK
Posts: 1961
Los Angeles, California, US
I'd love to know what you think.
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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
H B P wrote: I want to know what you think. If you would be so kind. Amusing self portrait!! LOL A quick fleeting thought on your bio...Pairing raunchy and fetish could be seen as insulting to some. We get its not your thing but always remember how active a community the fetish/bondage members are on MM and that you may offend without meaning to. You shoot nudes and do you cringe when some model says in her profile "...she doesn't pose nude or anything raunchy like that..."?? To each their own. Just something to think about. I bet in your town you have a prime pick of lovely ladies in such a high trafficked area!!
Makeup Artist
Hannah OBrien
Posts: 334
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
Would love to know your thoughts!
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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
Leo Edwards wrote: Let delve into your mind them J Rgds L Hi Leo! Even though you shoot nudes I sense you are face focused. Be a great headshot shooter and you'll never go out of style. Right now you're all over the place, but, narrow down what you feel works for you and what you lean towards most, nail it several times, then see how to vary it from there!
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Daniel M Martin
Posts: 194
Los Angeles, California, US
Let's hear it.................thanks.
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DonnaToni
Posts: 210
Fort Lauderdale, Florida, US
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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
FootNote Fotography wrote: Go for it. Military? Come home I gather your use of negative space for your studio work is intentional so this is just an idea... I think you'd have stronger shots doing tighter crops on the same shots and taking them to vertical format.
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K E S L E R
Posts: 11574
Los Angeles, California, US
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Tom Boehme
Posts: 187
Vancouver, Washington, US
I would love to know what Jessica thinks :-)
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Jessica Vaugn
Posts: 7328
Los Angeles, California, US
Tyrone Lavigne wrote: What do you think? Like your work! My only critique is not being too fond of low contrast. I think people use it for sort of a flare look or vintage tone, but, just not my preference. That is all it is though, a preference.
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H B P
Posts: 3592
Las Vegas, Nevada, US
Jessica Vaugn wrote:
Amusing self portrait!! LOL A quick fleeting thought on your bio...Pairing raunchy and fetish could be seen as insulting to some. We get its not your thing but always remember how active a community the fetish/bondage members are on MM and that you may offend without meaning to. You shoot nudes and do you cringe when some model says in her profile "...she doesn't pose nude or anything raunchy like that..."?? To each their own. Just something to think about. I bet in your town you have a prime pick of lovely ladies in such a high trafficked area!! You're absolutely right. It is a fairly large community especially in the town I live in. Thanks, I really Appreciate your thoughts. Have a wonderful night.
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Lauren A Farrington
Posts: 999
Sunderland, Massachusetts, US
I'd like a critique, please.
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